PEHLA PYAAR PEHLA EHSAAS(PART12) 25. 09.16 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

362

Views

51.5k

Users

53

Likes

796

Frequent Posters

megbans thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Update kab dogiii...??????????????????????

aaj raat yaa kal milega update 😛
Ruppkotha thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

aaj raat yaa kal milega update 😛



Kal kare so aj kare...
Aj kare so ab...
To kyun pare kal k piche sab...
Aj hi karde na rj...
Plzzz😳

cuteshilpa thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Hey love the paet it was awseomee update soob
Ruppkotha thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Where is the part yaar...
U were suppossed to update today na...
Where is it...???????????????????

niki795 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm..
megbans thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#56

PEHLA PYAAR PEHLA EHSAAS

PART2


MALLIK MANSION

Avantika walked in mallik mansion early from her office hours and seeing her a servant walks in and offered her a glass of water and seeing her, her shanky comes in he is the loyal worker of malliks and more than worker he is a family for them even armaan respected him as he spends his part of child hood with him as shanky used to take care of little armaan and then seeing him avantika tells him about her and harish plans as

Av: "shanky...mera aur harish ka suitcase humaare room se leke car mein rakhwa do...main aur harish...kuch kaam se India jaa rahe hain."

S: "ok badi baby lekin aapki packing mera matlab aap aur saab ji subh se office meiin the"

Av: "jii par humara saman aap ko tou pata hii hain tayar rehta hain ek ek bag aise single emergency ke liyye so please aap zara suitcase car meiin rakhva dijiye thank you"

She said and shanky nodded and moved towards their room saying

S: "jii badi baby"

Rahul who came out from the room getting ready for the office as his working hours are late as he has one meeting in noon heard avantika and shanky's conversation so he asked

Ra: "good morning chachi...aap kahin jaa rahein ho kya...???"

He asked from his chachi as he comes and stands close to her and avantika smiled seeing him he always respect them as his own parents and avantika too loved him like his own son like his armaan so she smiled and caressing his hairs she

Av: "good morning rahul beta... haan voh main aur harish kuch dino ke liye India jaa rahe hain..Mumbai...Voh..Mumbai mein jo sanjeevani hospital hain na...wahan main aur harish trusties hain...toh wahan meeting hai baaki trusties ke saath...toh vahin jaa rahe hain...4-5 dino mein aa jayenge. kuch urgent kaam hain beta"

She tells him her and harish's plans and then rahul nodded and responded to him as

Ra: " oh okay chachi...wese mere bhi ek friend ki shaadi hai...New York mein...toh main bhi kal wahan jaa raha hun kal bas fir shaadi attend karke...2 din mein wapas aaa jaunga.."

And listening to rahu's plans avantika's face lines changed into tensed ones as suddenly she is thinking if rahul is going too then who is going to take care of armaan they are leaving not having any tension because they knows rahul is there who will take care of armaan in their absence if she knows about rahul's plans she'll surely cancel theirs though armaan did not talk to them but still she is his mother how she can leave knowing her son'll be drunk in his absence seeing her quite rahul somewhere knows her thoughts he himself did not knows about his chachi's plans if he knows he surely not going to attend his friend's marriage and this is another problem in Mallik Mansion no body discuss their plane along each other so

Ra: "chachi kya hua"

He nudged her and then avantika comes back from her trance but she did not say anything she just speaks

Av: "okay...umm... rahul..."

Seeing her hesitating rahul knows he is right so he just

Ra: "ji chachi main jaanta hun aap armaan bhai ke liyye tensed ho kii peeche se bhai kaise manage karenge mujhe chachi aapke programme ke baare meiin pehle pata hota tou main nahiin jaata...chachi main abhi bhi cancel"

But she is cut short in between as avantika speaks up she just

Av: "rahul son aisa kuch nahiin hain i agree main tumhara plan sun kar disturb thi soch rahii thi armaan kii chinta thi mujhe par iska matlab yeh nahiin hain kii tum aapne friend kii shaadi meiin na jao yeh humari mistake hain kii humne tumhe aapne plans ke baare meiin nahiin bataya aur frankly yeh merii galati hain maine aapne ghar meiin yeh baat rakhi hii nahiin kii discuss karen merii galati hain yeh"

She said sadly and rahul moved closer and wiped tear in her eyes and then hugging her he

Ra: "chachi jo ho gayya ose chod dijiye aap dekhiyega humare ghar meiin bhi koi aisa aayega jo deewaren humare beech khadi ho gayyi hain na chahte hue chahte hue oonhein dur kar degi aap dekhiyega aap chachi aur bhai bhi aapke saath honge chachi"

