Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Again a very lovely chapter

You know I don't what I want more to read..the past or the present..I crave for both actually..

Like Arnav even I am curious to know as to why is Khushi refusing to recognize him..

I like the way you gave us an insight into Anjali's life...sad that her mother is not willing to accept her marriage wholeheartedly..

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Asma

@asmanichatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

First of, I knew Aman and Khushi would be a thing. I mean, how could they not?! 😆

Now this update has revealed a lot of things. Very nice to see present day Khushi make a fleeting appearance. So Tewari & Sons is in danger of closing down and looks like the prodigal son Shyam has made a return sometime between his failed Bollywood dreams and now. I knew he would resurface. What are Arnav and Khushi without Shyam and some good natured meddling from Anjali 😛

Speaking of which, Anjali is truly sweet. She was nice back then and is really sweet even now. Also, Jun and Jhali, ubercute.

The bonding between the siblings was very nice. Arnav is more of a conformist, while Anjali the one with a rebellious streak. This is an interesting twist from the original characterisation. But looks like they didn't have a particularly happy childhood. But thankfully not so unhappy that they have a tragic backstory or something. Arnav and Anjali seem to be pretty well-adjusted in present time, albeit with some mommy issues (but then who doesn't have that!) Poonam Raizada sounds totally interesting though. Waiting for Mrs Raizada to meet Khushi. Basically waiting for everyone to meet Khushi.

Since we are all caught up with the story, can you please post the next one on Saturday itself?

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niharika111

@niharika111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Yay you updated! And the mystery continues...love the flow! :)

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Delightful read!!

Came upon it accidentally!!

Love your writing and especially enjoyed the past about school, college, snobs and sports ...been there done that!!!

Twist on characters here and am looking forward to the brat pack reunion and Khushi revelation.

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

now is that Arnav in front of her..? I wonder why is Arnav so keen in making her accept that she remembers him..? is it just his hurt EGO or something more..? onething is sure..she is not married..then why TIwari and Son's and not Guptha sweets..?

What made Anjali think that Akash would marry Khushi..? Arnav doesn't seem disturbed by that thought..?

Looks like Arnav's mom is very snobbish...but I love Anjali's charecter..

Payal and Anjali are so don't approve of each other and again shows how Payal is quick in putting people into a box category and never able to see shades in them.. I guess she and Arnav's mom would form perfect team...

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Arnav - Anjali share great bonding . Anjali has become a poojali after her failed attempts in establishing & flourishing 😉 Thanks to Poojali's Satyanarayan pooja which gave a chance to Arnav to order mootichoor laddus & know why khushi did not recognise him . Aarav is khushi's nephew did Shyam resurface & burden his family with Aarav and his wife ? Tewari&sons is struggling to survive .

Arnav - Anjali's mother seems to be typical high class snob .Poonam Raizada has never visited her daughter's home in 5 years , well that is something . Payal is not the right match for Arnav (you know why right?) Anjali thought khushi will marry Akash , what gave her that idea ? Aman & khushi love - hate saga in future updates & how does Arnav fit in the equation ?

Waiting for Arnav - khushi's face off

There are too many questions than my comment 😆

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Amazing chapter i must say.
I am in love with anjali's character.she is awesome.
She and payal are not fond of each other as expected lol.even mrs raizada is also like payal.
I am feeling bad for anjali,her parents never visited her home.that's so rude.
Why anjali thought akash will marry khushi?even la said the same,isn't it?
Seems like arnav's ego is badly hurt.anyways i am happy that khushi refused to remember him and payal.serves right.
Who is arav?is he shyam's son? Why then tiwari and sons?
Only khushi knows.
Waiting for next chapter.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Poonam Raizada sounds like a lot of matriarchs I've come across! They can cut you down with such finesse that you won't even realise whats hit you. Anjali is right - Poonam and Payal under the same roof ... uncomfortable wouldn't begin to describe the atmosphere.

Loved the equation between Anjali and Arnav.

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