Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

wow ... this is definitely one good SS I would not want to miss reading (thanx to Shree - Shree10)

through Khushi's eyes the whole world can be brought to be assessed for their reality ...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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MDTharun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Very interesting plot

Arnav & Khushi are poles apart . The reality life of a young teen girl in posh Schools & Colleges . Khushi is an enigma , she knows her flaws and strengths . Akash , Lavanya are not what they portray themselves as . Khushi has battled war in everyday life . NK is a interesting character . Arnav is regretting his behaviour in the past . Did he hurt khushi like others ?

why did she refuse to recognise Arnav ?

Too many questions , I know , I am just hooked to the plot .

Please do add me in your list

Would love to read this wonderful work

I have sent a buddy request too

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

So.. where is Aman now..?

Khushi was so confident when she entered the school...but I really admire her guts and determination...I wonder if it was her in general or it came to her with the sportsmanship...

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Forgot to ask is it a weekly update / alternate days , you know so that I will stalk 😊

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kutkut12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

very nice story... you so beautifully put forward the feelings of a misfit in high class society. Sometimes rich people feel that all poor or middle class people are gold diggers and want to befriend rich. They do not understand that though some people might be gold diggers others might actually be uncomfortable around rich people. Many middle class people would like to mingle only with the people of their own stature because they don't care for the ways of very rich.

And Khushi is definitely one of such people.

Edited by kutkut12 - 10 years ago

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Wow it is so cool and different story!
I loved it.
Continue soon. Plz add me in your pm list.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

I love the story. its adorable and heartbreaking in parts to see Khushi struggle to make her place in New Ones.

It takes me back to my school days and realize, that is true. Children can be very brutal! we just did not realize it when we were in school.

Waiting to read the next part.

I know this is one story where I am really going to wait for Arnav to fall in love with Khushi - somehow it seems just right that he should. Not because its Arnav and Khushi but because its Khushi from Chandni Chowk whom no one seemed to want to truly befriend because she is from Chandni Chowk.

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Arshi67
You've captured the demographic of a typical elite class so well. That snobbish arrogant group mentality that is so prevalent. I love the way you've written Khushi. The way she realises, accepts and then shrugs off the differences between her and them.
And may I just say that long may she continue observing Arnav's haircut. I'm just happy he gets one!

I wanted to say the same thing, Ruchi.

Hope Arnav gets his hair cut from time to time.😉

Edited by 1chilly - 10 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

I am in love with this story!

You made me crave the jalebis from Chandni Chowk.

Wish I could fly to Delhi and get some.

And please continue using the name Tewari & Sons.😃

The fact that it exists makes it more real.

The whole bunch of snobbish kids reminds me of my own childhood.

Aren't almost all kids from the so called Public schools in India snobs?

Haven't we all looked down upon those who speak english with a hindi accent?

Such a realistic depiction of school life.

Lavanya changed colours as soon as she lost in sports to Khushi.

What a fairweather friend!

Will she ever manage to find a real friend in this school?

Wonder what her relationship with Aman will be!

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Lovely update. More new characters.. Anjali seems to be very nice. Wonder how Aman is.
I liked the story, and the way you are telling it too. Nothing less, nothing more. Its just concise.
Your story & story telling has made me a stalker. I keep checking for updates, and you didn't disappoint me. Thanks for the update writerji.

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