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Posted: 11 years ago
An amazing update! 🤗 Sorry for the delayed reply.

The fear of the what is to come has embedded in Khushi with everything happening and everyone's thoughts that she is able to have dreams which are the actual projections of the tough future they are going to face. The fear of the unknown especially about Lavanya has Khushi aware that things are going to be rough before the storm blows out for them to have a peaceful togetherness. She understood what & where Arnav had been in the past to a certain extent an over come her own fears.

The feeling inflicted on her by both the mothers that she is the "other women" has started eating her away though Arnav & Khushi were clear about their relationship. She needed answers & Arnav was able to see & feel what she was going through to provide the answer she needed that point of time which will last a lifetime.

The only good memory from being married to Lavanya inspite of her deceit for Arnav is of Aarav which he will always cherish. The rest is a very bad dream for Arnav which he can never forget nor forgive Lavanya for.

Ah Well! Sujatha, like some parents when things don't go their way or they have not been consulted upon especially a very important decision, feels her daughter has not listen to her. Especially when it has come to the issue of her settling down. Something which is natural and can not be frowned upon. Some issues will always have its pros and cons and this is one major issue.

Well Lavanya. Her deceit will be her major downfall. True she fell in love with Arnav but having lied to get him to love her back or marry her was a very wrong thing. And she is still under that illusion that she will have him for life. She does not want to understand what he wants and care for his feelings. This again is something will has led to their break up. It has always been her and what she desires for herself in her life time. True her wanting a good life is not questioned. But how she has manipulated him is the point here. And for that she cannot hope that Arnav will forgive her. She still carries his name and thinks working alongside him will solve everything.

It is a long haul for Arnav hope he is able to get out of this Lavanya. She has not learnt anything from her counselling. Which is so sad in this given situation. If only she could have learnt and forgiven herself she could have helped Arnav to move on and move on happily herself in her life.



Edited by inamajar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just felt resentment when arnav,s eyes flickers for even tiny second,that give the hope to lavanya...also felt that what if tiny second become a moment...our khushi will become other woman,
Edited by ranogill - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
***Edited***

I like Kushi's thought process here. "She realized that at any given moment a person can be both selfish and selfless. She realized that human intentions are just as complex as human behaviors." Kushi is struggling between her beliefs and love that holds her future. After that nightmare she needed verbal assurance from Arnav that she is no other woman but the woman in his life. I love this pragmatic and vulnerable Kushi.
"Khushi knew Arnav's room number because she had heard him mentioning it to his mother and it was an easy number to remember."
Was it 69 😉.
I just love this Dady Navin. He understood his daughter so well and was not tricked by her smiles. He can see Kushi's naked face behind that cheerful mask. My second favorite couple of story is Navin - Sujata 😊.
What in the world. Didn't Lavanya find any other place for a change of job? 😡. "Muse" is it the place where their graduation night was held? Or their hang out place when they were friends?. Lavanya is one confused soul and complicated character. Can't Lavanya see his reluctance and distaste of her presence at his office without prior notice?. Why is she so blind in her obsessive love for him?. They exchanged simple "Hi" without even handshake?. Lavanya should start reading between the lines before heading for another heartbreak.

As usual another wonderful chapter by you Jen 👏.
This is from Dr. Raizada...
A suggestion to Lavanya...
Edited by jduke - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very nice chapter Jenny. The bad has begun to get worse and then better. Loved the way you introduced Lavanya.
Finally lavanya is here .😒





My Favorite line in the update was:
"It never turned into something else", he elaborated on his statement after a pause, "It started off as a compromise and it remained just that. Till the very end.




Edited by vks11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update but suspence is killing
Edited by 9351594004 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lavanya's entry squeezed my heart. Now I can understand more of Khushi's insecurity.
When Jessica mentioned Mrs, Raizada, I felt more pang in my heart. Arnav's amiable behavior towards Lavnany made me even more woebegone. I feel like crying now.😭
But I also know Arnav is a gentleman, that's why he behaved so cordially with Lavanya. He wants to end the relationship in a nice way rather than a bitter way. He will never deceive Khushi and he also didn't lie Khushi about his true feelings for Lavanya. If he was not serious about he and Khushi's relationship, he would never go that far.

