A sandhir ff~ A mistake-i proved right part 17 updated[page 92] - Page 8

it was awesome...pari and happy diwali dear ...update asap &thanks 4 pm

awesome introductions
chota update yar next time bada wala chahiye thanx for pm
continue asap :)))

Ha ha
New stry
Plot seems nyz

Chap 1
intro is nyz n needed
but itz shrt
Chalo koi na
nex tme big update de
Gf n she has hubby???

Yaar...!! Kya bolu??
I am speechless

Just loved it to the core...!!!
Can't express...!!


Poor rd...!!
So many disasters in one day..!!
Luck was definitely not on his side..!!!



But but it's rightly Said Jo Hota hai
Ache ke liye Hota hai...!!
It perfectly fits this situation...!!!

Usko uski khoobsurat heroine milegi...!!
But heroine nazar toh dalo hero par..!!


Update ASAP ...!!!
Can't wait...!! And I will kill you if you take
Time...!! Happy diwali
Love Janavi

wow new story
amazing concept
superb proluge

part 1 was amazing
waiting for more

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Ress

Unresss

Aj sabit ho gya

Hard wrk alwz pays off 🤣

Cnt wait moi came first smirks at evryone 😎
Party tym for me 🥳

Now coming to the update
It was short n sweet
It was needed for the intro

Really rd worst day
Jbse morning hui h
Ek k baad ek disaster

Omlet jaala dia
Car khrab

Now businessman rd ko bus se Jana pdega

Bt soon dis day is going to be best of his lyf

Sanyu n his bro both r family to each other
Dey luv each other so much

Rd n sanyu in same bus

Rd keep luking sanyu bt she's not paying any attention to him she's busy in her own world

Rd cnt get her eyes off form sanyu


Yr sachi moi toh big wali fan ho gi hun iss fic ki

Cnt wait for next
Do update soon


Luv u yr

Keep smiling 😊

Originally posted by: RIDDSI

hie pari.

haan yeh chota tha.. next time bada wala update plz

arrey itna bhi mat socho yaar ki it is good or bad..

lev it on readers to decide whether it is good or bad

and it was not at all bad. it was very very good

update soon next part

keep writing

with lots of love

RIDDHIMA

Originally posted by: pritha072angel

Resss

Omggg I can seee someone is glaring at me right now

Hehe karna hi tha itni jldi jo unress kiya well I was planning to not to unress but what to do u I thought isse pehle koi moika sar phodne k liye bhaage usse pehle unress kar du

Ok now no bakwaas only comment

Welll update bohot bada tha nhi

Ufff pooor rd start se hi din kharaaab

Koi nhi sanyu se milte hi its gonnabe fab

Chalo car kharaab hone ka ek faayda to hua we got sandhir meeting

Sanyu maen a real hitler yaar but I loved her care about samar can see she is kinda responsinle type person

Gawwwd bus scene yaaay finally sandhir meet but ye kya sanyu is not even looking at him ghoshhh

Is rd mesmerised by her

Koi nhi nxt time big update warna scrap pe bhi unress nhi karungi

UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH