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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Yoo yooo
I know I know bohot der se comment kar rahi hoon...
Lekin main kyun baar baar explanation dun main kyun late hogayi bolo bolo???
dena padega kiya :P hehehehe
I know nehi, kyunki megs koh toh pehle se hi reason pata hai...
Niks tujhe nehi pata toh megs se poochlena...

Anyways about the part, awesome blossom like alwaysss
I m looking forwards to next part, issiliyeh zyada detail main comment nehi karungi hehehe
but it was expected that Ridz would be meeting avantu and harish...
Wow, so they knew Ridz parents, yeh toh bohot acchi baat hai...
Accha accha guro mat, isse zyada main kuch nehi karungi...
I know nehi toh tum dono ke idea's baahar aajaenge hehehe...

Chalo ab jaldi post karo next part...
take care
Muwaahhh
Love u both :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Yoo yooo

I know I know bohot der se comment kar rahi hoon...
Lekin main kyun baar baar explanation dun main kyun late hogayi bolo bolo???
dena padega kiya :P hehehehe
I know nehi, kyunki megs koh toh pehle se hi reason pata hai...
Niks tujhe nehi pata toh megs se poochlena...

Anyways about the part, awesome blossom like alwaysss
I m looking forwards to next part, issiliyeh zyada detail main comment nehi karungi hehehe
but it was expected that Ridz would be meeting avantu and harish...
Wow, so they knew Ridz parents, yeh toh bohot acchi baat hai...
Accha accha guro mat, isse zyada main kuch nehi karungi...
I know nehi toh tum dono ke idea's baahar aajaenge hehehe...

Chalo ab jaldi post karo next part...
take care
Muwaahhh
Love u both :D


haan...mat do explaination
mujhe pata ghai...
aap kyun late hue ho... ;)

hhehehehe
ni dena padega šŸ˜† šŸ˜›

hum ghur nahi rahe...aapko... šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰

yup posting next in few minutes...
bye
tc..
love yaa 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

PEHLA PYAAR PEHLA EHESAAS
PART3

As avantika said this riddhima looked at her with confusion all over her face how come they take her parents name unable to hold her confusion more she

Ri: "aunty aap mere mumma ka nick name kaise jaante ho?"
She asked her and avantika looked at her and then she smiled and then moved closer to her and caressing her head she said
Av: "kyunki yeh name aapki mumma ko maine hii diyya tha so i should know that naa"
She said making her confuse more and avantika smiled looking at her how the emotions are playing on her face she has such a expression full face like her son she smiled as she looked so cute with that expressions then she just said that
Ri: "main kuch samjhi nahiin aunty"
Av: "beta aapke mom dad humare sabse close friends hain"
That makes riddhima looked at her and then just for confirming she

Ri: "aunty aap kya kehna chahti hain matlab mera mom dad"

Av: "jii riddhima beta aapke muma aur papa aur hum dono best friends the college ke time se"

And riddhima smiled looking at them and then she speaks up

Ri: "ek minute aunty main abhie ayi"

And she runs inside the room and brings back a photograph and then placed in front of avantika harish she speaks up

Ri: "matlab aap avantu aunty aur aap gol gol uncle ho"

She said making harish and avantika smile at the memories as they saw the picture of four of them that taken in the college function and harish smiled as riddhima said to him 'gol gol uncle' and then he replied to her that

Ha: "han main hii hun aapka gol gol uncle aab batao aapko kahan hain mera dost"

And hearing his query about her parents makes her quiet as she remembered her mom dad and just that thought brings tears in riddhima's eyes. And avantika and harish exchanged looks seeing the tears in her eyes their heart filled with unknown fear but seeing riddhima's body start trembling and her face becomes completely wet with tears avantika holds her tightly and hugged her in side motherly hug and soothen her back and


Av: "hey riddhima beta kya hua aap rone kyun lage aise koi karta hain kya bacha baat kya hain batao mujhe main aapki avantu aunty hun batao beta suddenly aap ronein kyun lage harish ke sam aur shashank ke baare meiin poochne par beta baat kya hain batayiye humein riddhima bacha"

She said completely in motherly affection and feeling that motherly affection after so many years riddhima breaks down and then in between her hiccups engulfing in aunty's arms she

Ri: "aunty mom dad mumma papa nahiin hain aab they are no more with us aunty"

And that shocked avantika and harish beyond limits they looked at each other and tears makes their way from their eyes feeling the sudden loose of their beautiful relation two best friends and then harish in between his tears signaled avantika to riddhima and avantika somehow nodded they knows her loss is much more than them so she just keeps on caressing her back till her hiccups turned into soft muffles and harish poured a glass of water for her and then

Av: "bas riddhima bas beta aise nahiin rote aap tou sam aur shashank kii princess ho naa"

As she nodded a bit as she remembered how her dad addressed her as his pari then harish caressing her back said

Ha: "tou aap aise royogo shashank aur samriti ko kitni takleef hogi aapko aise dekh kar so bacha bas"

He said and riddhima nodded as she moved away from avnatika's shoulder she looked at both of them after so many years she feels like she had somebody and she feels that parent's love and then avnatika wiped her tears and then she

Av: "yehi hui naa baat aap tou vaise bhi humari strong princess ho naa bacha"