Khushi is now in a terrible situation. In one hand she has to take the grudge of her parents, specially her mom and then the suppressed fear of losing Arnav. Why Arnav was married!😔 Life becomes complicated when someone get involved with somebody who is married or divorced. i'm sure Khsuhi must not enjoying the fun time in Disney.
It was good that Khushi didn't change her mind to meet Arnav before his departure. I was scared when she was fighting with her mind whether she should come to arnav's room in the middle of the night or not.
Waiting for the upcoming story with bated breath.
Edited by sohara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Ruchi!👍🏼

One can understand Khushi's feelings at this time.
She feels guilty at being the other woman in Arnav and Lavanya's life.
And she needs reassurance that Arnav never loved Lavanya.
But did he say this just to reassure her?
Maybe they did have some happy times in their married life!

Sujata is still miffed with Khushi.
And that is understandable.
Any mother in her place would feel the same.
And would blame herself for the wrong upbringing.
As for Navin, I wonder whether he is really not well.
Hope he's not going to be seriously ill and Khushi be blamed for the illness.

Lavanya's still living in a fools paradise.
She just can't get it through her head that Arnav doesnot want her back.
She should have continued going to the psy!
Hope she doesn't start working in the same hospital as Arnav and intrude upon his personal life.

Your characters are so real, Jen, and you have shown so well that all people are not just black and white. There are shades of grey in all of us. Lavanya too is not the typical vamp. She is just a woman trying to cling on to the man she has loved for years. One can sympathise with her!
Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
should we be worried
i should hope not
as in her coming isnt coming of storm
the calm before storm in his life
as it is he has finally moved on
hope this doesnt drag him back
that i would never want
not for khushi but for him
he has dealt with lot in this short time with la
and he doesnt wanna rake up the past
let the past ruin his present and future
but i trust you jen
am sure you wont let anything happen to arhi for too long
even if its temporary for them
but also best for them naa
lets not make this situation worse by being together and making their parents more mad
as it is her mother isnt too happy with her
not that i blame her
but khushi tried so hard not to fall for him
somethings i guess no has control over
and this as in falling in love with certainly is that
that dream was just manifestation of her fears
that she came between arnav and la
she broke their love and marriage
with things that have been happening it was bound to happen
a human mind can only take so much of pressure before succumbing to it right
and thats what happened here
but i guess it was okay for her to ask this
then only would she be at rest
and thats what happened
awww poor arnav he was back to work with not enough sleep huh
and now with meeting his ex wife
hmmm whats with this name Muse
was it special for them
though they might not have loved one another
they sure did care naa
well lets see where this goes
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So that was an emotional update... I feel for Khushi here, it can't be easy being the other woman and yes, she has every right to know if he loved her. The insecurities will always be there until they can truly commit to this relationship. It's a tough situation, and it's not going to be an easy journey.
I swear, my heart is aching for her and reading this update was painful, very painful.


As for the Sujata, I can see her point and I can't... I would guess as a mother she needs to listen to her daughter and give her the benefit of doubt. Trust her, listen to her but she doesn't have to agree with her choice but don't shut her out. Plus, Khushi is an adult, she is allowed to make her own decisions. I am looking forward to seeing what happens when they get home. Khushi is going to need her parents as the storm is coming, it would be disheartening if she does not have her mother's shoulder to lean on. I just hope it doesn't get to a point where her mother says 'I told you so..' Because that would hurt...


The other woman... is here and let me tell you, she scares and creeps me out! I did not like it at all her coming into his office as Mrs. Raizada even though she is. I just don't know what else to say...😕


Looking forward to the next update and preparing myself for another emotional and painful update...😭
Edited by Chokri_ASR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its sooo good to read the update first thing in the morning in bed..enjoyed it a lot..I love Navin..he is a great human being..Arnav - Kushi separation was heartbreaking..

Lavanya is back with a bang..Muse???????? what happened there..?? eager to know..

wonderful update Jenny..but yeh dil hai manta nahin..usko "more" chahiye..!! ;-)


Happy Dasara to you too and all other fellow SF readers
Edited by sman - 11 years ago

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