A sandhir ff~ A mistake-i proved right part 17 updated[page 92] - Page 10

Originally posted by: holysoul

it was awesome...pari and happy diwali dear ...update asap &thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Chap 1
intro is nyz n needed
but itz shrt
Chalo koi na
nex tme big update de
Gf n she has hubby???

Originally posted by: Paravi

Yaar...!! Kya bolu??
I am speechless

Just loved it to the core...!!!
Can't express...!!


Poor rd...!!
So many disasters in one day..!!
Luck was definitely not on his side..!!!



But but it's rightly Said Jo Hota hai
Ache ke liye Hota hai...!!
It perfectly fits this situation...!!!

Usko uski khoobsurat heroine milegi...!!
But heroine nazar toh dalo hero par..!!


Update ASAP ...!!!
Can't wait...!! And I will kill you if you take
Time...!! Happy diwali
Love Janavi

Originally posted by: Areesha566

part 1 was amazing
waiting for more

Originally posted by: shrutikag

i really liked the first chapter...very nice...the concept is also amusing and it will be fun tosee this kinda relationship...keep writing

Part 2

Sanyu was continuously staring outside as if noone was around her but

Here our rd was staring at her as if it was the only thing in this whole world

Whose attention he wanted and her ignorance was irritating him but he was

Surprised too as why he is getting irritated just becoz some stranger was not

Giving him attention...he was brought bach to reality when the bus came

to a halt and that girl finally stood up from her seat and her glane by mistake

[thats what he thought]fell on him but soon she turned her face and stepped

Down from the bus

Rd[in mind]-ek baar palat kar dekh lo

And as if someone called her she turned her head and their eyes met for a

Nano second and thn she went towards her college but as he was busy

In her thoughts he forgot to note the name of the college and the bus

Just went from there

Here sanyu walked into the college campus and was walking through the corridor

But someone called her from behind

Sanyu[smiling widely]-hey vids

Vids[hugging her]-hi yaar,ajj bhi late,kya hua

Sanyu-as usual

Sanyu and vids-SAMAR

They laugh and walk towards the class,there in the class parth and jiggy were sitting

On the desk facing kaustu who was sitting on the chair in the front row and as soon

As she saw sanyu she shouts

Kaustu-hey sanyu,aj bhi late

Sanyu[pushing parth and jiggy]-haan yaar woh samar,aur tum dono,don't u know

Hum desk par books rakhte hai aur tum uspar hi beth gaye

Parth[teasing]-ji saraswati mata

Sanyu[hitting him]-hahaha...it was a lame one

Parth-it wasn't a joke yaar,mein to bol raha tha ki books mein saraaswati maa

Ka vas hota hai,haina jiggy

Jiggy-absalutly

For this he receives a glare from sanyu

Vids-oh god guys stop it,aur tum dono jao apni jagah betho

Parth[leaning]-agar tum chaho to mere paas beth sakti ho

Vids[poking her index finge on his chest]-no thanx,now go

Parth[a bit disappointed]-hmmm

Everytime parth tries to give vidhushi a clue that he loves her she takes it as a joke

And leaves parth disappointed coz he is unaware that how much she loves him.

They go and sit on the second row right behind the girls and soon the bell

Rings and pkc enters the class

Sanyu[wispers in vid's ear]-tu acting kar rahi hai ya tujhe sach mein pata nahi

Vids-what?

Sanyu-that he loves u

Vids-who?

Sanyu-don't act vids atleast not in front of me,i m talking abt parth

Vids-can we talk this later,i wanna concentrate coz i m not a genius like u

Sanyu-yeah right,but don't think that u escaped

Vids-hmmm

With that they turn to face the board where pkc was scribbling something

Here finally rd reaches his office all tired of the bus ride but his mind was still in that bus

With that strange girl...he walks into his cabin absentmindedly paying no heed to the

His best friend's call

He enters his cabin keeps his laptop bag on the table and sits on his chair,someone knocks on

His door

Rd-come in

Here enters his bbf karan khurana and one of his colleagues

Karan-kya hua rd u seen really tired

Rd-yaar pooch mat,ajj ka din totally kharab hai

Karan[taking his seat in front of him]-kyu kya hua

Rd-arrey yarr subah utha to alarm clock off karne ki jagah glass gir ke toot gaya...

He explains everything that happened with him in the morning along with that strange

Girl who wasn't strange for his heart anymore

Karan[resting his index finger on his chin]-hmmm,itna bura din,lekin chal kuch to

Accha hua,at last kisi ladki ko tu rss ka attention mila aur woh bhi uss ladki

Ko jisne usse ek pinch bhi attention nahi diya[saying so he burst out laughing]

Rd-abbey sale meine tujhe apni problem batai aur tu has raha hai

Karan-acch chal theek hai,lekin tune gf ko phone karke poocha ki superman

Ko kya hua

Rd-oh shit yaar mein bhool hi gaya,chal abhi karta hoon

Karan-haan kar

Rd takes out his phone and dials his darling's phone but noone picks up the phone

And after trying for around ten time he keeps his phone on his table

Karan-kya hua?

Rd-yaar phone nahi utha rahi

As soon as he finishes this his phone rings and it was flashing "darling"

Rd-hey darling ho...

But before he could complete

D-Mr.Randhir singh shekhawat,how dare u mess my kitchen

Rd-arrey darling listen to me

D-don't darling me and i m ur grandma and u should think that i m a 78 year old

Woman and i can't run behind u each and everytime to keep u and ur surrounding

Clean

Rd-offo granny app yeh to batao ki grandpa ko kya hua

Granny-yeah right,don't u dare change the topic,u and ur grandpa both r like two

Yeah old kids,how many times i have told ur grandpa to stay away from

Sweets but no...he can't and see today after having a severe stomach pain

Ii took him to the doc and he scolded me and...

Rd-omg my darling...just chill...wait talk to ur favourite son

Saying this he hands over the phone to karan

Karan-hey beautiful

They talk for a while and thn she hungs up

Rd-dangerous dadi

Karan-right,bohot gusse me thi

Rd-haan yaar ajj ghar jaldi jana padega aur cleaning karni padegi

Karan-yeah right,oey waise mein yaha tujhe yeh dene aaya tha[showing him and

Envelope]

Rd-yeh kya hai

Karan-woh FITE se tere liye request letter hai,teri spl classes iss saal ki

Waha shuru karne ke liye

Rd-oh,haan rakh de mein baad mein reply de dunga

Karan-arrey tera reply to sabko pata hai,obviously it will be a "yes"

Rd-haan haan theek hai,chal ab jaa,10 min mein meeting hai

Karan-arrey haan yaar,chal mein chalta hoon,aur haan thujhe teri stranger gf jaldi mil

Jaegi

He goes from there and rd says

Rd-she is not my gf...

howz it guys i hope u guys liked it,plz leave ur feedback😊