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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Now khushi wants to live all the dreams which anjali n her have dreamt together.
Now I really want to know as to what happened that night.
Anjali was abducted bt what else happened.
Is anjali dead or she is ill, in some kind of trauma???
N how will arnav come into picture??
Will be waiting for all these answers n more bt I know ,all these would take time n most probably all would be answered till the end of the story.
Bt I am already in love with story , so I would go along this journey with u n khushi, arnav n anjali.

Just wishing that somehow anjali is alive.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update dear...loved the way u have written the chap..
uff loved the way u have shown khushi panic state ...how she is using band to bring her out of it...very painful...loved the way u have describe her attire through a stranger eyes :)...as he having moustache so can't say who he is :)..will not try to guess about him..

shashi gaima and khushi enjoying good family time and earning family thats very cool...loved the way u have shown khushi's thought process about victim verses judiciary system these days...the criminal;s and the power of power/money...very painful ...but u have written it classic..

loved the way sash one line said it all...she is seeing anjali in every victim...fab dear...

loved the way u have written about nature,train and hot cup of tea ...she missing anjali in this all...so she going to grandmother place...infact she is going true sense down the memory lane here :)... fab sandhiya u have written it excellent...loved it looking forward :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
i have a feeling that stranger admriring khushi was arnav but then y would a prince be on a coach?? lol

i just loved the first chapter, it just breaks my heart to see that khushi still misses her young friends and is still tormented by the thought she is lost for ever. was anjali raped? n thats y khushi is on a mission to make sure that every culprit get his dues? i think it would be one of the major reasons but somethings whether its in asian, european countries oa america will take years to change and i hope im not hurting anyone by saying that the legal system is one of them. some rich and spoitl people think they can buy anything with their money, whether its the lost life of an innocent or the honour of an innocent girl...

loved the bond between the 3 members of the family and looks like along with anjali disappearance many things changed as well, they moved to bangalore to start a new life and may be all there were done to help khushi out of her trauma but im thinking to wat extent did it really helped her.

garima is a very matured and sulchi hui lady, i liked her standing for her daughter because she knows khushi has to do something which she wishes for. but even shashi is an excellent father because he understands his daughter perfectely and knows wat she went through and wat she is still going through.

maybe returning to her childhood village will bring closure to khushi but im just scared that being in the same place after 2 decades will the nightmares even more real.

sandhya for sure its going to be an outstanding journey with u and HoT, there will be many ups and downs in these stories but i know that u will always make ur readers want more and more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is the first time I am reading your story. You have an unique way of writing. Beautiful.

I loved the Rao family (so used to the ' Gupta' surname lol)
I need to read more to comment on it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb prolouge n the 1st chappy!!!...
i m hoping against hope tht anjali is safe n sound!!!...
gosh!!!...such s painful twist to the beautiful frndship!!!...:(:(
loved d way u described d rao family n their house!!...
who is tht strainger!!!...may b arnav bt mostly not i guess!!!...
khushi is really in so much pain!!...
cant wait for d nxt part!!...
thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome start! khushi is still not able to come of the time anjali went on missing.. felt very bad for khushi.. i know it is very difficult to come out of guilt that is weighing khushi down.. it is said time is good healer but here even after 20 years khushi have not able to come out of it and now again she is going to same place and by same way as her friend have wanted her to go.. fulfilling her friend's wish is top priority of khushi.. really want khushi to get her her highness back.. i enjoyed khushi's travel in the toy train.. loved the update.

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beyond beautiful and interesting. .
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow loved the chapter.
Its like watching the intro of Heroine.😃
Your writing made it possible to see those scenes.
Shashi, Garima and our Khushi cute little family.
Khushi is still reliving in the past and she decided to face her demons directly.
Oh someone abducted Anjali in the past.
Very much excited for the next update.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey there...

It was not quite what I expected. But I guess you are always full of surprises. That makes your stories so exciting! 😃

It's so terrible that Anju got abducted never to be found, poor baby!😭 [That spells out mystery]

And what an impact it had on Khushi... It has consciously or sub-consciously defined her perspective on life & affected her psyche largely.

It's nice to see Khushi's equation with her parents. But overall, emotionally, she seems really damaged. It's painful to see that. She has been carrying along the guilt, the darkness for too long. I'm glad she has decided to face the demons once and for all. It's going to be one tough, testing journey. The outcome of which, is going to change her forever...whether for better or for worse, we'll have to wait and find out.

About the stranger...I guess many people must have asked you if it's Arnav. I'm eager to know too. But somehow, to me, the description doesn't seem to be that of him... If it's him, I shall be surprised yet again. Crew cut, moustache and all...Army man, perhaps?? He said approaching victims... is he a criminal? Someone mentioned the possibility of him being a doctor/counsellor...but then he would probably refer to people as patients, not victims, right?

Anyway...I shall wait for you to clear all the confusion.

One last thing, Khushi's last name is Rao...Is it only cause you wanted to do justice to her South-Indian lineage? I wonder what Arnav's last name will be, then...

Great start, Sandhya...looking forward to this promising journey!

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it..!!!
w8ng for the next..!

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