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Originally posted by: Param_love

Lovely n interesting concept...😳

Do continue ASAP..😃

Originally posted by: katheriene

Iinteresting concept😉

Update soon

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Yr the storyline is very different intrstng

Both wants to take revenge from each other

They hte each other to the core
Now it will be intrstng to see how their hatred turns into luv

Updte soon wtng

Keep smiling

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

its very very nice and awesome concept

i really love it. i read it ff in sandhir cafe

but firsa ekbar parnasa koi problem nahi hai.

love it. update asap.😃

Originally posted by: mahdin

unique idea :-)

Originally posted by: anu_anya

awesome concept
thanks for pm
continue asap :))

Originally posted by: shalbi

the prologue is very interesting... Looking forward to read it...

do update soon and do p.m me

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

amazing concept
would like to read more.. :)

Khushi

Originally posted by: saddahqrocks

wow...

storyline looks interesting! u know, something like, 'thoda pyaar thoda magic'...its a movie...in it, one person kills the parents of 14 kids, ie he kills total 14 ppl...and they r sent 2 him. he is their guardian...both r trying 2 take revenge frm d other...

so yeah its really interesting and continue asap!

love,

noopur

Originally posted by: keertikitty

m waiting for ti interesting cs

😉