Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Simply superb... I love it

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anjs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

ur story is so unique...n quite real...loved this note note no 2

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nagina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

It was beautiful update

Loved it

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barunaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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wow! great insight into their lives...truly amazing to see the difference between their lives...wonder what more is in store for Khushi!

Also, why do I have a feeling that the present Khushi is not what she actually seems...that she is not 'just' a halwai and a lot more! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Asma

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ah, interesting, interesting.

So, am I reading right in assuming that Lavanya saw Khushi as her project of sorts and began to resent her when she bloomed on her own. Is known to happen!

And Aakash is maybe not as sweet as we had put him down to be. Or is he?

Arnav, hmm, he does seem nice enough, but Khushi's reluctance to go into his house when there was no adult in the house is also understandable actually. As was Arnav's reaction to be pissed off with her.

Payal is cocky 😆 It is nice to see she get her due at least in fanfic.

And it is brilliant insight that kids tend to be much nicer one-on-one, but can turn completely obnoxious when they are with their entourage.

So Khushi lost her Jalebiginity at age fifteen. Sweet.

I think she needs to be open minded about Aman. It might well be the beginning of a beautiful friendship!

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anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Awesome update!!!! Loved it!!!!

That was a nice glimpse into Arshi's past cannot wait to read why the rift started and why Khushi became a halwai instead of doing something else as she had so much promise!!!!

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anisharoy1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

I loved it... so refreshing and different. .. pls add me..

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Whiterainbow

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

I love how the story is progressing,khushi is still trying.to figure out the people she thought she knew...love how she perceives things, the stark difference in her world and the new-onite world has been written beautifully

You my dear are a DELHIITE. Period.