Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Loved it...

Waiting to read more...

Nice to see Khushi has a friend in Lavanya and a silent speculator who is yet to decide on her.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Loved the note from the past. Nice to know that Arnav wasn't all jerk to her even if he didn't quite defend her. Loved La.

I am looking forward to Arnav meeting a twenty something Khushi who is likely to give back as good as she gets!

Would be lovely if you post frequently. Half the time, the essence and the feel of the story is lost when there are huge gaps between updates, much as I appreciate there is an asli duniya out there.

Which is probably why I have never attempted to write tho I have been tempted. I don't want to have huge gaps where I cant write, because forget the readers, as a writer I would loose track of the story 😛

So far its wonderfully written, lovely!

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anjs

@anjs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

I had updated the first page, perhaps it wasn't clear. I will keep in mind what you say henceforth 😊

my bad...i missed it...update soon, wanna see how arnav reacts to khushi not recognizing him

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Wow so khushi got into a prestigious school due to her running.

Can't wait to know what's Arnav's reaction for khushi not recognizing him.

Shyam going off to Mumbai was

And payal seems to be a snob.

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Whiterainbow

@Whiterainbow

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

This is really interesting and quite refreshing

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Whiterainbow

@Whiterainbow

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Just read notes from the past, you my dear YellowBoots are a hit...

Already waiting for more

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bablubli

@bablubli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Hi YB...read the first note just now.

Khushi's family circumstances are really difficult and mirrors the real life circumstances of so many lower middle class families. As is often the case, children bear the brunt of parents' expectations, although they are not really unreasonable considering they want better lives for their offsprings..

So, Arnav was quite reasonable & unoffensive towards Khushi initially and Payal was always so. Lavanya is fortunately pally with Khushi and hopefully will stay that way. Completely agree that sports is a great leveller..

Arnav's thoughts indicate that there is a history between him & Khushi...the next chapters should reveal what went wrong & why he was so nasty towards her that she does not even want to acknowledge him now.

Good writing YB...will look forward to the next chapters.

Thank you!

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hey,

This is a new and totally fresh perspective,

even in the serial,

Delhi wasn't explored much,

hope your's would have Delhi feature much more prominently!!

Can't wait to see what actually Arnav did that,

Khushi doesn't remember him or is atleast avoiding him!!

Cause the note 1 tells she was impressed by him earlier,

so in present scenario, what's the problem needs to be explored!!!

Please PM me the next time you update,

this should not be missed!!!

Great Effort!!

Take Care!!

😊

Edited by loves_aishu - 10 years ago

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Nice story. Your narration style is captivating. Wondering what's between Payal & Arnav. Hope its not romantic. Lavanya seems to be a nice girl. Where did Shyam disappear to?
Eager to read more. Please update soon.