Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Thats a new idea to present past as NOTES... I cant wait to see how their meet progressed after their first handshake..? And now in the present Khushi and Arnav met after 5 years when Arnav and Payal are getting married ... and by the way ...is Khushi full time chef at this Tiwari and Sons..and what happened to Gupta Sweets..? Please don't tell me she could not take up higher education because of some financial constraints..
One more small doubt YB.. In the prologue you mentioned that Arnav has last seen Khushi 5 and half yrs ago and also that he being 21 was not excuse for his regrettable behaviour towards her and then that he is almost 28yrs now..the years don't add up right...am I missing anything..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Nice one... But plz don't describe food too much ...have compassion to poor nerves of ppl on diet like ME😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
I am bookmarking this for reading. Your prologue was mysteriously enticing like the food on offer at Tiwari and Sons! Once I get a chance to sit and read this properly I will leave more adequate comment, I promise! Until then good luck with this journey!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wicked!! I m stuck in high school phase forever!! And all the stuff about cream of crop - from oil-free, shiny hair to 'refined' n mature look sound so familiar... U sure these kids are not from my high school :>
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Concept.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.❤️
It's unique and fresh.
I can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like this concept..
Reminds me of my school days..
waiting to read more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Interesting concept..
already eager to read more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
interesting start..please do PM me whenever you update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intriguing story! Loved it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank god, in my school this kind of bitchy things didnt used to happen .
Oh now I lub my school.

I like shashi and garima , every parent want best for their children,

Lav seems nice atleast till now ,
Arnav ...waiting for more on him
Payal didnt changed even today , even arnav is thinking he did bad when he was 21 yr old , but payal even not now.strange .

Glad you will give regular updates , waiting for it :)

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