a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 24

Originally posted by: anubhutijain

Heyaa app kya likhte ho...seems like m watchin sherlock holmes aur suddenly kisi ne climax par rok diya...plsss jaldi update karnaaa aur lamabaaa vaallklaaa plsss...thanks fr d pm!..😊

Originally posted by: dvrushu

that was really cute...😳
thank god swayam choose sharon insted of that girl
nyc...
plzz do continue
n pm me tooo

Originally posted by: keechu91

heyyy aniii

i sooo hate you😡😡

how can you stop at that place,,,,,😡😡

how can i wait for the next part😡😡

you increased my curiosity

go and update the next part soon...

otherwise i will kill you😡😡

😆!😆!😆!😆!

the part was nice and good

i love it.

there is nothing much in the start but at the end you did a fantastic job👏👏

i love muskan today,she is a sweetheart...😃

how she is trying to bring swaron together was nice...

i loved sharon and muskan's bond😃

the dinner was super and lovely

sharon is affecting tooo much for swayam's touch😆😆

and im loving it😳😳😳

next was shock😲😲

you always love to shocking na?😲

hmmm

i was expecting one day radhika will come and do something..

but this soon, i never expected...

that scene was nice

a small scene , but it had the power to feel the emotions

sharon's fear😭 and swayam's confusion was nice😆

dont separate them😭😭

if you do that na,then it will be my last cmt on this ff

mind it😆

the way swayam held her hand was so sweet,😃😃

i love him more now for that...😳😳

and the way he held her was awesome

but u stopped at wrong place

so continue soon

im waiting

i dont want any surprise,u get that,,,

make him understand what sharon to him,,,

so

with lots of love

keechu di

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

The chapter was really cute

They spend thr happy hour very nicely

Thanks to muskan for tat

Althou i liked the last bit more

Whr swayam held her hand

N introduced her ...as his wife

I can feel some progress here

Swayam finally taking a stand

Was very well penned

All in all a very pleasing read

Do update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

nice update...
loved the way swayam held
her in front of theat gal..
their dinner date was awesome...
thmx for the pm..
ab ek twist pe update end ki hai..
toh punishment hai ki
tum jaldi update karo.
loved the chota sa
swaron moment too..
update soonish...

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
now y this radhika
btw I loved how swayam introduced Sharon to radhika
hope there is a positive shock from u

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

how I loved swayam's reply to Radhika

Originally posted by: Preetirox

Nice update 😊

and musky is so sweet! She wanted swaron to spend some time alone! 😳

And who is radhika now?? 😲

Happy that swayam didn't hug her back!

Hope she doesn't create problems between swaron

waiting for the surprise/shock

update soon!