Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yellow boots ji... I have been a silent member of this story since the start and I couldn't resist but post this.You are an amazing writer...and have a unique style.And your story is catching too. Its a pleasure to read your story with my favourite couple as leads...the simplicity of the characters is making it more realistic...if its your first venture I would love to read many more from you...all the best for that...and if its not kindly give me the link for the previous works...keep up the good work:).
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Posted: 10 years ago
For some reasons I'm not able to like your posts...so I'm officially Like ing it here:).
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Posted: 10 years ago
I may be in the minority but I think I quite like Payal. So she is elitist and class conscious, 'muhphat' and not the most tolerant. Sounds a whole lot like the original ASR to me. I don't like these double standards we have. 😆
So you GO, Payaliya! Do what you want and keep the men firmly under your thumb! No one gets any prizes for being nice in this world. I'm with Arnav in that I like her honesty. She may not be the easiest person to get along with but at least she doesn't try to ingratiate herself with everyone and go bitch about them later.

And I LOVE Anjali. She is sweet and hilarious and as someone who suffers from far too much indecision herself and hates random upstarts who call themselves 'Bengali Sweets' too, I sympathise rather strongly with her.

Tut tut, Arnav, your obsession is getting a leetle out of hand which leads me to think that there had been some serious sparks in college which immaturity and snootiness had prematurely doused. We don't want Khushi for ourselves but we also don't quite like the idea of Khushi with Akash, oh no.

Aman and Khushi's nafrat-mohabbat saga, you say? Bring it on! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am such an avid reader of Arhi ff that I should just get some kind of award for simply reading and having an eye for good stories ..lol. After reading this prologue...I had to comment and say I am very excited because this is my kind of story. You have style!!!

Be back with more after I read the rest!!

I am so happy to have found an Arhi story to 'crush' over. The past is very intriguing and the school scenario is so realistic. We either were these people or knew someone who was just like these people in school. The misfit, the clique and the ones stuck between being nice and obeying unwritten laws of school cliques and class boundaries.

The past is intriguing. Arnav has a very we'll ordered life and something tells me it is going to be turned upside down.

I am dying to find out what Khushi thinks...why did she refuse to even recognize him...
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Posted: 10 years ago
You had me at motichoor ladoo 😛
Nice story. Interesting twist on the characters of Payal, Anjali and Akash - I like that. Love the Arnav-Khushi school days bit.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving the story and the flashbacks ... 😛
will be back with more ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

Lmao!!! Anjali Bose sounds like half of the people I know and also some of my neighbours who have been chanting along those Buddhist chants for years :D
Failed cupcake business!! 😆 😆
And it's so true isn't it... Bengali sweets has nothing Bengali about it. Ask me... I'm a bong. And I think I like mr. Bose too. What a fun character! Wonder what he thinks about this puja business at his place :p
And economics from UK but not from LSE? :O

God, I loove love stories where there's so much Delhi flavour! Like it doesn't even have to have a story line, just keep feeding me comedy about the city and its people :D

On a serious note, I love your writing. I read the last chapter twice. Sorry I didnt get a chance to comment...I was about to comment tonight but saw an update :D
Btw I have to say... I love how you are dealing with the school-time scenes. You were so spot on about how kids behave in groups vs. When they are on their own.
Another thing which got me wondering is... How most kids from snobbish schools turn out so different when they grow up especially when they stay back in Delhi and have to attend college with kids from varied backgrounds. I mean look at Arnav now... Wanting to go to Chandni chowk, not because it's so cool to visit Chandni chowk on a food safari or photo or heritage walk but because he wants to find out why khushi kumari Gupta refused to recognise him and order 500 motichoor ke ladoo for his sister's puja. Who would have thought really...

And and OMG omg! Since past few days I've been craving (really!!) for motichoor ke ladoo. And now you mentioned 500 of those... Dayum. 😆


If you are going to Tewaris (the real one)😆for their motichoor laddoos, please parcel some to me too, Ana! The craving for laddoos is out of bounds now!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aaj sunday tha, i mean hai 😆
Update ki koi sambhavana hai kya? ...not complaining, just asking 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey folks, I know I had said that I would post the next part on Sunday, but I won't be doing so now because of a spontaneous i-am-too-homesick trip back home. Back to base tomorrow (Monday) noon and will post after. Really sorry about that.
PS: Posting this from my phone and the font does look too tiny. If it is, my apologies :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
do u have an index?
are you working on any other story?
is it you first story?

because girl you are so amazing that i cant help but want to read more of what you write on arhi.

you took IPKKND and its characters and changed just everything about it.
have read till chapter one but i am so excited about how good your work is that thought to make a comment before reading all the chapters.


i so so hope that you continue this piece and not leave us hanging in the middle but taking a break or giving up on this story because girl the 3 parts are good enough for me to get hooked and i really do not wish to be disappointed.

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