He said and avantika smiled hearing his positive thoughts and

Av: "sach meiin rahul"

She asked as she feels a new hope in her heart and in her eyes hearing rahul and rahul nodded

Ra: "jii chachi bilkul aisa hii hoga aab bhagwan jii ko humara exam aasan karna hii hoga right"

Av: "han acha sun aapne dost kii shaadi meiin jaa raha haiin tou please beta grab a new suit for yourself too aab i don't need to hear your as always chachi aabhi tou liya tha' nothing doing lena haiin ok aur aapne bhai ko le jaana he has a good taste ok"

Ra: "jii chachi ok"

Av: "rahul beta umm"

Ra: "jii chachi kahiye naa aab aap mujhse bhi batane meiin hichkichayeng... kahiye na please chachi"

He insisted knowing his chachi and then avantika smiled and finally she just

Av: "voh...main aur harish...india jaa rahe hain...4-5 dino ke liye...toh hum ek baar armaan se milna chahate hain...tumhe toh pata hai...ke voh humse baat bhi nahi karta...toh ek baar agar tum..."

Ra: " jii chachi kyoon nahiin don't worry chahchi...main koshish karunga...ke bhai..aap dono se milke jaye"

Avantika smiled and nodded and kissed rahul's for head and then rahul

Ra:" chachi wese aapki flight kitne baje ki hai"

Av: "sham 7 baje ki"

Ra:" okay chachi...bye,...main office jaa raha hun. aur main bhai ko lekar direct airport par hii aapse milunga bye chachi love you chachi"

Avantika smiled and waved at him as he kissed her cheek

Av: "bye rahul beta and love you and thank you beta"

And as rahul left avantika just has a smile and

Av: "hope mera rahul aaj armaan ko laane meiin kamyab ho jaaye i just hope"

She prayed in her heart and go to check her preparations for her trip.


MALLIK OFFICE

Armaan was working in his office as it was afternoon time... and when armaan was lost in his work he din't remember anything as like having lunch or anything. It was only rahul who look after it..that Armaan had his lunch or not..it was one such day...when rahul went inside armaan's cabin...only to see every day scene..he went and

Ra: "bhai...ab baaki kaam baad mein...abhi lunch time hai...toh chalo...lets eat.."

Armaan looked up from his lappy...and seeing rahul

Ar: "haan rahul bas 5 minute aur..."

He said and got busy in his work...but rahul was frustrated...and

Ra: "bhai...bass haan...aapka roz ka yahi excuse hai...ab band karo...aur chalo...aur wese bhi mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai..."

Saying so rahul shut armaan's laptop..and holding armaan's hand he took him to the cafeteria. They went to cafeteria and rahul orderd their lunch and came back and sat on his seat...

Ra: "actually bhai mujhe aapse baat karni thi..."

Ar: "haan...rahul bol na.."

Ra: "bhai mujhe do din ke liye New York jaana hai...voh mere ek dost ki shaadi hai..toh usne bulaaya hai..mujhe"

Ar: "haan...toh jaa na rahul isme puchhne waali kya baat hai.."

Ra: "thanks bhaii i know i can go mujhe naa actually aapnein liyye kuch shopping karni thi tou can you please accompany me please naa"

He asked he did not thought to talk about his parents in between their lunch as he knows his anger if he gets angry he'll just leave his lunch so he and

Ar:''off course rahul ismein poochen kii kya baat hain i'll come yaar''

He said as he start eating his food and rahul smiled and

Ra:''thanks bhai you are the best bhaii in this complete universe love''

A:''love you too''

He said and then they ate their food talking generally and casually and as rahul finds armaan finished his lunch he

Ra: "uumm...bhai...ek baat aur kahni thi.."

Ar: "haan...bol na rahul.."

Armaan said while eating the last bite of his food..

Ra: "bhai...voh..."

Ar: "bol na rahul.."

He prompted him as he is hesitating in saying and

Ra: "bhai...uumm...voh chachu aur chachi...India jaa rahe hain...kisi kaam se...toh voh jaane se pahle ek baar aapse milna chahate the..."

Rahul said gathering all his courage and in one blow and Armaan on listening to this became furious...he did not like to talk about his parents to anyone..he listening to this pushed his food plate angrily...and while standing up he said

Ar: "I don't care rahul...voh kahin aaye yaa kahin jaaye...mujhe koi farak nahi padhta...aur keh dena unse..jab unke pass mere liye time nahi tha...toh ab mere pass unke liye nahi hai.."

