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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Beautifully written Sandhya, Promises to be a really exciting journey and I'm looking forward to it in all excitement:) Such an intriguing story and makes it that much more enjoyable when written by you. Thank you

Shyamala.

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#592

Ok so we do have a leap. And Anjali was really abducted. :( and never found. What happened after that? Was Khushi blamed and accused for Anju's disappearance? Were the Raos chased from there or did they leave of their own accord?

That admirer was definitely Arnav!

How painful it is to try and enjoy something for two people. You want to enjoy it so that you live up to a promise, on the other hand you feel guilty for enjoying it alone. Akash will be there too na. I can't wait to read about what happens when she reaches there. Already Anju's mother seemed to have not liked Khushi, wonder how she is gonna react now. And Arnav, how is he gonna react?

One small doubt. Akash was supposed to join the girls that day right? That was the deal, if I remember correctly. Then how come he never went? I'l go back and read that part when I get some free time again to make sure if I'm right.

In the end is she actually having a panic attack?

So the title "Hands of time" is all about how time plays with people's lives, I guess. Loved how you subtly mentioned about the time ticking.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#593

The first chapter starts with 20 years leap which means we have to wait to know what has happened to Her Highness Khushi is in depression for loosing her best friend in the woods . Khushi is guilty for driving Anjali to danger .

Bangalore is khushi's home town & the city is described exactly how it is now . (my hometown ,namma Bengaluru ) Glad that Rao's are leading a decent life who initially were serving Her Highness family .

A stranger in the train who is scrutinising khushi & he is sporting moustache too ( I would love to see how Arnav looks with moustache ) , still strangers identity is not revealed .

Khushi is travelling to kotagiri against her parents wish , coz she wants to fulfil all the promises both Friends vowed to do years back .

This journey surely will give answers to khushi's stress .

Nice

loving it

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#594

Thank u for pm...

WOW 20 years leap...

The update is full of mystery & fabulous...

This Khushi is totally different from other Arshi stories...

Please update quickly...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#595

poor girl has lived thru hell. her father understands her very well.

but she has the right idea. can't carry the past to the future. gotta deal with it

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Brilliant update will come again to comment .

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#597

Amazing...20 years leap!!!!

Was the guy staring at Khushi, Arnav!!!

Good start...

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#598

awesome update...

poor khushi is still suffering... and and was it arnav in the bus? :)

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#599

absolutely loving the story...its always a pleasure to read your work...looking forward to reading more

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#600

That was a superb update... KHushi Till now affected by her childhood mishap.. who is the admirer by the way?? Eagerly waiting 2 know... Overall an awesome and intriguing chapter...

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