a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 26

Diduuu
M gonna kill u!!!
Urghhh
No comments! 😡

heyy u updted
which is a very pleasant surprise
i wanted to read ur update n u as ususal
never fail to live up to my expectations
whtr it be sharon's guilt n her love for him
her dialogues whr emotional
it was heart touching to see her so selfless
she justified tis saying

''Love is always patient and kind. It is never jealous.

Love is never boastful or conceited.

It is never rude or selfish.

It is always ready to excuse, to trust,

to hope, and to endure whatever comes."

an applause to u for sketching a character like tis

u made her swayam's sharon today

the very prose is so beautiful

that i m numb after reading it

''.because her existence in his life
was an adjective and he her noun...
she was the imprint and he , her nostalgia...
His existence was futile without her presence...
she was the resonance in his
otherwise non-resonating life.''

This is beautiful writing.
It wasn't just the writing
that was perfectly evocative,
it was the subject

last of all swayam said those words to her
it definitely made my day 😳
i m so excited to knoe wat sharon's reaction
is gonna be 🤪
all in all a very nice beautiful update

u r definitely a writer
who writes with skill,
showing intelligence, surprise,
and command of language
hope tat u give us update of tat other ff too
waiting for ur updates

-rosy

awesome update

omggg... awsm update... finally he said it.

Damn the chap :o so emotional

Mast story h...Ab dekhna h Swayam k confession k baad dono ka reaction kya hoga...

nyc update
so finally swayam confessed his luv
w8ing fr the nxt part eagerly
update soon
n thanks fr d pm

Awesome update
gosh u love giving cliffhangers,dont ya?
juz kidding
the last line is stil ringing around me .lovd it
.keep up the gud work
.restless swayam ,his realisation.
Waiting to read more.
thnx 4 the pm.

Originally posted by: keechu91

heyyy aniii😊😊😊

im gona kill u😡

how could u do that?😡

it was better if u dont update this part,😡😡

how i will wait for next part,😆😆

huhmhuhm😭😭😭

im angry at you😡😡😡

you know im sooo happpyyy tooo😃

u update this because of me😃

yoyoyoyoyoyo😆😆

and i become the first one😃😃

you indeed shocked me😲

i knew that the shock may be swayam's realization,,but only 70%

and you made me sooo happpy

i dont know what im feeling now

full of shock😲

full of happiness for swayam's realization😆

and im angry at u, again u stopped at very wrong place 😡

how could u do that...😡😡

if i get you in my hand na, then u will be gone...😆😆😆

hmmm

about the update 👏

as always it was awesome👏

beautiful👏

at first i thought what nonsense, you jumped that scene,,

then it become okkk

i loved the whole part sooo muchh

it was so sweet and cute

the restlessness of swayam was soo cute

,he is really a buddhu😆😆

sharon's pain was so heart wrenching😭😭

she is silently crying😭

i expected that sharon tell him about her insecurity ,but about divorce

as like swayam me also got shocked😲😲

the swaron convos was so nice..👏

sharon told her fear to him was nice

he is in shock😲

and he confess his feeling😳

i soo much loved that😆😆

it was just happened at that time without his knowledge😆😆

i really hope he dont regret this...

so i love u

continue sooonnn

otherwise i will kill u

and thanku for updating early for me

sooo

it was so superb one

so update next part as soon as possible

im waiting

love u

with lots of love

keechu di