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shalbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

the prologue is very interesting... Looking forward to read it...

do update soon and do p.m me

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Shivanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

amazing concept
would like to read more.. :)

Khushi

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Sanyukta

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow...

storyline looks interesting! u know, something like, 'thoda pyaar thoda magic'...its a movie...in it, one person kills the parents of 14 kids, ie he kills total 14 ppl...and they r sent 2 him. he is their guardian...both r trying 2 take revenge frm d other...

so yeah its really interesting and continue asap!

love,

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Dhruvi Mehta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Its lovely

M looking frwd

Update soon

Love

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keerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

m waiting for ti interesting cs

😉

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Zumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

The concept- Seems Dark
The charecter sketch- seems negative
The prolugue- seems TOO BLACK..
Indeed it was all DARK vala DARK..
#ZUMI ^_^

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Namrata91

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Posted: 10 years ago

Its very very nccc dr ...
Randhir as a caretaker... Intresting very intresting ...
Do continue
Nd update soon ...
Jldi jldi

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-Mrdodokk-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey dear Amazing story line...
Just loved it...
Plz conti soon...

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome
Sounds interesting
Update soon
Thanks for the PM

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Its an awesome story dear ! When will you update ?

I would defo read it ! :)))

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