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Posted: 10 years ago

My prayers are with you Jenny...

After reading the update my heart went out to Arhi especially arnav... Lavanya is sick so her father and sister too...Where they were before??... I am sure she'll also accuse Khushi for her sister suicide attempt...

A glimpse of her past shows that arnav doesn't believe in love when they were together... Khushi is the one who makes him to believe in love...When he told La that he loves Khushi, she doesn't bear the truth, and she attempted suicide... Why can't she let him go and accept the reality that they are not meant to be...And her suicidal attempt shows that arnav is her obsession and she'll not let him go so easily...

Is in human nature "Jo mil nahi skta talab bhi sab se ziada usi ki hoti hai."

Khushi is feeling guilty that her mother thought she had sinned and arnav did not allow her to disclose Aarav paternity...His decision was right in his perspective, but this will cost both of them...

They will be separated, but I've full faith in you, & Arhi love that they will come out from all odds, shall...Aman still loves Khushi, and can't stop thinking about her...Anita & Aman conversation, and interaction were interesting...She'll surely make her place in his heart...What a speechless and outstanding chapter you wrote... Have a safe delivery dear. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all Jen...take ample amount of rest & have a safe delivery. Give lots of love & muahhh to the baby. Don't take stress at all. Take as much time you want & when you will come back we will be still waiting for you.

Now coming to the update...I don't know why I really feel sorry for all your characters. I just simply can't take anybody's side & I feel all are just helpless & are trapped in this situation.

Firstly LAVANYA- she is so obsessed with Arnav that it makes her very much manipulative. & to take the whole situation in her favour she didn't' ever hesitate to hurt herself. Her father & sister MANYA, has always suggested her to let go of Arnav , so that finally some sanity came into her. Manya, even knows about Arnav , not being Aarav's father. But seeing her sister in ICU & with the note & details of Khushi - obviously decided to blame Arnav & Khushi for her sister's condition (I guess any sister in her position would have done the same thing) . Lavanya was already leading a loveless life as Arnav never loved her back. He loved Aarav & was performing his duties towards Lavanya. He was never ever emotionally attached to Lavanya. But Lavanya in her obsession, always tried to tie up Arnav to her... because somehow the feeling that Arnav is related to her socially & legally gives her some sort of satisfation. In her obsession, she has mostly hurt the person, who she claims to love the most. I don't know what she achieved from this loveless relation??????? She has become so much revengeful , that she decided if she couldn't get her happiness, she would not allow Arnav to be happy as well.

On the other hand, thought not emotionally related, Arnav never cheated on Lavanya. He allowed Khushi into his life , after he detached himself from this marriage in all aspects. He loved Aarav a lot, & if Aarav is alive today, for his sake , he would not have allowed himself to get involved to other person. After spending a lonely & loveless life, when he finds his solace with Khushi- nothing was in his favour- neither the society, nor the relations with which he is bonded to. & he was battling against all this odds alone. He wants to be happy, move on in his life... but unfortunately was not able to.

Khushi's condition was no better. She is fighting with her emotions & the principles her parents has sowed into her. When she was with Arnav - she feels on top of the world... with her parents - she feels sorry to hurt them...thinking about Lavanya- she sympathises with her & also want happiness for her. But the end result is coming to Zero again



I guess Lavanya should have continued her counselling, may be she could have dealt with it better. Whatever is her condition today is the end result of her own obsession, decisions, actions. She has ruined her life, and obviously the people who are related to her directly or indirectly is getting affected by it. But still no hope.


I guess when you will come back, we will definitely get a positive start to this story. Hoping for their bright future.


P.S- well another thing sweetheart... I have nothing to say regarding your writing skill...because I have been your fan after I read- 'The bride with a doll' & your other writings also make me a big fan of yours day by day.

But dealing with so many emotion & handling all the characters different point of view at the same time is no doubt- very tough...& you handed it so well.

Will be waiting for your next update.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Jenny first of all my best wishes for a safe delivery. Hope you enjoy this time and not worry abt other things...
Coming to the story, I wish you didn't had to leave us with a cliff hanger like this..but then every update has been a wonderful one for us to read and have been waiting eagerly for the next one. so that's expected. I hope you can get back soon for us..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful chapter jenny.. Wish you a safe delivery... god bless
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Posted: 10 years ago
very strong n crucial chap but as always it was fantastically writtenn all d best n congrats on the special occasion u r going to celebrate soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly, wishing you have a safe and an easy delivery...all the very best dear! I am surprised how could you even write this emotional chapter with your DD in the corner.
Feeling really sorry for Aman and Anita...it is a very tough road ahead...where they both have to walk together...Aman is still thinking about the Hazel eyes. Anita on the other side is strong and a sensible girl...she can accept the reality and move on with it.
Lavanya and her family really need help...A big time help. So Arnav told him that he does not believe in love and she is stuck to those words.
Hope Khushi and Manya will have a sensible talk. I want ARSHI to be together always.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update.
Iam feeling sorry about Arnav who is bound to this psychotic woman.
Leap? So separation is here now.
I felt bad when the phone broke .

Iam surprised that you r due in 72hrs n updating the story.kudos to you .
Enjoy the phase with ur bundle of joy.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh God why cant Lavanya just leave Arshi alone
What's that Manya wants to give Khushi ??
Is it Lavanyas suicide note ??? 😕
Awesome update Jenny 👍🏼
Kudos to you for penning down so well
Thanks for the PM


I wish you safe and easy delivery Jenny 😊 All the best! Take care!
Edited by .Anisha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
god this lavanya is really a psycho...
y can't she leave arnav...atleast he will have a peaceful life...and wat this manya is upto...
thks for the pm...
waiting for nxt updte...
take cre...have a safe delivery dr...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Outstanding Chapter. Hats off to you Jenny!!


I have to come back to make a comment since I am getting over my incoherent state at the moment. I am so livid at the moment that the only words in my mind are foul words.

Will read other comments once I have made mine. 😃





Edited by bkamber - 10 years ago

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