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priya goyal

@cutesforum_02

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Very interesting story!! .. Loving the concept.. The guy in train must be Arnav, Anjali's elder! (Seems like ;-) )

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#612

wow what a superb update!👏

I didn't realize that there would be a time gap this soon, this has increase suspense which is great.
i feel pity for everyone especially for khushi. Anjali left a huge vacuum in every one life, i felt it in khushi's family.

Poor khushi, she is guilt ridden and suffering from panic attacks.

Shashi is right that she see Anjali in every victim. She is punishing herself that she even fail to realize that other are suffering too with her , especially her family, for them khushi is their happiness and currently they are unhappy because khushi is. That is so overwhelming.

I am eager to know about Anjali family and how are they living without the presence of their only daughter.

I think Anjali is alive and it would be very intresting when you reveal her again and what had happen with her back at the dewali night, i can't wait to read that chapter.

I love the way you describe the train journey and other beautiful landescape. I feel like travelling with khushi.

Thanks for the PM

Update next chapter soon

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#613

What an absolutely beautiful start to the story. l love thrillers, especially the kind that seem hopeless to solve in the beginning. I hope Anjali is still alive. And well, hopefully. Child abduction is horrific and sadly quite rampant. The Raos have made quite a life for themselves, which was wonderful to read. Shashi is right, Khushi has literally taken up a crusade. But there need to be people like her in our society, or no one would ever get justice. I'm guessing the savvy guy checking her out is probably Arnav? Well, I guess there's not going to be much attraction going on there once he knows she is Khushi Rao, the girl who took Anjali to play and turned up without her. I wonder what the situation in the Raizada household is now, it must be terrible.

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Since Anjali's body was never found, she might be still alive and who knows they might meet again. The Rao's life has changed for the better and yet they themselves remain the same at heart. Even though I feel for Khushi, I can only agree with Shashi and Garima's frustrations. And shashi is right, khushi has taken on things with sky-high and unreal expectations and definitely tries to find anjali in every victim.
Hope this trip brings her disturbed spirit some peace.

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#615

An extremely emotional update in opinion...to live 20 years of your life on "what ifs"...it's unimaginable...i wonder if the guy observing khushi is arnav...i wonder...all I can say is I m so ready for the Rollercoaster ride Hot has in store for us...and I so happy to read your work again...really missed DND a lot...wishing u all the best for this story...i m looking forward to it...take your time in updating the chapter we know how life can get...we will wait as long as we know u will update in the near future...ohh ya...loved chapter 1!!! :)

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Lovely update!

the stranger on train who is observing m sure its Arnav!! but who knows love all your twists in your storyline.

thanks for pm

btw have you moved DND to a blog? If yes please provide a link to the blog

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Armela

@Armela

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#617

A very intriguing start to what seems like a unique plot

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#618

Superb start
Khushi is hunted by Anjali's disappearance
Was the stranger Arnav???
Can't wait to read more

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#619

This was awesome update sandhya,

You put Khushi's pain so well in this chapter. She is living in hell for 20 years, who could have thought that one innocent decision of helping some children's that day will cost these two girls so pain, that nightmare is still haunting Khushi.

Don't know what happen to anjali but my mind scares me of thinking several possibility. And Khushi is also leaving that hell which anjali might have gone through. She even chooses profession which could help forget some of her guilt, that she is the one who took anjali even when her mother grounded her not to go out.

But you can't change what is written in our destiny.

I am curious to know why Khushi moved to another city, what might have happen that day? But I think this mystery is not going to be solved that soon. Let us see what happen next.

Thanks for superb update dear. I was lost in this story through out while reading.

And thanks for pm too.