PEHLA PYAAR PEHLA EHSAAS(PART12) 25. 09.16

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Hi my lovey dovey readers m back with bang.. 😛 😉
don't worry this time am not alone as m starting a SS with my dear freind NIKITA(desir)
for you allhope u remember her who has written famous ffs like
"DIL KA BANDHAN" "DHADHKAN" 'SINDOOR" and many more...
m glad k m writing an SS with her.
its my pleasure to work with her. 😊

anyways main aap logon ko appne boring baaton se aur bore ni karungi... 😛 😉

hehehhehee so for now enjoy the character sketch and prologue of our FIRST SS

"PEHLA PYAAR PEHLA EHSAAS"
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CHARACTER SKETCH


Armaan Mallik-A big business tycoon in Europe having innumerable business chains in all over the world, managing director of Mallik Empire the Empire established by his mom Mrs. Avantika Mallik and Mr. Harish Mallik, he done his M.B.A. from Howard very much bright student, a champ in almost every sport, and he is 27 years old and just in 4 years short time career of his he already achieved Young Achiever Of The Year for three times. He hates his parents and did not believe in Love for him there is nothing called Love exists in the world, everybody just used each-other and have their own reasons for the relations, he is hot girls drooled over him and he knows very well this and he just loved this attention and he is big Casanova of London he flirts with every girl and he has a new girl in his arms everyday and each night he never committed anything with them, for him all are behind his money and good looks so no emotions he just have one night with them and that's all he never repeated his girl friend or one night stand after having one night he is over with them he just needs sex from the girls and that's it, he has a habit of drinking and lately he gets drunk almost for four to five days in a week. He hates marriages. And never wants to gets married in his life he saw his parent's relation and hates this tradition of marriage for him marriage is just making hell of person's life. He has a one strong relation at this moment in his life that is Rahul Mallik his cousin for whom he can do everything and anything.


Riddhima Gupta- She is 25 years old a doctor by profession, she is orphan living in India and worked as senior doctor in Sanjeevani, she lost her parents when she is 12 years old and from the time she lives in Panchgani Orphanage that runs by Sanjeevani staff and with her all the hard work she now becomes a successful doctor and she now resides in Mumbai in a flat, she is simple, beautiful and adorable girl and anybody can falls for her she loved traditions and she do believe in Love but not that fairy tale Love for her Love means respecting each-other, care for each-other and have believe in each-other for her that's Love, she never thinks about her Marriage and all as she is alone she does not have time to think about it she is just so busy in her patients as she loved her work. She hates the fake persons and she loved two things most in the world one is her work and other is her Panchgani Orphanage where she spends her childhood she can do everything for its best.


Rahul Mallik- He is cousin of armaan his uncle and aunt's son and very close to armaan he considered armaan as his big brother always he is 25 years old he is the only one who knows how much armaan is lonely from his heart how much he craved for love, though he never agreed to this, he always prayed to God that somebody comes to his armaan bhai's life and changed his life for better, he is the one who always carry him from bar and always stopped him for doing all his stupid things and right now getting trained under armaan.


Avantika Mallik-She is board of directors in Mallik Empire, she is woman of words and she achieved success in her life with lots of hardships, for making Mallik Empire she is equally in his husband it's her hardships too and she loved her son but never ever try to tell him in all of her business life and that's reason of her home's crack wall, she has love marriage with her husband Harish Mallik but in the time process for getting success their paths get aparted and they never knew when they have their differences in their home and there developed a wall in between them which makes their son suffer and now she just wants best for her son and wants her son did not suffer more because of them and she wants him happy and for that she wants to do anything and everything.


Harish Mallik- C.E.O. of Mallik Empire, a very nice man and polite man and done lots in his career, establishes Mallik Empire on his own hardships with the help of his wife he has nothing when Avantika walks in his life and all he has just her Love and companion ship and now he has everything with her he achieved everything along with her but he never knows when making their dreams comes true he forgot her wife her love and a wall comes in between them and he just gets distanced from his son who now did not bothered by them and he is aware of this fact but he can't do anything as he is responsible for it.

