~Lethal Liaisons~ MaNan FF chapter 7, page 34

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: charminggenie
Wow intriguing and impressive to say the least.
The emphasize on that little problem of Manik which he needs to quit - so much awesomeness .

Nandini Murthy is very very interesting.

Should be awesome fun. Shelly thank you for this ride, now one more thing to look forward to.

Whoa! I'm glad that I can come up with something other than funny reviews. 😆

Even happier that you guys are catching on to the things that I'm hinting at! 😃

Thank u sooo much. 🤗

P.S- I STILL don't know your name! 😛

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Zoha Sadaqat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

it was fab...i am so excited to see what happens in near future...i love Kabir and Manik in here as usual

update soon

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: rima4ever
amazing start 👏

Thanks Dia. 😉

I'm glad u liked it. 😳

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0
it was fab...i am so excited to see what happens in near future...i love Kabir and Manik in here as usual

update soon

Thaannkuzz. 😃 😆

Poor Cabir will get a shocker of sorts! I'm trying my best to make this Manik a LOT less moronic than the actual one! 🤣

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Niya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Shellu tune ruladiya mujhe!!! 😭

🥺 😭

Oye mere Manik ko moron mat bol.. baaki sab acche isliye lagte hai kyoki wo bura lagta hai.. & ussike wajah se to saara drama ho paata hai & hum enjoy karpaate hai! 😭

Thanks for the pm & next part jaldi likh warrna ro ro kar tera FF dubodungi!!! 😆

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: N_Niya
Shellu tune ruladiya mujhe!!! 😭
🥺 😭
Oye mere Manik ko moron mat bol.. baaki sab acche isliye lagte hai kyoki wo bura lagta hai.. & ussike wajah se to saara drama ho paata hai & hum enjoy karpaate hai! 😭
Thanks for the pm & next part jaldi likh warrna ro ro kar tera FF dubodungi!!! 😆

Oye PAGAL!! Arre apna Maanik moron hai na...achha wala moron, cute wala. 🤗

Ab rona bandh kar warna tissue paper nahi...tissue paper ka BOX muh pe maarungi! 😆 Even you should know by now how I joke! 😛

Update next sat- tab tak entertain karne ka zimma sirf aur sirf apne KYY par. 😉 😆

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Mrinal Krishna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

This is great...I chanced upon it just did not know what ff meant. You really have a gift have you considered screen writing.

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: annboleyn
This is great...I chanced upon it just did not know what ff meant. You really have a gift have you considered screen writing.

OMG!!! 😲 😲 😲

This has to be THE best compliment I've ever received since I've started writing ff's (Fan fictions)!! Especially considering the fact that it is coming from someone who have no idea what ff means...this means a LOT to me! 😳 ⭐️

Trust me, there's a hell lot of talent in this forum. I personally prefer good writing to good story-telling but when it comes to myself, I try doing both at once. 😆

I've written a few OS (One shots) as well, do have a look if you can. 😳

Here's the link--> https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4150088/of-friendship-love-and-obsession-os-gallery-new-os-added-pg-5

Edited by shelly_08 - 10 years ago

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Sparks-galore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

What a pleasant read Shelly! 👏(yaar, tumhara koi aur naam hai kya? Sorry, i don't know. )

Dhruv-Cabir dynamic: Quite untouvhed on the show. Thanks for shedding some much needed light.

Dhruv-Nandini dynamic: Not the smitten boy now, is he? Will wait to watch how this pans out.

Mukti- Alya: Seem attracted to each other (interesting equation).

Manik- Nandini: Knows what he wants!! Don't we like a guy like that !😳 Will be interesting to see how she reacts. The precap looks promising 😉

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Sparks-galore
What a pleasant read Shelly! 👏(yaar, tumhara koi aur naam hai kya? Sorry, i don't know. ) My good name's Shreya. 😆

Dhruv-Cabir dynamic: Quite untouvhed on the show. Thanks for shedding some much needed light. Yepp...that's what I've wanted in this ff- exploring the dynamics between every member. 😳

Dhruv-Nandini dynamic: Not the smitten boy now, is he? Will wait to watch how this pans out. Dhruv is a pivotal character of this story- definitely someone to watch out for. 😉

Mukti- Alya: Seem attracted to each other (interesting equation). There's more than just mere 'attraction' between the two. 😉 😆

Manik- Nandini: Knows what he wants!! Don't we like a guy like that !😳 Will be interesting to see how she reacts. The precap looks promising 😉

Yeppp...not the confused teenager who's in denial, but the MAN who acts on his feelings. 😈