Arshi FF/Saffron Fields#10/ Link thread 11 Pg 1.

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#891

I felt Khushi's fear and concern about Lavanya's return on Arnav life like a Phoenix was not unfounded.

She was not aware of Arnav and Lavanya's relation and there equation during the marriage period and before the revelation of Aarav. And Arnav's word, his stances, reaction and declaration of love to Khushi provided that reassurance.

"His words brought about a miraculous transformation in Sujata's demeanor and a dramatic shift in her attitude. Everything and everyone was relegated to a remote corner of the brain as her concern for her mate, her life partner, her one and only love took supreme precedence."

Isn't this instant concern by Sujata was similar to the concern showed by Khushi earlier as they bother were dealing with there love, there partner her than there child or parent. Sujata is talking about bringing her child' being proud parent, society righteousness and morals but when it come to love or losing the one you love nothing matters. But her viewing Khushi's situation from a mothers standpoint will never allow her to see this than if she wears the glasses of a lover and take a look at it. I personally believes so.

Lavanya is was. I was right, she is still Mrs. Raizada after all. I feel bad for her she is still harboring hope for a reconciliation. 'He remembers'.

Teaser

Finally, the update will be the beginning of unveiling there married life" but it's scary to see Lavanya's love for Arnav which still very much there and her hopes high on getting back her husband.

A memorable night at 'Muse'. Will it be another one may not be in same way?

Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#892

Really interesting!!

Can't wait to read the rest of it!!

And I want to know how Arnav recalls the same incident.

Can't wait Di!

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vj2102

@vj2102

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#893

Such a painful updt.. Hope things get resolved soon

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#894

Khushi...

Ek taraf duniyaa, Ek taraf teri mohabbat

Ye pyaar hai meri ibadat

Tere ishq ka chhaya hai junoon

Teri baahon mein hi milta hai sukoon

Tere pyaar ke rang se hi toh mein nikhri

Meri zindagi ab ho gayi hai 'Kesari'...

Arnav...

Zindagi ko tumne banaya zannat

Jaise poori ho gayi ho har mannat

Baadlon ke saayon mein se dhoop chalakne lagi

Ab roz raat mein chandni hamein bhigone lagi

Surajmukhi ko jaise roshni mil gai hai

Zindagi ko ab meri ik wajah mil gai hai

Har taraf bahaar hai chaayi

Tune har ore 'Kesari' khushboo jo failai...

Mimosa

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#895

Jenny Saffron Fields is a wonderful and beautiful story 👏 👏.

Thank you for inviting onboard 🤗

I read all chapters in one go. I want to thank Ruchi, Rashmi and Re Re for making me to read this story 🤗

Loved the way you wrote the story amazingly and excellently.

Khushi's parents wanted her to marry Aman and how she felt guilty for not able to reciprocate the same feelings Aman feels for her.

Loved Arnav and Khushi introduction.

Loved how described Kashmir and beauty of Saffron fields

Loved how you wrote beautifully Arav's pain, grief and sleeplessness nights.

Loved the way Khushi was attracted to Arnav from the first meeting and how Arnav was nonchalant at first and later how he unknowingly attracted to Khushi.

The way poor Khushi got to know about Arnav's marriage and how she took back steps from Arnav'

Loved how Arnav shares with Khushi about Lavanya and Aarav at Saffron fields.

Loved how Khushi says to Arnav that they will meet again only after his divorce with Lavanya but when she heard about Aarav's barsi and how she don't want to think about anything and goes to Arnav's house crosses her boundaries and provide peace and solace to broken Arnav and how Arnav had a peaceful sleep after a long time

Loved the way Arnav shared about Aarav and his grief, innerturmoil and guilt with Khushi.

Loved the way Arnav told Khushi that he wanted to talk to her parents and he don't want to hide their relationship. Loved the way he said he want to share his all life with her.

Khushi telling about her and Arnav to her parents and her paents reaction is normal hearing about her relation with still married Arnav.

Loved Arnav and Navin discussion

Loved how Arnav reassured Khushi about her dreams and insecurities and about his love for her.

Loved Navin and Anita characters most and loved Aastha, Sujatha and Aman too.

Loved the way you wrote beautifully and marvellously Arnav and Khushi's Sensual, Sizzling, Explosive chemistry and their passion.

