a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 25

Originally posted by: Mansi98

awesome update👏

loved it❤️

in starting i tot swaron some close moment will be there😃

bt it was nthin like tat😔

swaron having dinner was nice😊

n musky is so sweet she wants both of them 2 spend some time 2ghter alone😃

bt who is dis radhika???😲

y has she came back in swayam's life????😲

happen tat nw he choose sharon from both of them😃

bt wat is dis surprise n shock??😲

Update soon😊

Thanks fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi😊

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

DIDUUU!!

Get Ready To get killed, samje!!

Itna bada shock!

Hayeee am sooo speechless!!!

Update was just fab as usual!! heehee

THe starting, hayeee lovely

Fir Swaron convos tooo gooodd!!

Muski aur Shar ke talks sooo swewett!!

Aur when they are going!!
Their fun!! Soo nice!!

Swayam removing the choc, my jaan!!!

Sharons reaction.. hearttouching

And Radhika..

That girl! Usse bichme aana hi tha na,

Mahaan!!

Aur uske wajah se Sharon bhi dukhi hogaye!

Godzz!!

Par Swayam ne kya jawaab diya!!

Amazingaaa!! Soo proud of him!!

Overall a FAADU update didu!!

TOoo goood foorrr wordss!!

How can u even think ur not good huh!

ur one of the best writers ever!

Even better than the idiotic me!!

Samjhe!!!

hehe

Chalo ab update!

Am waiting!!

Haye, I know u know ki am restless!

Par issbaar am MORE restless!!

TOh jaldi update do

Samjhee!!!

AB UPDATE!!
Loved loved loved the update

Love u even moreee!!

Tight hugzz!!

AUR DONT FORGET
UPDATE!!

Waiting...

Wondering in ur ffs world...

Your Crazy sis

Your Restless

Originally posted by: sree_swaron

Hey Ani,

First of all thanks for pm-ing the link. Thank you girl. Otherwise I would have missed such an awesome FF on SwaRon. 😊

Let's come to the story. Read the all 6 chapters in a go & it was a very different yet a nice concept. The bond of thw characters with each other is the best thing in this FF.

As for Swayam-Sharon, their friendship & committment is something realy awesome. Well I'm sure Swayam will deffo get to know his feeling hidden soon but till the time being I'm realy enjoying this bond.

Just hope there wont be any MU's due to this Radhika chick. Let swaron fall in love. Waiting for the next chappy. Carry on updating. 😊 Loved it a lot.

Love,

Sree 🤗

PART 7

Swayam and Sharon were back at home...

Swayam was sitting in the balcony thinking over the day's incident... He was not bothered a bit about meeting radhika suddenly... he was bothered by the way he was feeling about Sharon... when he had seen Sharon move away seeing him and radhika, he has felt a part of him moving away...an unknown fear had suddenly gripped his heart so tightly that he felt difficult to breath...the thought of Sharon going away from him choked him... He was sitting there on the balcony and was being fidgety and restless because of the confusion he was facing...

Sharon was standing by the wall watching swayam being restless... when she had suddenly seen radhika standing in front of them an unknown pain gripped her heart...an unknown fear soaked into her soul...a fear that she will lose her swayam now... Swayam will no longer be hers... But was their friendship so weak?? Her heart questioned...her mind immediately answered no'...their friendship will never break but was her love so strong to keep swayam hers forever...

And now , as she saw swayam sitting on the balcony...she mistook his restlessness to be not being able to accept radhika as he is married to her...

"the most important thing for me is swayam's happiness.. I can't see him like this... If he wants radhika in his life then he must not stop himself... but I know him too well... he will never turn round from responsibilities... And I am his responsibility now...dadi always says not to let the devil rule our lives...but swayam will definitely use his mind now... I have to make him listen to his heart..." she sobbed... she cried till she could cry no more...she would lose swayam forever... But the next moment she reminded herself that swayam was never hers in the first place...

After sometime she quickly dried her eyes and went towards swayam...she sat beside him and took his palm in her hands...

"swayam... Meri ek baat manega...???" she asked softly...

"haa cookie bol na...kabhi na kiya hai kya tujhe???" he asked...

"swaym zindegi bohut choti hoti hai... ise apni marzi se jeena chahiye naki pressure mein aakar..." she whispered...

"kya bol rahi hai tu??mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai..." he was thoroughly confused...

"swayam tune hi kahan tha humari shadi ke baad hum kuch badalne nahi denge...swayam tu mujhse sab kuch share kar sakta hai... just because we are married doesn't mean ki tu... I hope you don't misunderstand me swayam... I know you liked radhika... Abh wo tujhe accept kar ne ke liye taiyaar hai..tu mere liye khud ko maat rok swayam..."

"tu kya bol rahi hai Sharon..." swayam was horrified

" swayam pls chup kar ke pehele meri baat sun...

Pata hai swayam dadi hamesha kaheti hai ki humare andar devil aur god dono hai...our mind is the devil and heart is the god... devil hi wo hai jo sochta hai... Par humhe zindegi dil ki hisab se chalni chaahiye... sirf dil ki sun swayam... Dimaag ki nahi... tera dimaag kahega mera sath nivane ke liye kyunki wo tera zimidari hai par dil kahega apni pasand k hisab se jeene k liye..."

"cookie please..."

"shhh...mujhe bolne de...warna kabhi bol nahi paungi... Swayam har problem ka solution hota hai...we will find a solution for this also... we can opt for a divorce... Aur humari family ki tension tu mat lena...unhe samjhane ki zimidari meri...tu bas apni dil ki sun... please swayam... otherwise you will be spoiling three lives..."

Swayam didn't know how to react...as Sharon spoke about going away from him... as Sharon spoke about divorce ... Each time his nerves went numb... he didn't have the strength to think or speak...

Throughout his life Sharon has held his hand and led the way...there were times when they didn't know where life was leading them but Sharon never left his hand... And he followed... they didn't need to know where they were leading to... it never mattered...because they were always together...so they were never felt an inch inquisitive about the endeavour...because her existence in his life was an adjective and he her noun...she was the imprint and he , her nostalgia... His existence was futile without her presence...she was the resonance in his otherwise non-resonating life...

As soon as he felt Sharon move away from beside him he again felt her breathing will stop...as if along with she herself she was taking away a part of his soul with her... and that hurt ... That did hurt a lot... he wanted to say many things but the thought and gravity of sharon's words weighed too much for him to speak...

As he saw Sharon moving out of the balcony to their room he stood up and could only utter a few words which echoed round their ears...

"I love you cookie..."

i was about to update after a couple of days but well for you keechu di i did it today only...hope you dont kill me for the shock!!!!😆

guys thanks a lot n pls do leave your likes n comments

love ani

Ama update ani :)
Swayam fears to losse sharon
swayam said i love u...& u stopped in cliff range
Give update soon cant wait to read futher:)

swayam realised his love for sharon...

wow dear...

thanks 4 d pm

This was soo lovely He Loves Her!

gosh this was an emotional update alas as expected Sharon doing mahanta cause this is so called loved u didn't think abt u r self finally swayam realised importance of Sharon in his life hey that was a sweet shock he finally said ilu yeee I'm happpy now update soon