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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: aarushi04

Nyc prologue n cs...looking frwd to d story...
Plz continue...waiting for next update 😊

thanx dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Sorry for late reply its really awesome but dont you think age gap is more but it doesnt matter because I love your writings and believe me I am your biggest fan thanks for pm and update soon now just cant wait
Love yukta
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sandhirparsh

Sorry for late reply its really awesome but dont you think age gap is more but it doesnt matter because I love your writings and believe me I am your biggest fan thanks for pm and update soon now just cant wait
Love yukta

aww thank u soo much dear
nahi yaar itna gap to chalta hai,i guess
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Part 1

Someone was comfortably sleeping covering the face with the quilt as an attempt

To block the sun rays falling on a beautiful room whose wall were painted

in pure white and curtains were of black and whit combination through

which sun rays were disturbing the beautiful sleep they were also acting as

the spot light for numerous photo on the wall most of them were cover pages

of leading business magzines with the hardworking RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT'S

photos who was right now sleeping peacefully,but soon another

Disturbance comes...the continuous ringing of the alarm clock kept on the side

Table,he extends his hand to switch it off but by mistake hits the glass of water and it falls on

The ground breaking it into pieces and hence breaking the sleep

Rd-oh shit yaar [looking at the clock]i m late,how could u rd

Saying so he runs to the washroom to bath but as soon as he opens the shower

The water didn't come so he goes to the bath tub and had a quick bath

As he was dressing up and was almost dressed up the water from the shower starts

Flowing thus wetting him and his expensive three piece

Rd[running his fingers through his wet hairs]-shit man,yeh sab mere saath kyu

He runs out of the washroom and get dressed in another suit and goes downstairs

Rd[shouting]-darling.darling.where r u

He goes to the kitchen and finds a note stuck on the fridge door which read

"hey boyfriend,my husband wasn't feeling well so went to him early in the

Morning,will be back by evening,i hope u will not make my kitchen a disaster

And don't forget ur wallet

Love

Girlfriend"

Rd-tch,kya yaar ajj itna bura din kyu hai

Saying so he moves to the stove puts a pan and starts preparing an omelet for himself

Leaving the pan on the stove he goes to take the news paper and comes to the kitchen

Reading it,he sprinkles some salt to the omelet still reading the newspaper and to his bad

Luck the cap of the container was loose and the whole salt is now in the pan along with his

Omelet

Rd-shit man,to hell with breakfast

Saying so he turns off the gas stove,takes his laptop bag and goes to his car

Wondering what more problems r there to come and as soon as he reaches out

His driver was leaning onto the bonnet of his car,checking smt

Rd[sitting in the car]-move

Driver closes the bonnet and sits in the driver's seat and they head towards

His office but as his day was super awesome his car stopped with a jerk

In the middle of the road

Rd[irritated]-not again,what happened

Driver[tensed]-sir,since morning the car is showing some problems

Rd[moking]-wow and u took the same car,wth why didn't u take the

Other one

Driver-sir 2 of the other cars r in workshop

Rd-both of them together?

Driver-yes sir

Rd was abt to say but his eyes falls on thedigital clock in the car and

Grabs his laptop bag and exits the car

Rd-damn ab local bus mein jana padega,to hell with this bloody day

At the same time in another small apartment,a girl is continuously banging

On the door of the room

Girl-samar,this is the last time i m calling u,get up right now,i need to go to the college

A boy opens the door rubbing his eyes

Samar-kya sanyu di,do min aur nahi sone de sakte

Sanyu-school nahi jana,tere chakkar mein main hamesha late ho jati hoon

Ab jaldi jaa naha aur breakfast kar,main ready hone jaa rahi hoon

And son't u dare move towards ur bed

Saying so she moves to her room and samar goes to the bed but as soon as

He falls onto his bed sanyu shouts from her room

Sanyu-samarrr

Samar-haan,haan jaa raha hoon

With that he goes to the washroom and comes out after 30mins all dressed in his

school uniform and goes to the small Dining table placed in front of their open kitchen

