~Lethal Liaisons~ MaNan FF chapter 7, page 34 - Page 15

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.Lilith. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

If you don't un-res I'll CYBER-STRANGLE YOU!!! 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
OK You just...GAH I have no words!!!!!

This was ASDSDFSFDFD!! AWESOME!

AND you used Maroon 5 song! Like the song that has been on my playlist for OVER 2 years!

This was so good, so good Shells!! Really did come back with a Bang! Im guessing MM thought that the Bang was pretty good too ;)

Cannot wait for the next one, do not make us wait long!



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Originally posted by: MKrayZee

OK You just...GAH I have no words!!!!!


This was ASDSDFSFDFD!! AWESOME!

AND you used Maroon 5 song! Like the song that has been on my playlist for OVER 2 years!

This was so good, so good Shells!! Really did come back with a Bang! Im guessing MM thought that the Bang was pretty good too ;)

Cannot wait for the next one, do not make us wait long!




I am PHLATTERED yo. 😆 😆

Guess what, I even made a vm on them on this song but couldn't post it on YT- f***ed up copyright rules! 😡 So I put it to some good use. 😆

Distraction over...the game continues. 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm on mobile but I'll unres. Pakka

EDITED.

I EDITED SEE?😎

OMG Shells I usually don't read much FF coz the wait is too much and the plots are usually meh😆 But I've ALWAYS been a fan of your writing. Hamesha types

What a comeback dude! YOU ROCK.



In a totally platonic, one-behen-to-another way. Kay😎

And Maroon 5. Oh my❤️

Dude seriously, I'm not a commenter, and a very late unresser. Ask Bacchi or anyone who knows me here. BUT I UNRESD within THE SAME FREKING DAY COZ IT DESERVES IT. IT DESERVES ALL THE LOVE.

AND I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT.
Matlab. What FSOG is even? E. L. James. Doobe mor😆
See THIS is how you write it. It's hot, super sexy and yet doesn't make me want to puke. Rather I can drool over it all day long. LOVE.

PLEASE SHELLS LIKHTE THAK PLIIIS. I've got exams and other shit coming but if I survive I promise I'll res read and unres em ALL😭

And don't make us wait for the next update the way CVs be making us wait for a proper MaNan ILU😳

Your storyline.
Plot development.
Character sketch.
EVERYTHING.
Oshadharon.

I WANT MORE. PHAAAST☺️

PLIIIS


Edited by rubys07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Edited- sorry I should have done this way sooner,,
OHMYEFFINGGOD WHY WHY WHY DID I NOT KNOW ABOUT THIS BEFORE!!!!!????

I remember reading your prologue a long time back and I loved it. But somethign or the other always used came up, so i never got around to read any of the chapters. Infact, I avoid reading many FFs as they've never interested me much, and the wait is too long for the ones I do like.
BUT THIS...
This is AMAZING!!!

I actually went back and reread your prologue and your previous chapters!! OH, they were so good. YOU MADE EVERYONE WAIT, BUT THIS IS SO WORTH IT THOUGH <3
The last chapter is so hot... i can't even. uff <3

Teasing Nandhu, Flirty Manik, Cabir ,Mukti, Dhruv, and ofcourse Harshad.. You've nailed them all!!👏👏

And you left us with a cliff hanger!!!!
Update soon plz please pretty please, the suspense is literally killing me.
So many questions... What is the mystery.. who is behind these murders... who is the cryptic caller...
i normally don't like waiting for too long.. yet this i feel like waiting for the answers, because this is so worth it.

What i loved: you put mystery, suspense, humor and intense romance all in one story.
What I loved more: sometimes, too much stuff going on can turn the story messy... but you actually made it all work. and the end result is AWESOME.

Keep Writing Shellz <3
WE WANT MORE!!!! 😆

Edited by poopymaster - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Bhang on and Bhangilicious.
Reserved to write more laterish.
Edited by AnomanderRake - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shells - That Grey has nothing on this. You woman clearly created enough friction that can burn the place down. Dinner just got a new game rolling.

