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A/N - from now on i have decided that I will dedicate each and every part of my FFs to someone ...this part is dedicated to Karishma (karishmasegwani) i hope i spelled ur username crrect ...u have been a constant support dear ...thnx a ton ..luv u


Part 5

Sanyukta reached GOA ...she reached the place where kaustuki , maya and vidhushi were staying

K - so the plan is sanyukta tumhare papa sameer mittal America ke hotel and resort king hai ...tum unki beti sanyukta mittal ho..GOA aayi ho apna business set krne ke lie

S - American citizen ?

V - nakli ki ...sach mai nai leke jaa rhe tuje America

K - ye dekho unki website ( she shoes her the website )

S - wow interesting ...very interesting asli hai ?

K - nai nakli ..humne bnai hai ...google krogi to asli hi show kregi ...kal se tum STARBUCKS HOTEL mai hi rahogi jahan se wo bloody kamina operate krta hai ...

S - ok

K - yaad rkhna sanyukta mittal fake ...website fake ..sameer fake

S - yup ok done !!

NEXT DAY STARBUCKS HOTEL

the waiter takes sanyukta to her suite

W - have a pleasant stay mam

S - thnq ...acha listen

W - yes mam

S - yahan pr koi Shankar kaam krta h kya ? Actually last month meri ek friend yahan aayi thi to Shankar ne uski bohot help ki thi ...zra Shankar ko bhejo na plz

W - mam he is Shankar ...i am bhola ...btaiye apko kya chahiye ice , ash , wine ..I'll get that for u mam

S - Shankar

W - ok mam ( waiter goes away )

S - thank you

Sanyukta looks all around the room

S - abe yr kya room hai ...

She takes off her high heel sandals

S - pao toot gaye

She starts jumping on the sofa , bed etc etc ...just then the room bell rings ..she goes to open the door

W - hello mam me Shankar

S - aha come in come in Shankar

Sh - thnq mam

S - Shankar muje tumhari ek help chahiye

Sh - ji btaiye na mam

S - yahan or GOA mai best land dealers ki list muje bnakr de skte ho...for building property

Sh - sure mam ...mam list aur bhi achi bnegi agr ap btayen apko kis type ki property ke lie land chahiye

S - restaurant ...aur haan un dealers ka naam include mat krna jo 1 crore se kam ki deal krte hai ..it will be ur waist of time ( handing him 10000 rupees ) now get to work

Sh - ok mam ...have a pleasant stay mam

BEACH

Kaustuki , vidhushi , maya were hiding behind three different boats and observing Shankar and randhir

Maya observed that Shankar gane rd something and he went into the cyber cafe ..when he came out she rushed into the cafe and checked the web history and was happy to find that rd had searched for sameers fake website

M - hello kaustuki fas gaya chor ...humari fake website check kr rha tha

K - hmm now let's wait n watch .. ( she calls sanyukta ) hello sanyukta well done ...

Sanyukta was going towards the swimming pool to have a bath ...randhir saw this and was observing her from a distance ...

R ( Im ) is se to milna hi hoga

Sanyukta got ready and came out where Shankar was waiting for her

Sh - ye lijie mam apki list ...and here's ur ride ( handing her the scooty keys )

S - thnq i like it

Sh - have a nice day mam

Sanyukta left and randhir was also following her everywhere as she was going and meeting different dealers and seeing the sights

AT NIGHT ( AT A BAR )

Sanyukta was sitting at the counter and stirring her drink ...the 4 knew that every night rd used to come at that bar

Sanyukta messaged kaustuki ( who was sitting outside the bar in a car ) ' aaya nai abi tak '

K - aaya nai roz to is time tak aa jata hai

Suddenly a red posh car entered and rd came out from the car

V - god ye handsome lgana kab band krega

Kaustuki messaged sanyu ' aa gaya ...be ready '

Sanyukta looked towards the door and saw rd entering ..she was surprised to see him ..so hot and well built ..she again got busy in her drink ...suddenly two men came at the counter and started staring at sanyukta ...she gave them deadly glares and they got scared and went away ...she started to pay the bill ...she offered her credit card to the manager

M - sorry mam ye card to blocked hai

S - what how can it be blocked ?

She calls someone ...hello my card no is 73893030 ...how can it be blocked ? What 24 hours ? Listen I'll sue you for this ( she goes to a corner ) kaustuki yar wo to mud ke bhi nai dekh rha ...listen Mai bill pay krke nikal rhi hu


She cut the call and goes to the counter

S - umm srry my card is blocked ..I'll pay you by cash

M.- no need mam apka bill apke friend ne pay kr diya

S - who friend ?

M - he ( pointing towards rd )

S - hey listen tum kbse mere friend bne ?

