Gustakh dil (DARK) sandhir ff link for thread#2 added

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE
This is basically a story of a girl Sanyukta Aggrawal...(bold, beautiful, intelligent, loves her near ones but hate those who trouble others) who gets admission in India's prestigious college FITE & that too with rank 1.

This story also involves a guy RSS...(handsome but total jerk, doesn't respect anyone, studies or you can say doing time pass , 3rd year student) gets promoted coz of his dad's influence as he is the head trusty.


What happens when they both will collied ...I'm sure there is something stored in there destiny.



page1 - chapter 1

page11- chapter2
chapter 3-page13
chapter 4- page 19
chapter 5-page 20
chapter6- page 21
chapter 7-pg27
chapter 8- pg30
chapter 9-pg34
chapter 10-pg36
thread#2 link page 39
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting...please continue n pm me when u do!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhir4eva

interesting...please continue n pm me when u do!!!

thanks and for pm hit the LIKE button of the prologue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Nice concept
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intrstng for sure continue
Would luv to read it

Updte soon wtng 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seems interesting very interesting Parul😳
Do continue soon😉
eagerly waiting
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 1
yo yo: chalo chalo junior bacho ek ek karke apna intro do.
Aur m apka senior yoyo Singh. naam toh suna hi hoga...

(every junior starts giving intro and then yo yo's eyes fell upon a beautiful girl claded in red hot tang top with long skirt)
oye madam Ji apna shubh naam toh bta do...

sanyu: ma engineering college ma pdne aye hu faltu seniors ke Ji hazori karni ni. GOT it( starts leaving from there but stops by feeling a strong manely grip on her wrist & turns ) WTH leave me

R: wo wo thikhi mirchi (red hot chilli) I like it
bTW we are ur seniors so better cooperate and tell us ur name

S: (angrily) leave me u moron and who the hell r u)

R: I'm the great randhir Singh shekhwat ur senior and moreover only son of the head trusty of college . Do u want to know more?

(a girl comes from behind)
vidushi: sir she is sanyukta my classmate 1st year ME.(vids is in positive role)

R: sanyukta .. didn't it feel like some traditional melodramtic name , khi tum wo prithiviraj wali sanyu kta toh nhi(mocking)
but I must say you r really very beautiful and (in her ears) even sexy too( and he leaves her but before that kisses her hand ) c u around

s: never(rubs her hand)

canteen
v: sanyu tujhe RSS se fight ni karni chayea thi .
he's powerful

s: don't panic vids kuch ni hoga
let's move to the class

v: tu chal m coming

s:OK (she was crossing the corridor but suddenly someone pulls her to some unknown room) kun ha leave me fr god sake

R: hush!!! kitna cheekhti ho tum Yar
m toh sirf tumhe tumhra ear ring dena aya tha

s:(guilty) oh my favourite ear ring thanks and so--- so-- I mean sorry

r: (comes near her) mera ek sorry se kya hoga
(looking towards her lips & she senses the trouble .
Before RD's lips could touch her lips she gave him a tight slap)

s: how dare u( with blood shred eyes)

r:(now this was enough for RD to raise his anger) what was that(helds her elbow)

s:(fearfully looking at him but not responding)

r: (shouts) answer me dammit. no one in the college dare to even raise their head in front of me & look at u.. girl from no where insulted me not once but twice in a day, NOBEL prize do for that ! speak up u

s:(freed her) stop it. phle toh khud galti karate ho Aur mujhe khte ho you rich brat. Agar baap k pass paise ha toh Sabpe apni dictatorship jharoge

r:(now this was a limit of tolerance & without waiting for consequence he sealed her lips with his... for at least 5 minutes &said panting) dekh li meri dictatorship or u want 2 c more

(sanyu was in a utter shock abt what happened 5 minutes ago & came out of Terrance by RD's voice) now u wait & watch I will show u the real hell. Ab ma tumhe btaoga ki real ragging ( A/n - I didn't believe in ragging its a crime neither I support it) kise khte ha.

precap sanyu's ragging in front of the college.


A/n
hi girls I know I'm hell late sorry plz do leave your previous comments.

And I'm making this story as SS because some of you wanted me to write so.
enjoy
Edited by coolishparul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Parul! Loved the prologue! Seems very interesting! This sandhir collision will definitely be dhamaakedaar! Can't wait for you to continue soon!
No yaar don't make it a 2 shot/3 shot! Make it an official ff you know with a big story containing great chemistry between them!
But then its all upto you, how you wanna write it!
Continue soon, Parul!

Keep writing,
Love.
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely concept..
Do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Would love to read
Update asap

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