Armaan without listening to any other word from rahul he went away back to his office. Armaan for some reasons never like to talk about his parents to anyone not even rahul as it always pained him and as much he tried to remember all those memories just talks about them makes him remember everything. It always refreshed the wounds of his past in which he yearned to get the love of his parents but never got. He was send to boarding school in his 12 years and from that time he is in Hostel and when he use to come back...his parents never spent time with him.. as the time pass he understood that his parents were way too busy to earn money to led them forget that they have a child who is waiting for them..yearning for their love in his life they provide him best education each and everything clothes , toys his every desire fulfilled before he even ask but his parents forgets that he needs their time, their love, their hugs, their wishes for himself like a normal child but that never happened and that things start growing him away from his parents and in all these 15 years he is lonely then eventaully he did not crave for them and the frustration in his heart leads one thing to another and as time pass he start hating his parents...and start getting drunk and do all those things which can make him forget his grief...the pain of his life..which is given by his parents..but he knew nothing can lessen the pain which his parents has given him he is just fooling his heart that drinks one night stands getting involved in relationships''ll erase his pain but he knows deep down it's not going to happen but he keeps on trying this but every time he failed miserably.




INDIA

SANJEEVANI

After another hectic day riddhima was returning home...she went to her cabin to collect her things...she was picked her mobile from the drawer to see any missed calls..she saw at least 10 missed calls on her phone of her best friend...she smiled at her friend and called her back...while leaving from sanjeevani...

Ri: "hii...kya baat itni saari missed calls kyun di..?"

Girl: aree baat hi kuch aisii hai ke raha ni gaya...''

Ri: "achha chal meri duty wese bhi over ho gayi hai...toh lets meet ...mera aaj club jaane ka mann hai...toh wahan milte hain..okay...thik ek ghante baad..."

Girl: ":okay...bye...cya..."

Ri: "bye..."

Riddhima went home and took a warm shower and to relaxes all her nerves which were tired due too her hectic schedule in hospital...she came out of the hospital wrapped in towel..she picked a dark peacock colour dress which matching jewels and got ready within an hour...looking esteem beauty with only eyeliner dark red lipstick with her hair open...


CLUB

She reached club and was waiting for her friend to come so that they can move inside..she looked at the entrance to see a girl coming in black color dress which comes up to her knees revealing her long bare legs visible...she wore little makeup with eyeliner and lip gloss and little blusher on her both cheeks...looking gorgeous as ever. Riddhima smiled and moved towards the girl hugging her while the girl reciprocating it...




Ri: "kya muski tu phir late..."

Mu: "kya karun yaar...jese hi main hospital se nikalne waali thi...mujhe emergency ke liyye page aa gaya...and I had to go for it..."


Riddhima smiled and both went inside the club to enjoy their night and talk about the news which muski had to tell.

Muskaan chadha was also an orphan and was leaving in sanjeevani orphanage with riddhima...muskaan was the first girl with whom riddhima became friend in there..with muskaan's bubbly nature and unique way of laughing made her different from all others. if riddhima was sweet and very polite muskaan was a bubbly natured girl ready to pounce on anyone who try to take panga with her or her best friend riddhima. Muskaan had also done her medical with riddhima but was selected in different hospital in Mumbai itself...she was an cardiologist... And earlier use to live with riddht noima buw has as separate flat as her hospital is in different direction of Mumbai...



INSIDE THE CLUB

Both riddhima n muskaan after dancing and having a drink made their way towards club restaurant...so that they can sit and talk...after ordering food..

Ri: "toh ab bol kya baat hai...jot u mujhe batana chahati thi.."

Mu: "ridhzi mujhe US ke sanjeevani mein transfer mil gayi hai...isn't that great.."

Ri: "congrats muski...i am so happy for you...but tu mujhe akela chhodhke chali jayegi.."

Riddhima said making a sad face..

Mu: "oho..ridhzi...tu kyun chimta karti hai..tujhe kya lagta hai...main apna transfer karwaungi toh tera ni karaungi kya,.."

Riddhima looked at her in shock and said

ri: "kya matlab..."

mu: "matlab yeh...ke maine tere hospital mein already tere US sanjeevani mein transfer ki application de dithi...aur voh kal tak confirm bata denge..tujhe.."

Riddhima smiled and thanked her and god for giving her such a great friend...both finished their dinner and decided to go to riddhima's house as next day was Sunday so they decide to watch film and shop on that day.


