~Lethal Liaisons~ MaNan FF chapter 7, page 34

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shreya

@.Lilith.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: coolRD
Now this is something really awesome!!!!! Tsk! I want to read moooree 😭 😭 please please please update sooon..

I've sent you a buddy request. Please accept it. And do pm me whenever you update next (pretty please 😳 )

Thank you sooo much!! I'm glad you liked it. 😃

Update might be up by tonight itself. If not, then tomorrow for sure. 😳

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shreya

@.Lilith.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: shravya.kr
Ooo romantic thriller. ...very very well written. ..amazed with the sinc of story. ...very very interesting. .I always was a fan of ur writing. .u know that😊😊
Enjoyed it completely. ...raw manan ufff rufff. ..blew my mind away. ..😆 loved it shelly
Please update soon...can't wait girl. ..
Really appreciate this piece of work. .very very different from the normal 1s. ..that's shelly right. ..ha ha. .😃😆

Shravyaa... 🤗 🤗

So sorry for the late reply dear!! I'm so glad (and flattered) that you liked it...you guys are the reason I keep writing. 😊

And yeah different/weird/random is me- so is my writing. 😎

I know I didn't make any sense. 😆

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Shreya Pokharel

@-Loq-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: .Lilith.

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Kuushi
Wow..I don't know how I missed this ff until now..its thriller romance my fav genre ...n manan uff intense
I saw ur post where u said u updated a new chapter that led me here..read all 3 in one go its awesome got me hooked to this story..now please update soon eagerly waiting 😊
And I read ur other works on manan too n u are a damn good writer 👏 n I'll be waiting for the next chapter 😊

Thanks a ton dear!! 😃 😃

Yes I'll update it soon enough, probably tonight itself.

I'm glad that you liked it! 😳 😳

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shreya

@.Lilith.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: chair1992
Its so annoying when I miss a great story, glad I found it.
Its sometimes hard to find a story where I can actually read it, i dont understand the "written hindi" and the short words in stories is just frustrating
But thank you For writing in complete words and sentences

I liked how you potrayed Nandu in a very different way
I loved how Manik never takes a NO for an answer 😃

Well...what to say, I'm flattered! 😳 😳

My mom has always taught me that when you're writing, stick to one language. Even I choose to discontinue reading FF's when I see hindi lines and dialogues being punched in! 🥱

I had to slide away from the ACTUAL characters a bit in order to make this story, so there you have it. 😆

Thanks a lot, btw. 😃

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shreya

@.Lilith.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: .Lilith.

Hi...thank you so much for appreciating!! 😃 😃 Can I have a name? 😳

LOL, I've written it in the opening post that there's no fluff in this story and I'm no good at penning down cute/sweet scenes. I can only do the hot and sexy ones! 😎

@Bold You wouldn't wanna know. 😈

Hey yeaaa sure my name is Kashmi.. 😃

Well I'm game for the untamed one anytime babe bring it on..😈

You're doing an amazing job at writing just don't stop and yeaaa update soon and yeaaa give us Manan in every update and yea I love you for the way you write and yea I end my ranting here.. 😆

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shreya

@.Lilith.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey yeaaa sure my name is Kashmi.. 😃

Well I'm game for the untamed one anytime babe bring it on..😈

You're doing an amazing job at writing just don't stop and yeaaa update soon and yeaaa give us Manan in every update and yea I love you for the way you write and yea I end my ranting here.. 😆

Updated above! 😃 😃

That's some really good timing you have Kashmi...and yeah, very uncommon and beautiful name too! 😳

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@rubys07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Res😈

EDITED.

You made me wait one and a half day xtraa so yeah. Payback Kinda. I guess🤔

BUT. Uff what an update man. All the mystery, and I LOVELOVELOVE mysteries, specially the ones related to murders. And unlike the show, I feel for this Alya. Why Shellz. It could've been Mukti no? Why does she get to live all the time. Bahut nainsaafi hain😳

And Manik. Oh boy. Your update and then the epi. I read it again now, and it's too much. Mera Manik, always the one hurt, broken and no one to turn to for a moment of solace...except Nandini. I simply LOVED the way you've shown Nandini's confusion and hesitation at Manik's question. Why, exactly, does she care? Unlike the show's Nandini, she doesn't "love" him no? So instead, she answers his question with a question. If she'd taken the "cause I care for you" or that sort of mushy gushy route, it would've seemed OOC, at least to me.
And Manik, breaking down; broken Manik, lost Manik, scared Manik, helpless Manik. Shellz your writing is so, so AMAZING, touch wood. I can still see the whole scene playing out in front of me. Oh and thanks for that neck-sniffing thing (sounds so weird when you put it like that tho🤣) Even though exploring other things ain't such a bad idea, I have this HUGE crush on the neck wala thing. Feelzy types☺️

You are a star bas. No wonder I'm such a hopeless fan of your writing😳

p.s. I simply cannot wait to see how you deal with the case. And I already like Aditya

p.p.s Jaldi update nai bhi karegi toh chalega. I have exams so if you do, I can only give you loads of Resses😳 and this FF deserves all the louu, so pliss. Reham😳

Edited by rubys07 - 10 years ago

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shravya

@shravya.kr

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Woooh...just can't get enough of this suspense thriller...never concertrated so much to read a fan friction...prove hogaya ki thu j.k Rowling ka fan hai. ...dropping clues here and der. ..and an ultimate bang in the end...

I throughly enjoying the characters nandini and manik...especially nandini!!!! Great going gal

Seriously getting dam interesting...and u rock!!!

Thank u! !!! Get well soon

cheers