Vivek Gujral-He is so called friend of armaan and he is a bad guy who is just after armaan because of armaan and he is reason behind armaan's drink habit he is a very bad influence on armaan and a very bad reputation.

Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE

A lady in her mid forties sits in a big lounge looking at the big frame in front of her eyes, she looks so elegant in her green saree with a blue halter neck blouse looking so beautiful no one can say she is mother of an 27 year old son she carried herself so elegantly and then as her eyes constantly looking at the life size frame of her only son in front of her eyes her eyes gets teary as she thinks about him and then is the same moment when a man in his mid forties all set to go to office comes talking on the phone and as he cut the call he is about to call the servants for his breakfast that's the moment he saw his wife sitting like that and this is so unlike her he reached near her and

Pr:''avantika''

And hearing her name she looked above and finds her husband the father of her son standing there seeing her like so worried

Ha:''what happen you look worried''

He asked as he saw that tears in her eyes

Av:''i was worried for armaan''

She tells him they talked like strangers well that's the truth they don't even know themselves from when they becomes strangers from lovers and

H:''what happen to him he will be in office sometime avantika''

He said carelessly

Av:'' I know that you don't need to tell me that harish''

She said in cold tone seeing his casual approach and

Ha:''so ismeiin itna chidne kii kya baat hain avantika''

Av:''chidne kii baat harish tumhe idea bhi hain tumhara beta raton ko ghar nahiin ata hain jis din ata hain itnein nashe meiin hota hain kii ose khud ka hosh nahiin hota hain''

She shouted at him and then harish too lose his temper

Ha:''don't act kii mujhe kuch nahiin pata hain I know everything''

Av:''sirff pata honein se kya hoga did you ever tried to stop him han''

She said as he heard his shouting voice and

Ha:''just stop right there avantika you know this is so not truth maine kitni koshish kii hain but you know he hates us''

He said blasting at her and avantika for a moment stopped

Av:''jaanti hun par humse nafrat karta hain armaan yeh soch ka rose ooski zindagi tabha karte hue tou nahiin dekh sakti har raat ooske saath koi naya hota hain he is playing with others as well his own life''

And before harish can reply anything they heard a booming voice and they turned to saw their only son at the end of stairs and

Ar:''oh really i think you people don't know about it that's a great news Mr. And Mrs. Harish Mallik surprisingly knows about their so called son's whereabouts. Thanks for this guys but i don't need it you know and if you guys are thinking about me then please don't waste your time you have enough meting to handle and clients to meet so no need and please live your life like you are living from past 27 years like the bloody money makers so thanks but no thanks for your concern and now will you please stop this so called fish market of concern of yours i need peace..''

And then spitting fire from his words and tongue and eyes he just moved from there climbing back to stairs leaving a crestfallen Harish and Avantika Mallik who don't have even heart to consol each-other as they lost everything.


Stay tune hope you like it
Nikita & megha
Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago
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INDEX
Part1 Page3

Part2 Page9

Part3 Page12

Part4 Page17

Part5 Page23
Part5

Part6 Page29
Part 6

Part7 (A n B) Page32
Part7 (A & B)

Part8(A n B) Page36

Part9 Page39

Part10 pAGE43

Part11 Page47

Part12 Page51
Edited by megbans - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice and interesting start 😊
Continue soon and thanks or the PM.
Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Interesting. Finally ur back with ur new story. The concept was interesting nd amazing. Armaan a spoil brat, a casinova, nd a bad boy. On the other hand ridz is innocent soul, nd an orphan. Waiting how they fall in love. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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looking forward to read more
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very interesting. ...waiting for more...
cont soon...
:)
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Woww..
New ar story...
Loved the concept...

N megha ill surely folow tgis story of urs..!!

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