~ArHi FF~#1~The Hands of Time~

First Previous

Page

109

Next Last

Frequent Posters

kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#831

Oh my their first encounter!!
I don't know how I thought their first encounter as adults would be but this certainly is not it. In a good way, I mean. I guess I'm surprised that Khushi is into mountain biking. It's probably one of those things that she and Anjali had talked about doing together as kids.
Loved their little conversation that started as bickering and ended with mild flirting :)
Why was Khushi so reluctant initially to take Arnav's help.. Is she just being extra cautious?
So the boy who was cycling in the prologue is definitely Arnav.
Where are Arnav's mom and akki?

Quote

siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#832

I just know it... I am going to be as addicted to this new story of yours as I was to your old one.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#833

Wow... What a vivid description of the sunrise or the mountain peak with Arnav biking his way through the untouched glory of nature, to Khushi's fall. It was as if i was seeing it all happening I front of me.

Hmmm... So Arnav is the one taking the responsibility of of the tea estate as well as the current problem along with binding and keeping the family together. So how come his grandmother not worry about him.

Arnav with long hair and that to ringlets..😲

Surely must have put Khushi off at first and on her guards but there are other reasons for her behavior and completely understandable at that. But I love there convo about Arnav checking on Khushi's injuries from the fall, and Khushi guarded response.

They both are perceptive and good observers, along with the love for nature. And there attraction to each other added to the list.

But and a big butt it is now that Khushi knows who her helper was or is she is not going to call him, I guess. And since Arnav left this on her will he let it go. Or being himself pursue his attraction.

Whatever it is I know they will meet soon again.

And as you said and I completely agree with you let the story reveal itself on it's own pace and they way you wanna tell it to us. Will not ask about Anjali anymore coz you know how to tell us you did it so well with DND.

So taking my cozy seat and popcorns I'm waiting for the next update.

Quote

SAM

@kkyajo

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#834

Awesome update...loved it 👏

Quote

bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#835

You are good Sandhya!!

Feel like I was a tourist in this part of India. Googled all the locations for a visual feel.

Loving the story and am enjoying the ride.

Khushi and Arnav meet in the least expected way and with an impact neither would have vaguely dreamt of.

Let's see who calls on whom. 😉

Love the way you spin a story.

Quote

ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#836

Fantastic update. 👏 Loved the interaction between Arnav and his grand mom and how she gave Arnav the strength to continue doing what's right for the company and assured him that things will turn around. Beautiful first meeting between Arnav and khushi, could visualize the trail. Seriously you write beautifully, love the details.😳 Loved reading about the attraction between Arnav and khushi and that arnav clearly stated his interest in her and gave the number. Poor khushi, now that she knows his name wonder what will happen next; will she call him ?? Really looking forward to the next update.

Quote

Auchi

@Auchi

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#837

Thanks for the PM & Must say long & lovely update. wow they met in a dramatic way i must say. Arnav helping her out so cute & his way of giving his call no. hai hai hai mardala. well it seem their love is doom before it start it seem & i doubt Kushi will call him after she know its Arnav now. Any ways keep my presumption apart. will wait for ur update dear.

Quote

vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#838

gosh!!!...superb part!!...

loved the bonding between senior lady raizada n arnav!!...

so arnav handles all d business stuff!!...wonder wat about his brother!!!...

character of sumitra raizada is awesome!!!...

meeting of arshi was totally hatke!!!...😉

loved it...

enjoyed the convo between them!!!...

n then!!!...:(( shw knew who he is!!!!...

i think she wont call him now tht she knws who he is!!!!...

cant wait for d nxt part...

thnx for the pm...:)

Quote

sivatharshini

@sivatharshini

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#839

Fantastic update !! Love it , it's getting more and more interesting , can't wait to read more .

Edited by sivatharshini - 10 years ago

Quote

lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#840

awesome awesome and simply awesome :)...loved it to the core...the way u have started it so poetic ..and then with arnav and grandma both enjoying company of each other...they sharing ,its beautiful :)...loved the way u have created the whole ambiance before arnav khushi met :)...beautiful writing sandhiya...very gripping...all his questions and her replies...that was very interesting...and different thing which i found in this story ...here arnav is not difficult in talking...:)...he indeed smiling and chit chatting...thats a cool thing :)...awee poor khushi after knowing his name...she already lost the battle...before giving it a start or try ,for khushi its over already ...excellent chap...enjoyed it loads...:)

Quote

1 ... 82 83 84 85 86 ... 109

~ArHi FF~#1~The Hands of Time~ - Page 84

Related Topics

Explore Topics