R - jbse wo black shirt blue jeans tumhara enemy bana ( indicating the guys who were staring sanyu )

S - listen i don't have time ..just tell me how much did you pay

R - i did not pay for you that black and blue did

S - what ? Will you please care to explain ?

R - matlab ye ki tumhara card jb kharab tha maine manager ko apne card ki taraf indicate kiya but wo tumhare gussa se itne dar gaya ki use laga ki mai us black and blue ki taraf indicate kr rha hu so bill usne pay kiya hai

S - wow bohot classy chor ho tum

R - classy - thnq ...chor ??

S - bill pay krke bohot ldko ko flirt krte hue dekha hai ...but tum to alag hi ho ...dusro se krva kr flirt kr rhe ho

R - thnxx ...waise GOA mai sirf bars hi nai achi beach parties bhi hoti hai ...so if you like ...we can

S - listen mai GOA tum jaise hunks ke sath flirt aur party krne nai ..business krne aayi hu ...so ab btao tumne kitna pay kiya

R - ahan

S - u just leave it

Sanyu goes towards the counter

S - listen there's a misunderstanding ...kya aap plz ye paise us admi ko de denge ( pointing towards rd but he had already left )

HOME

K - kya sanyukta wo easily convince ho gaya tha ..but u ruined everything

V - aur kya zarurat thi itna attitude dikhane ki

S - listen ye show krti i am a lonely girl ..pleasing for help ...actress nai hu ..jo naturally aata hai wohi krungi ..aur agr acting ke chakkar mai ladke gaye to ?

K - hmm u r right ...so ab next move kya hai

S - next ..next move wo khud chlega ( smirking )

Precap - rd sends flowers for sanyu


So guys ye ab tak ka mera longest updte tha ...so i want long comments plz yr ...plzzz ...next part se sanyu nd rd are gonna travel together ...excited ?? Yeahh me too ..stay happy always guys ..luv ull




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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG SANYA! This chapter was brilliantly written! I loved the way sanyukta is treating him with loads of attitude! And that's what is a killer stuff in her character! And now the whole fake website, fake American citizen, fake Sameer Mittal, fake sanyukta Mittal! It was all written pretty well! And now that Randhir is flirting with her and has found her fake background impressive, I wonder what more he will do!
I loved how sanyukta is carrying her attitude and determinacy! 😉
And then, when Randhir has now got trapped in her wingspan, I am sure wonders are to be experienced! Can't wait to see what more do you have in store for us!
Loving the way how story is pacing up! This chapter was amazing, waiting for the next one!

THANKYOU SO MUCH BABE, FOR THE DEDICATION! I AM SO HAPPY! I am glad you feel motivated by my comments!

And yeah, me first! So party toh banti hai!
I was actually stalking you! So I found out that you have updated and so I rushed to read this one!
Continue soon, sanya!

Keep writing.
Love and kisses,
Karishma. :* <3 ❤️
Edited by karishmagsewani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear, really loved it... pls update next part asap dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsme update yr

Finally sandhir met

Now the real fun will strt
Kamina chor ab ashiq deewana ban jyega

Sanyu full of attitude
I lyked her a lot

Not bechari types
Rd full impress from sanyu

Ab toh bechara gya kaam se

Precap intrstng

Excited for next
Update soon wtng

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ff...!!!
Read all the chapters in one go...!!
Loved it ..!! I don't know why I miss
So fab things...!! Stupid me..!!
Really liked sanyu...!!
But poor rd...!!
Update ASAP
Love Janavi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sanya just loved it girl
U wrote it beautifully...amazing
N hats off yaar...u r a superb writer

Love ya
Neha :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG SANYA! This chapter was brilliantly written! I loved the way sanyukta is treating him with loads of attitude! And that's what is a killer stuff in her character! And now the whole fake website, fake American citizen, fake Sameer Mittal, fake sanyukta Mittal! It was all written pretty well! And now that Randhir is flirting with her and has found her fake background impressive, I wonder what more he will do!
I loved how sanyukta is carrying her attitude and determinacy! 😉
And then, when Randhir has now got trapped in her wingspan, I am sure wonders are to be experienced! Can't wait to see what more do you have in store for us!
Loving the way how story is pacing up! This chapter was amazing, waiting for the next one!

THANKYOU SO MUCH BABE, FOR THE DEDICATION! I AM SO HAPPY! I am glad you feel motivated by my comments!

And yeah, me first! So party toh banti hai!
I was actually stalking you! So I found out that you have updated and so I rushed to read this one!
Continue soon, sanya!

Keep writing.
Love and kisses,
Karishma. :* <3 ❤️


Thnq so so so much Karishma for this huge huge comment ...yeahh sanyu's character is really gonna be fun ...u deserved this dedication ..u know i just wait fr ur comments 😃
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Originally posted by: archakan

awesome dear, really loved it... pls update next part asap dear...

Thnx a lot dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx dear 😃

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