Sanyu serves him his sandwitch along with milk

Samar[twisting his nose]-yuk di,i don't want milk

Sanyu who was sipping her coffee gives him a glare and he silently drinks the

Milk in one go and then makes a face as if he was abt to puke but sanyu sits there

Emotionless reading the newspaper

Soon they finish their breakfast and both of them step out of their apartment

Sanyu locks it and gives the keys to samar and says

Sanyu-aaj mein late hoo jaongi,have got another job ok,but don't u dare skip the

Evening meals,ok

Samar-ok,hitler

Sanyu[pulling his ears]-badmash

Samar-aa,di chodo,school mein log poochenge ki kis ladki ne chata mara

Hearing that sanyu burst out laughing soon joined by samar

Sanyu-ok ab chal

The go to the ground floor using steps as it was not a posh building it wasn't having

Any lift,they wave a bye to the watchman and they both move to opposite direction

Sanyu was standing at the bus stop waiting for her bus to come,after around

10 mins her bus came,she stepped into the bus and as a routine had a window seat

Showed her card to the conductor and was now sitting looking outside through

The window

After 2-3 stops rd stepped into the bus and only he was the one to boarded the bus

from that stop and the only seat left was right next to sanyu,he goes to her seat

And looks at her expecting her to look back[u see everyone does]but to his surprise

She was all drowned in her own thoughts and was not even aware of anyones presence

He was abt to sit next to her but suddenly an elderly woman comes, so he allows her to

Sit,but he don't know why his eyes were again stopping on that one particular face

Which was sitting emotionlessly but yet depicting loads of emotions


i know guys chota aur boring bhi that,lekin kya karoon wasn't in a mood to write but i had to give a start to bas likh dala.Bhai mene likh diya apne pad liya ab rahi baat like aur comment ki to chalo chalo jaldi karo...i m waiting eagerly😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Ress

Unresss

Aj sabit ho gya

Hard wrk alwz pays off 🤣

Cnt wait moi came first smirks at evryone 😎
Party tym for me 🥳

Now coming to the update
It was short n sweet
It was needed for the intro

Really rd worst day
Jbse morning hui h
Ek k baad ek disaster

Omlet jaala dia
Car khrab

Now businessman rd ko bus se Jana pdega

Bt soon dis day is going to be best of his lyf

Sanyu n his bro both r family to each other
Dey luv each other so much

Rd n sanyu in same bus

Rd keep luking sanyu bt she's not paying any attention to him she's busy in her own world

Rd cnt get her eyes off form sanyu


Yr sachi moi toh big wali fan ho gi hun iss fic ki

Cnt wait for next
Do update soon


Luv u yr

Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
hie pari.
haan yeh chota tha.. next time bada wala update plz
arrey itna bhi mat socho yaar ki it is good or bad..
lev it on readers to decide whether it is good or bad
and it was not at all bad. it was very very good
update soon next part
keep writing
with lots of love
RIDDHIMA

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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Resss
Omggg I can seee someone is glaring at me right now
Hehe karna hi tha itni jldi jo unress kiya well I was planning to not to unress but what to do u I thought isse pehle koi moika sar phodne k liye bhaage usse pehle unress kar du
Ok now no bakwaas only comment
Welll update bohot bada tha nhi
Ufff pooor rd start se hi din kharaaab
Koi nhi sanyu se milte hi its gonnabe fab
Chalo car kharaab hone ka ek faayda to hua we got sandhir meeting
Sanyu maen a real hitler yaar but I loved her care about samar can see she is kinda responsinle type person
Gawwwd bus scene yaaay finally sandhir meet but ye kya sanyu is not even looking at him ghoshhh
Is rd mesmerised by her
Koi nhi nxt time big update warna scrap pe bhi unress nhi karungi
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon
thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Didi...
Pehli baar apne jaldi update kiya..
Anyways it was awesome...
Awesome start..
Randhir is a business man and hai Sanyu is taking care of her bro... Awww..
Anyways it was a blessing to read..
Do update soon...
Love
Prishi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
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Unress

Hey! Pari
Awesome n lovely update dear
lovely, nicely n beautifully written
love it to the core
Randhir business tycoon😳
Randhir's day was bad...🤣
Omelet jalgaya😆
Sanyu is sweet...😉
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago

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