Hers | ArHi OS (Part 3 Page 1 11/10) COMPLETED - Page 7

very well written...👍🏼

To move to a bright future one must forget/overcome/accept his past either happy or sad.
Arnav has finally let out his pain, confusions, mistakes of his part & accepted his fault.
Now khushi is beck here for her arnavji as his ray of light, his anchor & his once upon lost happiness.
eagerly waitn 4 last update.
PS. Thanks 4 pm dear.

those 2 parts were beautiful!

So heartrending! Arnav's pain is unbearable. You are right, beast and his belle resonates with this one. I'm now waiting for the final one, thanks for the PM :)

Originally posted by: niya55

Awesome.
Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: 1chilly

And his 'intezaar' paid off.

His anguish at being seperated from his love was very well depicted.

He never expressed his love and longing for her.

And now she was luckily at the right spot at the right moment to listen to his call of love and his apologies and his pain at maybe having lost her forever.

Would love to read part three to see where you take this story.

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply amazing
loved it

yes, i'm so glad that u continued this and thank u for the pm 😛 beautiful part, i loved the way his pov and her pov were both connected. and i love the way u write - the words u choose to use and the way u use them paint such a graphic and clear picture, i feel like i can see the scene unfolding in front of me with every detail in place. i always thought the way ASR was he had to be completely broken down into nothing before he could accept his feelings and rise up again and be the man he should have been always - his conscience wouldn't have allowed anything else. and i always thought Khushi would have more of that fieriness and fighting spirit intact along with her remarkable ability to forgive everything and she is exactly that girl here. i am really glad ur showing these two at their lowest and their best and as they could have and should have been. and as always am amazed by ur beautiful writing ⭐️

Originally posted by: Hina69

Painfully Beautiful and heartwrenching!

Like always you have described each and everything so awesomely...

Ending was so heartwarming...loved it!!!

P.S. Thank you so much for the PM...Please Update soon...

P.P.S. Please make the last part longer and add ArHi convo please only if possible...:)...