Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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mrin0709

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

very very interesting..

loved it.. please accept my buddy request.

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nee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

nice story...loved it...i believe arnav did somethg really mean thts y khushi refuse to recognise him

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

What amazing parents, lucky I'd say. Not many are given such opportunities.

So Khushi is the odd one out.

Looking forward to read how she manages to make her mark amongst this crowd.

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Russell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

so they have a bad past for which Arnav feels sorry for... and khushi dosent even remembers him!! now that should be a big blow on Arnav's ego...
very interesting...

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bablubli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

The title was unusual & attractive and I couldn't resist peeking in...and I so got on to the prologue...and am loving it already!!

Arnav & Payal - a pair?! Interesting!!

Payal - a snooty rich one...waah!!

Payal looking down on Khushi...huh, what happened to the loving big sister namesake from IPK...but most interesting!!!

Arnav being an A.h... with Khushi - totally him...

Khushi Kumari Gupta making jalebies - expected behaviour

But Madame KKG refusing to recognize Arnav - now...you've got me hooked as a reader completely...

Couldn't resist leaving a comment - yet to read the first chapter..

Good job for a first time YB - please continue writing. Looking forward to much more from you 😊

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sankadevi25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Great story! I love the Chandni Chowk setting--its so quaint! Are Arnav and Payal dating? Khushi seems super adorbs as well. Also, has she really forgotten Arnav--amnesia maybe? She has gone to a super posh high school, and I'm assuming her parents sent her here to elevate them out of their situation in Chandni Chowk with a swanky job maybe? Or did she just let life go back to normal after?

Also, what's with Shyam? Don't like him already--leaving his family! Very bad.

La, as always is super cute! Can't wait to see some more, I'm so glad you'll be posting frequently!

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anjs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

oh, so this isnt a chapter ??

anyways...found it interesting...just add an index on the front page...will help readers...

also, if u can update the heading everytime you update the chapter...it will inform us to read...

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SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Aww poor Khushi. But if she was that good a runner, what is she doing at Tewari and sons? Why isn't she representing India in some int'l sports meets? Wouldn't be surprised if she already has, and is now relegated to this after having won a few medals. In India, sports do not guarantee a good life unless you're in cricket.

Lavanya is here. And so is Akash. I think they're going to be Khushi's friends hereon. Payal sounds like the snooty girl everyone knew in school.

You made a really good point about 15 yr olds looking like models, they really do. I don't know if it's a Delhi thing, or it's something all around the world. But I looked like a lost kid when I was 15, and you see 15 yr old girls now, they could be on the over of Vogue.

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: anjs
oh, so this isnt a chapter ??
anyways...found it interesting...just add an index on the front page...will help readers...

also, if u can update the heading everytime you update the chapter...it will inform us to read...

I had updated the first page, perhaps it wasn't clear. I will keep in mind what you say henceforth 😊