LONDON AIRPORT

Avantika and harish reached the airport...as their flight was half n hour late...avantika was continuously looking at the entrance of airport...harish noticed it and

Ha: "kya dekh rahi ho avantika..."

Av: "voh..rahul se maine kaha tha ke armaan ko bole humein see off karne ke liye...toh un dono ka wait kar rahi hun.."

Ha: "aur tumhe lagta hai...ke armaan aayega.."

Av: "shayad a jaye...rahul ke kahne pe..humse toh voh baat bhi nahi karta..."

Before harish could say more..rahul came their alone with a sad face and said

Ra: "sorry chachi...maine armaan bhai se baat karne ki koshish ki but voh meri baat sune hi nahi..and chale gaye..."

Av: "its okay rahul...i know galti humaari hai...humne hi apne bte ko khud se alag kiya hai...jab usse humaare pyaar ki...saath ki zarurat thi hum the hi nahin uske pass...aur ab toh voh itni dur chala gaya hai humse...aur ab toh nafrat bhi karta hai..."

Rahul while wiping avantika's tears said

Ra: "nahi chachi aisa nahi hai...bhai aap dono se nafrat ni karte...bas thode naraaz hain m sure...voh jaldi hi aap dono ko maaf kar denge.."

Avantika smiled tearfully and nodded and went into the checking area along with harish after hugging and blessing rahul and rahul now as he is tensed how armaan will cope in his absence and his parents he just prayed to the god for the betterment for the miracle happened in his life for sending angel in his life.


MUMBAI AIRPORT


Avantika and harish landed on Mumbai Airport and soon they spotted the car they called for as harish liked to drive by himself only they just called for car and then as soon they settled in the car harish looked at the streets of Mumbai and could not help but to speak

Ha: "kitni badal gayya na Mumbai yeh sheher yakeen hii nahiin hota yeh vahii shehar hain jahan mujhe tum milli thi"

He said and avantika is surprised hearing his emotion full voice she herself did not remember when she heard it lately and

Av: "samay ke saath tou insan badal jaate hain harish yeh tou fir sheher hain tou iska tou badalna ootna mushkil nahiin hain naa"

She said a deep meaning underlying her sentence and the pain harish can clearly feels that as he feels that pain also and then he

Ha: "badalne ke zimevar bhi tou hum hii hain naa avantika pata hii naa chala Mumbai hii nahiin hum tou khud ko bhi yahin chod gayye poorani Avantu kab sirff Avantika Mallik reh gayyi aur main sirff Business Man Harish Mallik ban kar reh gayya tumhare Harish se tou aaj main khud hii ajnabee ho gayya hun avantika"

He said as he recollected the love filled days of their lives making avantika speechless and she looked at him having so much emotions in her eyes and

Av: "sach kaha tumne main bhi oos Avantika ko kahin kho hii chuki hun jiske liyye ooska Harish ooska Armaan sabse pehle ate the aur oos badlav ke liyye sirff main zimedar hun aur main kisii ko blame nahiin kar sakti galatiyan hui hain mujhse kuch aisii galatiyan jo mere bete ke liyye aaj gunah ban gayyi hain harish"

She said as few tears falls from her eyes and then suddenly out of blue

Ha: "kya itni der ho gayyi hain kii hum oon poorane harish aur poorani avantu ko nahiin la sakte jaise aaj yeh sheher humein milla hain fir avantu kya sach meiin bahut der ho gayyi hain aab"

He asked looking at her intently and avantika too looked at his face they have same emotions craving for each other and after getting everything their faces clearly showed the defeat they faced in their lives and before anybody of them can reacted suddenly avantika feels a flash of lights that breaks her eye lock with harish and she shouted on top of her lungs pushing the steering wheel out of right side as harish saw the truck coming in towards them as

Av: "harish"

And then everything gets blank for them and just in seconds riddhima as she is on her way back to her home after dropping muskaan she finds a car hit by the tree and immediately she stopped the car muskii's as its late she takes muski's as its safe rather than her scooty and then go towards the car and as soon she opened the passenger seat she finds a lady and man severely injured as blood is oozing out from their heads, elbows and hands and she looked at them thankfully both are conscious and then she just

Ri: "aunty are you fine?"