Waiting to see how Arnav and Khushi deals with their short separation.

I am very curious to read about Arnav and Lavanya meeting and their convo and Lavanya's expressions

Interesting teaser and Interesting title

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#896

Loved this chapter. Three different stages of three different relationship .

Arnav and Khushi budding relationship bloomed in shorter time with greater intensity but now talking to clear the doubts and assure each other with the impending separation looming around the corner.

The happening in her life and guilt of being an other woman make her question Arnav about his past. Even he's hurt he gives honest answer and also being there to assuage her pain.

Navin and Sujatha relation been together for longer time. Been together ups and downs of the life. Even other problems weighs them down even mere words of his ill health brings greater reaction from her. That makes her see his logic and compromising her to make amendments in her stances against Khushi.

Arnav and Lavanya relationship started with deceit and compromise. Their actions illustrates how Incompatible for each other. After knowing each other for long he's expecting her to agree for divorce and she's expecting him for reconciliation. Both of them counting on the time apart brought changes in their perspectives. Both of them are going surprise and disappointed with each other. Hope their life lessons and counciling make them not too bitter than they're now. To Lavanya's hopes about Arnav I am still waiting to her side of story about the past to know her perspective.

Thx for the PM.

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Hi Jenny!

I was trying to get over this arnav-khushi thing .. and avoided everything including your FFs... Loads of works, my daughter's school and other domestic issues helped me with that ...

But then finally I had to surrender.. The title was pulling me with its magnetic force for a long time..and finally had this long weekend .. So just went through all chapters in one go!

This is so refreshing.. new subject, somehow a forbidden territory .. but you made it so natural with your usual style of writing,.. making the most complex things of our lives look simple.. the most unthinkable things doable without feeling guilty at all...

I love the characters .. Not just Khushi and Arnav, there are some excellent characters like Navin, Sujata, Astha ... I can easily relate Sujata with my mother..

Looking forward to the next chapter .

Edited by golpokobita - 10 years ago

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#898

Oh the teaser is enticing! I think this will give us an insight into Arnav-Lavanya's relationship. You are a genius at emotions and feelings - for every character in your story. You make us feel each character's innermost feelings. Although I hate Lavanya's selfishness, I can't help but feel a tad bit sorry for her as well. She is obviously not the sanest person around. But I still feel sorry for her for losing her son, the love of her life and her entire family. I know it can be argued that she brought it onto herself, but I still feel nobody should have to go through so much pain...

All that said and done, I do want Arnav and Khushi together eventually. 😛

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#899

Arnav needs to be really patient while handling Lavanya, anger will only make this situation more worse. Lavanya is clearly disillusioned and is still living in the good memories of her past.

And when she comes to know that Arnav has moved on in life she will just prolong the divorce proceedings to spite Arnav and make his life miserable.

Or does she have some other conniving trick up her sleeve to get back arnav 😲

Jen kya hone waala hain🤔

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#900

Jenny Remember me ?

well ab kya likhu mai ?
as a very silent reader I was following this FF,
as usual very beautifully written ..
loved all the characters...
they met ..they fought..
they ran away ...
they felt something for each other..
they discover the LOVE between them..
they made love...
they are madly in love with each other,
but kehte hai na!!! Pyar nahi chhupta chhupaane se..
Khushi told her dad about her relationship and he listened ..
he tried to understand her..but the way her mom reacts was quite obvious.
I liked the way her father and Arnav talked with each other ..
I didn't like the way Arnav's mom behavior. ( well we always put Social Life before trying to understand what our child wants in his/her life. why ? may be we are scared of what people might think about US/ME?)
the reason behind his marriage with Lavnya.
and now she is trying to be with him !!!!!

and the latest teaser ...
waiting for the whole update...
will join this FF as soon as Arhi will be together..😳

a ghazal for Arshi and their love.

milkar juda huye tho na soya karenge hum
ek doosre ke yaad mein roya karenge hum

aansoo chalak chalak ke sathaayenge raath bhar
moti palak palak mein piroyaa karenge hum

jab dooriyon ki yaad dilon ko jalaayegi
jismon ko chaandni mein bhigoya karenge hum

gar de gaya daga hamen toofan bhi 'qateel'
sahil pe kashtiyon ko doobOya karenge hum

thanks Jenny for this wonderful FF.

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