~Lethal Liaisons~ MaNan FF chapter 7, page 34

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sadhanager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Nice chapter 1 dear.i love triangles where every wheel is active participant.so you have
given imp to all 3 characters equally. Now I am ready to get shock vibes.waiting for
next update

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shreya

@.Lilith.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: -Neelambari-
Woww..amazing update..
Whats there bw dhruni...y is dhruv snapping at her...
Agree with manik that dhruv is blind for sure.
Loved the Manan part a lot.
Next part soonish plzzz

'Dhruv is blind'- that would seem like a natural reaction to the whole thing, I'll ask you to 'read between the lines'. 😉

Thanks a lot for appreciating! I'm so glad that you liked it! 😃

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sadhanager
Nice chapter 1 dear.i love triangles where every wheel is active participant.so you have
given imp to all 3 characters equally. Now I am ready to get shock vibes.waiting for
next update

I'm trying to give every character importance in each of my chapter. Like Dishu pointed out the establishment of Cabir and Dhruv's friendship. 😳

Truth be told, THIS Fab 5 is wholly different from the actual Fab 5. 😉

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Wow! That was simply amazing!

It was a pleasant read. I liked how you gave space to each of the Fab 5 and showed us a bit of them before MaNan come to play.

Really liked the Dhruv-Cabir part.

Keep writing,

Kiret

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Suha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Woah woah woah that was so awesome! You just have to update soon. Please? You've got me all hooked to this thing and I. can't. wait.

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

nice sht...

luved the manan phone cono...

want to knw hw the story unfolds...

waiting for next update

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-
Wow! That was simply amazing!

It was a pleasant read. I liked how you gave space to each of the Fab 5 and showed us a bit of them before MaNan come to play.

Really liked the Dhruv-Cabir part.

Keep writing,

Kiret

Yaayyy Thankiesss!! 😃

I'm sooo glad that all of you are appreciating me for giving you all a glimpse of each member of the group. 😳 Hard work paid off. 😆

Trust me, even the song selection was done after much thinking on my part- the lyrics are kinda significant to the whole story. 😉

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo
Woah woah woah that was so awesome! You just have to update soon. Please? You've got me all hooked to this thing and I. can't. wait.

*Grins BROADLY* 😃

That's REALLY flattering, you know- thanks much! 🤗

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: _keertu_
nice sht...
luved the manan phone cono...
want to knw hw the story unfolds...
waiting for next update

Thank u so much! 😳

The idea of the phone convo just came out of nowhere. 😆 I didn't wanted a cliche meeting between the two, so this is the best I could come up with. 😛