She asked as she helped her to let her come out of the car and

Av: "my husband"

She nodded as she speaks to her as she tells her to get her husband first so

Ri: "yes aunty please aap aayiye main uncle ki bhi help kar rahii hun aayiye aunty please aap"

She said and then she moved out from her seat with the help of her and she let her sit in her car first as seeing her blood oozing out she knows she'll fell unconscious if she keeps on standing and then she help the man out from driver seat and then settling him inside her car she gives him water and

Ri: "uncle aap theek hain?"

As he nodded and looked at his wife then riddhima just

Ri: "uncle aunty aap logon ko bahut chot lagii hain please aap logon ko first aid kii zarurat hain mera ghar yahiin paas meiin hain aap please mere ghar chaliye aur please don't worry i am qualified doctor at Sanjeevani so please aayiye"

And then she helped the man laid on back seat as seeing his head a severe injury knowing his head'll spin and helped the lady in passenger seat putting the seat belt and then drove towards home and as soon she reached her house she helped them to settle in her small living room and she herself immediately rushed to take her first aid box and soon enough she treated both of them bandaging their injuries and giving them painkillers she asked them

R: "uncle aunty main aapke liyye thoda juice laati hun aap logon ko weakness ho rahii hogi naa main ati hun"

She said and as she moved towards the kitchen avantika and harish looked at each-other she is so humble how beautifully she takes care of them, the strangers they are for her and they treated them like they are her own parents so adorably and they bless this girl from the bottom of their heart as avantika's eyes roamed around here and there her eyes fell on small tv lounge and she finds a picture frame placed on there and she is shocked to see the picture and she nudged to harish who is surprised seeing her expression and then he looked at the direction there she is pointing and he is equally shocked to see that frame and before they can speak anything riddhima comes back having juice for them as she comes closer avantika could not help but to ask her as

Av: "beta yeh tasveer kisii hain may i know if you don't mind beta"

And riddhima is surprised at the question but she replied nevertheless

Ri: "aunty yeh mere mumma aur papa hain"

She said that left both avantika and harish shocked as they saw their best friends from the college Samriti And Shashank Gupta 's picture and

Av: "matlab yeh sam aur shashank kii betii hain"

And unknowingly these words escaped from her mouth




Precap_

Ri:''aunty aap kya kehna chahti hain matlab mera mom dad''

Av:''jii riddhima beta aapke muma aur papa aur hum dono best friends the college ke time se''

Ha:''han aab batao aapko kahan hain mera dost''

And just that thought brings tears in riddhima's eyes.


LONDON

Ar:''ghar jaakar kya karna hain vivi aab tou rahul bhi gayya hua hain aur kaunsa ghar vo tou bas kaanch ka bana mahal hain''

Vi:''maya yehii sahi samay hain armaan ko poori tarah aapa karne ke liyye so''

M:''han''


P.S.

sorry for posting late readers...actually u al know the festivals were around and got buzy in that... :D

but promise next time se i'll try to post soon...

hope u all will love this part... 😊


love

nikki

&

megha


Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago
desire_nikki thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#57
superb part di...!! loved it..!! poor armaan..!! finally ridz and muski coming to US..!!
Avantika and harish met riddhima...well that was nice turn in the story..1
will be eagerly waiting for next part..!!
and precap was again a shocking one..!!
maya and vivek together.!! OMG...what are they upto..!!
continue soon.!!
take care
Sugar_Cinnamon thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Really liked this part.
And it's interesting as well...
Continue soon and thanx for PM
ruc_121 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#59
superb
cntnue soon ...
waiting for next update !! :)
\
ShahSAIR thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Lagta hai Avantika n Harish ki lyf finaly track pe arahi hai bt fayda kya Arman ki puri lyf spoil hogayi.. Ridhima n Muskan U.S arahe hai finaly ab hoga Pehle Pyar Ka Pehla Ehsas hehehehehe.. Rahul is so sweet he knws hw wil Arman react isilye usey pehle khane diya. Accidnt hogaya bt fayda huwa gaye thei India 2 aayenge 4 i mean to say Ridhima n Muskan b Aayenge Malik Mansion oftrol Shashank n Simriti ki beti hai bt wat abt precap hope Arman virgin hi rahey Ridhima k aane tk..lol... Bt i m serious coz Arman sirf uski Ridhima ka hai. Nice update ab baki updates b dou jaldi jaldi

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

2 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

4 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: heavenlybliss

5 months ago

Pyaar Ka Tropefest - My Series Of 5 Crossover Couple One-Shots

Hello everyone! I will be posting my 5 one-shots over here which I sent in for the Pyaar Ka Trope-fest contest. They are all standalones and...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".