~Lethal Liaisons~ MaNan FF chapter 7, page 34

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-
The prologue is so damn interesting! Update the first chapter soon please? 😳

Thanks much dear...😳

Chapter 1 updated. 😊

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danceismyworld

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow Shreya!!!

It was amazing.

I completely loved it.

After reading the prologue, I thought story would continue with crime scene but you surprised me and It was pleasant one.

Even i am thinking, Is Dhruv really blind.??! How can he ignore a beautiful girl like Nandini.

Loved Manik and Nandini's conversation and Manik deleted the last call. 😆Wow!!!

So Manik is alcoholic. Interesting.😆

I also loved Dhruv-Cabir's conversation.😳

Update soon

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: vaishiksg
Arre waah !! Loved the prologue. Read all your MaNan OS yesterday..!! You write really good.
Continue soon. Looking forward to it.

Woww thanks!! 😃

Usually my OS's don't deviate much from the actual show- so its easier to write em. Dunno if I can do the same justice to this. 😕

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: danceismyworld
Wow Shreya!!!
It was amazing.
I completely loved it.
After reading the prologue, I thought story would continue with crime scene but you surprised me and It was pleasant one.
Even i am thinking, Is Dhruv really blind.??! How can he ignore a beautiful girl like Nandini.
Loved Manik and Nandini's conversation and Manik deleted the last call. 😆Wow!!!
So Manik is alcoholic. Interesting.😆
I also loved Dhruv-Cabir's conversation.😳
Update soon

Thanks re Dishu!! 😃

I really wanted to establish Dhruv and Cabir in my ff as they both are sooo poles apart (even in the serial). Once again, you pointed out that particular thing. 😳

Mark Dhruv's words regarding Nandini...everyone thinks she's hot/beautiful but him. He calls her an 'opportunist' and says that 'she's not the only beautiful girl he have come across', so yeah- you get the picture. 😆

This Maanik is not as dumb as the actual Maanik, hence proved. 😆

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danceismyworld

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: shelly_08

Thanks re Dishu!! 😃

I really wanted to establish Dhruv and Cabir in my ff as they both are sooo poles apart (even in the serial). Once again, you pointed out that particular thing. 😳

Mark Dhruv's words regarding Nandini...everyone thinks she's hot/beautiful but him. He calls her an 'opportunist' and says that 'she's not the only beautiful girl he have come across', so yeah- you get the picture. 😆

This Maanik is not as dumb as the actual Maanik, hence proved. 😆

that's what I loved that you give proper space to Cabir and Dhruv specially Dhruv.

@red, So true.😆

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: danceismyworld

that's what I loved that you give proper space to Cabir and Dhruv specially Dhruv.

@red, So true.😆

Every character is important in this fic, each's life is intertwined with the other. I have introduced a few new characters as well, just hoping that the idea will be well-received. 😳