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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter is very high on emotions and pain.
Khushi's nightmare and the torn feelings in her heart are going to "eat" her alive.
I worry for this girl. She is too hard on herself and her insecurities are going to build with La and her parent's stand on her relationship with Arnav.

Happy she was able to chat with Arnav before he left Tampa, but I fear the worst is not over yet as Arnav thinks.
"I love you. That's all you need to remember". I think Khushi will need to hear this more often than not.

Navin and Sujata have a loving relationship and they do love their daughters. I wish Sujata would remember what it is to be in love and go easy on Khushi. They have been good parents so a little more faith and trust will go a long way along with the good upbringing they have given Khushi and Anita.

I like Navin's parenting style. While I understand Sujata's concern and anger at her daughter's love interest, but I don't see how she can shut out Khushi, her daughter, and not see her pain as Navin pointed out. She as a mother should never break the chain of communication...Khushi is an adult and "moral" and her values are intact.

La showing up unannounced in Arnav's office and wha't this ...she came for an interview at Cole's? Shades of Grey's Anatomy. 😃 PLEASE. please don't have her work at Cole's.
Dinner at a restaurant from the "past".


Teaser.

Expectations are high for La. Why did Arnav agree to dinner at the Muse?
Waiting to read how Arnav handles La. The marriage was a compromise for Arnav, but it was a marriage so I am sure there are lots of "memories and moments" for them both, but the supposed "love" was one sided so let's see what you have to say for Arnav-La years.

Have a good day Jenny!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
What is troubling Khushi is the difference in what she has been brought up to believe and what she wants to do when she has met her soulmate... She is torn to shreds...

What is troubling Sujatha is Khushi has tried to venture beyond the Laxman Rekha she has imposed... I use the word imposed here because all norms change with the environment surrounding them... Living in US, it is quite stupid to expect her kid to stick to the same rules that was used on her during her upbringing in India... What Sujatha should have done is expect Khushi to be frank and open with them... That happens only when you are feeling secure with the knowledge that the parents will lend an ear to what you have to say, analyse the situation and guide you in the proper path... This is possible only when there is a conducive environment... What Sujatha is doing now is a disservice not only to Khushi, but to herself as well as her family... By sticking to her guns she is alienating her daughter...

Navin though has reservations is still open to hearing what both Arnav and Khushi had to say...

About Lavanya, her hopes seem nothing more than a pipe dream...
She reminds me of Chimera whose goal looks to be like the proverbial will-o'-the-wisp...
A gentleman's behaviour by Dr. Raizada seems to be misinterpreted as a second chance...
May be agreeing to her choice of venue, Muse, where the whole mess started was his way of giving it a closure... Lavanya looks like a person who sees only what she wants to see... She does not realize that Aarav was the glue that held them together and not the essential ingredient, the love...

Lovely update Jenny...
Edited by rulama - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
after reading the teaser.. i am very curious and eager to read the next part..
did arnav agree to go to Muse??? it sure hold some special memories for them..

waiting for update..
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Posted: 11 years ago

God Jenny., you have given us a fright. Is lavanya joining Arnav's institute ?

Its going to be diffi. im sure she'll make it know to all and sundry that she is mrs raizada.
I wonder how khushi reacts. It seems her dream was really a premonition. Well i'm almost scared of ur next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
When la feel something good ...
I have a bad feeling.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omigosh!!!!! I have missed out so much on the updates!!!! I am some 8 or 9 chapters behind...[:'(]
Jenny, am all set to start on the pending updates and hopefully, I can manage to update a few lines for at least a coupla update... This is just to let you know am still here... Thanks for sending me the notifications.. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mimosa658

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ek taraf duniyaa, Ek taraf teri mohabbat</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ye pyaar hai meri ibadat</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Tere ishq ka chhaya hai junoon</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Teri baahon mein hi milta hai sukoon</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Tere pyaar ke rang se hi toh mein nikhri</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Meri zindagi ab ho gayi hai '<font color="#ff0000">Kesari</font>'...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Zindagi ko tumne banaya zannat</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Jaise poori ho gayi ho har mannat</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Baadlon ke saayon mein se dhoop chalakne lagi</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ab roz raat mein chandni hamein bhigone lagi</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Surajmukhi ko jaise roshni mil gai hai</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Zindagi ko ab meri ik wajah mil gai hai</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Har taraf bahaar hai chaayi</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Tune har ore '<font color="#ff0000">Kesari</font>' khushboo jo failai...</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Mimosa</font>
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This is so beautifully apt for this story!! Is it a song? I've never heard it before. Or wait, did you compose it??!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for late comment.
Read both the update and teaser. Updategave me good feeling from arnav's side but not from lavanya's. I want her to leave arnav alone. Their marriage was never a normal marriage. It was based on deceit and lies and however much sensual perfume she ever sprayed or sprays on herself will never help her get arnav's love.


I really want arshi to be happy now. :'(


Like realllyyy. Too much stress is happening.

Loved the update though :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Apologize for the late comment. 😊
Intense emotions at work in the chapter and brilliantly penned but you.
Khushi's unpleasant dream, the tug of war between her heart and mind is going to take a toll at some point.
Like the way she does not hesitate to reach out to Arnav and rushed to see him before he left for his flight. Her question to him re Lavanya during his marriage is well timed actually since he is in for a surprise visit by her.

Khushi's parents have a good equation between them and their love is apparent.
Adore Navin and his approach to being a parent. Sujata's approach is confusing. She has nurtured her daughters well, but it appears she herself has no faith in her "teachings" and assumed the worst simply because Khushi's life has a twist in it. Where is the mother's unconditional love for her child? She seems to have forgotten what it is like to be in love. Perhaps she and Navin need a few date nights and another honeymoon.😃

Always have a question as to why some Indian parents in the USA think that "morals" exist in their "Indian"world only and drill that in their children. Question for Sujata-nothing amoral ever happens back "home"?
My POV and not meant to offend anyone. As they say "To each their own".

Anyway just like what Navin said, she has not understood nor sees Khushi's stress and pain re the man she is in love with. Eager to read how Sujata reaches out to Khushi.

Also looking forward to Arnav & La's dinner and talk.

Very well written Jenny.👏

Edited by mpat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really like your treatment of the story so far. I think it is a remarkable feat to tell the story from every character's perspective. I like some characters more than others, but that is only natural I would like to think. One's perception of characters that he/she reads about in a story, is largely affected by his/her personality, personal experiences and situation in life. When I was reading about Sujata's interaction with Naveen, I could relate to her anger. Khushi is correct in her decision to pursue the man she loves, but it is always difficult for any mother (specially one from the subcontinent) to accept wholeheartedly the fact that her very beloved daughter wants to marry a man who has been married before.

Khushi is young, kind, beautiful, intelligent...but then she also has her insecurities. I can somewhat relate to her need to confirm that Arnav was not truly in love with Lavanya...you described her predicament beautifully.

I don't quite like Arnav. I respect him and his ideals, but he comes across as a really stern and bitter man. I am all for brooding men, don't get me wrong...but he has this quality about him that makes him look rather intimidating to me.

Lavanya I like, maybe because no one else does (except Arnav's mom maybe). She duped Arnav into marrying her, but I can only imagine how difficult it must have been to live under the weight of that lie for all these years. I felt sad at how easily Arnav dismissed her presence. He can be so cruel at times. I just hope Lavanya gets over him and meets someone who loves her for who she is. She does not deserve Arnav's unrelenting bitterness and dismissal...but I also hope she has realized that what she did with Arnav was very wrong. Maybe that is poetic justice...you deceive a man into marrying you, but he never really falls in love with you.


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