SUHA- NOT FOR KIDS.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome storyline!!!! Read all four parts in one go...
loving the suspense and thrill.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rubys07

I'm on mobile but I'll unres. Pakka

EDITED.

I EDITED SEE?😎

OMG Shells I usually don't read much FF coz the wait is too much and the plots are usually meh😆 But I've ALWAYS been a fan of your writing. Hamesha types Haaayyee! Words have that kind of power, you see- the words by all of you never fail to inspire and encourage me to keep writing!

What a comeback dude! YOU ROCK.



In a totally platonic, one-behen-to-another way. Kay😎 I'm all for a kiss always..chaste or otherwise. 😆

And Maroon 5. Oh my❤️ I see so many Maroon 5 bhakts! 😃 *Pats self for the song choice*

Dude seriously, I'm not a commenter, and a very late unresser. Ask Bacchi or anyone who knows me here. BUT I UNRESD within THE SAME FREKING DAY COZ IT DESERVES IT. IT DESERVES ALL THE LOVE. Bacchi has a LOT to answer to! 😡 But *Haayyee* again at your words! 🤗

AND I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT.
Matlab. What FSOG is even? E. L. James. Doobe mor😆 Or doobe mora ta akhon overdue hoe geche! 😳 If not for my writing but just for creating Anastasia Steele. 🤢
See THIS is how you write it. It's hot, super sexy and yet doesn't make me want to puke. Rather I can drool over it all day long. LOVE. Like I said, words have that kind of power. 😆 A writer should know where to draw the line, not because of 'lack of creative liberty', but because of TASTE!

PLEASE SHELLS LIKHTE THAK PLIIIS. I've got exams and other shit coming but if I survive I promise I'll res read and unres em ALL😭

And don't make us wait for the next update the way CVs be making us wait for a proper MaNan ILU😳 Don't worry, I just have to rewatch the cheek-rubbing part even if MaNan be singing "Lambi judaaiii" in order to keep this shit going. 😆

Your storyline.
Plot development.
Character sketch.
EVERYTHING.
Oshadharon.

*Flattered* *Thud* *Swoon*

I WANT MORE. PHAAAST☺️

PLIIIS


.Lilith. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poopymaster

Edited- sorry I should have done this way sooner,,

OHMYEFFINGGOD WHY WHY WHY DID I NOT KNOW ABOUT THIS BEFORE!!!!!???? How I loouuu these reactions from my readers! 😎

I remember reading your prologue a long time back and I loved it. But somethign or the other always used came up, so i never got around to read any of the chapters. Infact, I avoid reading many FFs as they've never interested me much, and the wait is too long for the ones I do like.
BUT THIS...
This is AMAZING!!! Thank you ssooo much dear!! 🤗 I don't read FF's myself as, truth be told, the title is the first thing that catches MY attention, then the writing and then the story. This is the reason I came up with such a title. It's like the headline of a news story. And it's very rare that I find a good title, let alone a good story.

I actually went back and reread your prologue and your previous chapters!! OH, they were so good. YOU MADE EVERYONE WAIT, BUT THIS IS SO WORTH IT THOUGH <3
The last chapter is so hot... i can't even. uff <3 Once again- THANKS A LOT! 😃

Teasing Nandhu, Flirty Manik, Cabir ,Mukti, Dhruv, and ofcourse Harshad.. You've nailed them all!!👏👏

And you left us with a cliff hanger!!!!
Update soon plz please pretty please, the suspense is literally killing me.
So many questions... What is the mystery.. who is behind these murders... who is the cryptic caller...
i normally don't like waiting for too long.. yet this i feel like waiting for the answers, because this is so worth it. I have a flair for these kind of stories. Having been brought up on a diet of 'Sherlock Holmes', Sydney Sheldon, Feluda etc- you can't expect me to write mushy mushy romantic stories. 😛

What i loved: you put mystery, suspense, humor and intense romance all in one story.
What I loved more: sometimes, too much stuff going on can turn the story messy... but you actually made it all work. and the end result is AWESOME. I was famous amongst the Maneet fans for this style- romance, suspence, khoon-kharaba etc etc- all rolled into one. 😆

Keep Writing Shellz <3
WE WANT MORE!!!! 😆

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