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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Paravi

Sabse pehle toh don't make it a two shot or three shot..!!
Or I will kill you...!! Pls make it an ff...!!
It is an awesome story...!! Interesting start..!!
Just loved the way you described everything..!!
Continue soon..!! Can't wait more
Love Janavi

awww jhanvi plz don't kill me lol!!!
I m not making it a TS
& thnks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Param_love

OMG...Moi late...Sry..Parul

well the update was
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely😳😳
Beautifully n nicely written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
SanDhir are awesome at there places
SanDhir first kiss!!!
Well the hell start 4 Sanyu...but she'll
also not leave RD so easily
And plzzz make it ff...Parul...
moi love to read ur work😳
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
lots of love
Bushra

thanks bush and will make a long story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ArshaParsh

It seems like a nice story line..
Please do continue, and PM, me...
Love
Prishi

thank u
plz like the prologue & buddyme
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: BornAries

<font size="3" color="#006600">Parul! Lovely Update..</font>

<font size="3" color="#006600">Loved the first part...</font>


<font size="3" color="#006600">Randhir ...ragging ..</font>

<font size="3" color="#006600">Waiting eagerly or the next PArt..

Do continue soon ...</font>

thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
CHAPTER 2

sanyu was in utter shock about the incident but composes herself and left to her hostel room.

V: sanyu where were you? Maine tum he kha kha ni dhunda

S: vidushi I...was I mean I was in the campus only

V: are you hiding something?

S: no

V: sanyu randhir se jitna dor rh sakti ho rho
better for u

S: how can you know this much?
I mean we can't judge anyone in our first meet

V: sanyu we are family friends
and I don't like him .
uski mujhse Aur mera bhai se ni banti
and moreover he is not a good person to befriend with

S: don't worry dear & thanks for concern
I will make sure about it
good night

V: Good ngt

RD Villa
RD: (hitting the punching bag) how dare she
usne mujhe se ase kse baat ki.
now u wait and watch miss agarwal to live in a hell like situation...
but I like her (touching his cheek) thori thikhi ha but cute ha..


next day
yoyo: OK juniors Kal hamne tum sabka intro liya but ek larki rh gye uski. aj ragging hogi RD bhai se( all were shocked)

RD: vidushi Teri friend kha ha?

V: sir wo wo...

S: I'm here
kya ha

RD: wo lady mirch ay gye
welcome welcome
so your dare is that you will bend down on your knees and will touch my feet not only this you will also enchant I'm sorry also

S :aur kuch ?

(all were confused)

RD: wo wo no bus itna hi

S: but before that I have a surprise for you .want to see?

RD: ofcourse dear. RSS kisi bi girl ko mana ni karta

(soon RD got a slap on his cheek by his father)
RD: dad????

s: this was your surprise

harsh: how dare you RD tum college pdne ate ho yeah mujhe embarrassed Karne
thanks to this girl jisne mujhe yeh sab btaya
I'm warning u for the last time agar tum ni sudhre toh consequences will be really bad
and (to sanyu) thank you beta god bless

s: thanks Sir

(days passed but RD's hared towards her increase more & more .. and for sanyu she adjusted perfectly in her new environment and was as usual was topper of her class academic as well as co curricular activities.. )

Precap party at sanyu house
and a little ahem ahem

plz give ur precious comments
thanks
Edited by coolishparul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Nice story
Loved it... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
res😳
unresss

Hiii Parul
Lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely update😳😳
lovely,nicely n beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Beautifully u've describe the scenario⭐️⭐️
Randhir got a slap !!!
Sanyu confident awesome..😉
Precape seems interesting..!!😃
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
thx 4 pm
Love
Bushra🤗
Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
wow! amazing update Parul!

i am loving this Confident Sanyu...
Randhir got a slap...he gonna hate her more for this ...

Loving this SS... <3

Precap ..wow! Patry in sanyu's home? thats interesting.. 😳

OMG! did I read Ahem ahem... 😳 wow! Jaldi update dena Parul! 😳 (such besharam me:P :P )

Loved it <3

Do continue soon..

and Thanks for the pm... 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Thanks for pm
Nice update but short😊
Loved this strong sanyu😊
Rd got slapped, more trouble for sanyu now😲
Interesting precap😉
Update soon& a little big update
Edited by katheriene - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60


bechara RD!!!! 😆😆 sanyu ne kya stand li yaara; really loved it!!!! 👏
eagerly waiting for party and ahem ahem update... pls update soon...

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