She said and then harish handled her a glass of water and

Ha: "aab humari strong princess thoda sa mum peyegi"

He said as if he is saying that to a little baby and riddhima smiled at them lightly and then drank the water lightly and

Ha: "yehi hui naa baat"

And then they makes her comfortable and then riddhima tells them about how she lost both shashank and samriti in terrible car accident and that makes avantika and harish cried in their heart as they lost their best friends in the whole world and then riddhima told them how she completed her study and now is senior doctor in Sanjeevani and then as she stopped telling that avantika and harish feels so proud of this girl then

Av: "humein garv hain riddhima beta aap par aagar aaj sam aur shashank hote tou oonhein bhi aap par naz hota humein hain bacha"

Ha: "han beta bahut kam log zindagi meiin aisa sab kar paate hain jo aapnein kiyya hain beta"

He said as they both caressed her head and riddhima being riddhima not at all loved the praise so she just

Ri: "nahin aunty kuch bhi tou nahiin kiyya maine bas mujhe logone ke liyye kuch karke acha lagta hain uncle"

She said looking at both of them and avantika and harish smiled seeing this she is so shashank and samriti's daughter

Ri: "acha main bhi naa aise hii baith gayyi aap log baithye main abhie aapke liyye kuch khane ko bana kar laati hun"

She said as she gets up to get something for both of them and avantika tried to stop her and

Av: "riddhima bacha koi zarurat nahiin hain aap baitho naa humare paas"

She said and then riddhima looked at her and then

Ri: "jii nahiin aab aapne mujhe beti kaha hain tou beti kii baat tou manani padegi aapko aur mere gol gol uncle ko kuch khane kii zarurat hain is time so i am going aur aap chup chap baithenge aur kuch nahiin kahengi ok"

She said in complete authoritative way and then seeing them nodded she said that

Ri: "good"

And riddhima left from there and harish saw avantika has tears in her eyes and harish holds her and slowly speaks to her that

Ha: "nahiin avaantu abhie nahiin aagar riddhima ne dekh liyya tou vo aur bhi tut jaayegi please"

Avantika nodded and then she just said that

Av: "harish aaj bahut dinon bad kisi ne aise feel karaya kii main bhi maa hun tou aankhein bhar ayi sach"

Harish undesratnds her emotions and then engulfed in his arms.


LONDON

Armaan is in club drinking a drink as always vivek is sitting beside him and offering him more drinks and

Ar: "nahiin yaar vivi aur nahiin maine rahul se promise kiyya hain main zayda nahiin peeyunga yaar"

He said as vivek offered him another glass of beer and

Vi: "come on yaar ammy ek glass se kuch nahiin hoga yeh le yaar"

And he makes him drink forcefully and then armaan looked at maya coming towards them and as soon she comes near them and start throwing herself in his arms but armaan pushed her away and


Ar: "maya how many i have to tell you dont come near me"

He said harshly and then maya just puts her hand around his neck and

Ma: "but i love you ammy baby"

Ar: "maya i said i dont want any relation with you go away from me"

As he shouted vivek signaled maya and she nodded and left from there. And when she goes vivek offered armaan a glass and


Vi: "chod naa ammy yeh le drink chill out man"

He said and armaan is so frustrated that he drinks more and within some minutes he drink badly and then after few seconds vivek just out of fake drama speaks that as

Vi: "chal ammy go to home yaar you are drunk now badly yar"

Ar: "ghar jaakar kya karna hain vivi aab tou rahul bhi gayya hua hain aur kaunsa ghar vo tou bas kaanch ka bana mahal hain"

He said and then fell on the car's bonut as he is drunk and seeing him out vivek called somebody and in between maya comes there and then seeing her he just speaks that to her that

Vi: "maya yehii sahi samay hain armaan ko poori tarah aapa karne ke liyye so"

Ma: "han vivi i so need him and off course our plan yar"

And they both smirked seeing his condition and they never knew what's stored in their future.


Precap_Anjali's entry

An: "rahul mujhe maya ke intentions theek nahiin lag rahein hain"

Ha: "riddhima aab tum humare saath London chalogi"

Av: "yes beta huamre saath i need my daughter back"


love

megha

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Nikki

Edited by megbans - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Such a cute part di..!!
They know each others from years..!!
and their bond is soo cute..!!
And that vivek n maya..1!
huh..!! now what are they upto..!
Hope ammy wil be f9.!
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Nice part...
Waiting for next update !
Cntnue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Such a cute part di..!!

They know each others from years..!!
and their bond is soo cute..!!
And that vivek n maya..1!
huh..!! now what are they upto..!
Hope ammy wil be f9.!
Cont soon


thanx nikki...
m gllad u liked the part dear...
hope so...
sure dear.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
i am liking the way story is going on
cont sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: rucha_07

Nice part...
Waiting for next update !
Cntnue soon..


thanx rucha 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Nice part...šŸ‘
Avantika and Harish got to know that Riddhima's parents are no more,
Hate that Vivek and Maya 😔

Continue soon

Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
nice update dear..
Hope Maya's plan wil failed.. Warna future mai locha hoga.. Pls Anjali ko bejo stop krne k lye..
Ridhima coming london.. Excited... Update soon dear...

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