Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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@GhalibIsDead

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

You update quickly and the chapters are pretty long. That is not a complaint, it is very satisfying reading.

I love the alternating past and present narrative style you are using. It is nice to see how the characters have evolved.

Anjali was always nice and I have no doubt now that she will play a big part in the Arnav and Khushi endgame. She seems to have a lot of ideas up her sleeve, from the poverty card to the mountain Mohammad machinations. But must give it to Arnav, he is a quick learner. And aha! Finally some insight into adult Khushi. The layers are peeling away slowly, loving it!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Hmm.. this gets more and more interesting... looking forward to some notes from the past :-)

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_StarryNights

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

YB... awesome story yaar.
Love to read more about it..
Toh aap pm nahin karoge 😭 . I'll have to stalk this thread then 😆

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SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Oh nice to see you, Mr Arnav Shaatir-dimaag Raizada. That was a very clever way of asking her name, without sounding creepy. All the gents, take notes.

So why does Khushi not remember him? And that sly little kid is Shyam's kid? But why is Gupta sweets suddenly called Tewari and Sons? Why is Khushi working in a halwaai shop, presumably looking after family business? Where is Shyam? Why did she fall out with Lavanya and Akaash? Although I understood that she's wary around them in school, after the too-many-secrets-revealed day.

Aman and Khushi have a nafrat-mohabbat relationship? Say what???

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shruti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

I m seriously not liking this payal.
anjali interseting character.
the ph convo. Ha ha nice.is tiwari n sons facing some financial prb?
And ehy khushi is working there and whose shop is tgat?

I know its too early to ask.but how many chapetrs are there? There is so muxh things to know.amd i am waiting impatiently.

As a arnav khushi hamesha fan. I wonder how will they fell in love here

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1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

You make my mouth water with all these wonderful mithai shops and the yummy motichoor laddoos.

Not fair!

About PMs, don't worry.

We all come running as soon as you update.

So that shouldn't be a problrm!😆

Payal and Poonzm Raizada under one roof.

I'd love to read a situation where both are together.

Just to have a glimpse at their love story.😆

Anjali seems hzppy with her Jun!

This reminds me, he calls her 'Jhali', really! 😆

Why are the parents such snobs?

Can't they visit her place once just to make her happy?

Shyam seems to be no more around, since his son lives with Khushi.

I am now waiting for the next update for Khushi's reaction to Arnav.

For they will surely meet, won't they?

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kamtokdin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Somehow liking this crazy n irreverent anjali

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Well cant wait to see how life brought them here...so much to know about lavanya kushi arnav kushi...and u say aman kushi...looking forward to read more in your wonderful story...

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amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

one thing is for sure ... since her name is still Khushi Kumari Gupta then the assumption made Payal that Khushi is married to Tewari with two kids is false ...quite a relieving factor 😉 😆

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shr1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Thank God I came here, at right time :) You have so aptly described Payal, Poonam, the Raizada residence, I can visualise these snobbish people. Really, you make characters and their personalities come alive. I was moved to read the hard times teenager Khushi had and how she coped with it. Is Arav son of Khushi's run away brother? This is so engaging! I'm looking forward to read further :)