U R MY SOOTHER-SANDHIR FF.Chapter 5A updated on pg 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Lovely update

continue soon🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Fight scene is awesome and the lunch also beautifully written dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
hey yaar mein teen din se comment karne ki koshis kar rahi hoon,but posting error dikha raha hai,seriously dear
i loved all the parts,loved the way sandir r becoming more involved in each other
loved this part a lot pehle dono lade aur phir sorry bhi boldiya,aww sometimes sanyu is soo childish
pls update next part soon,waiting eagerly
thanx for pm[even though i wasn;t able to comment this long]
love
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Loved it to the core..!!
Lovely lovely...!!!
Awesome update
Loving the way sandhir coming close...
Update ASAP
Can't wait
Love Janavi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Hey dear amazing update. 😊
sandhir r cmng close. 😊
Precape iz awesm.

Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Update soon.
Love,
Mahi ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Read all part in one go

N the story is awsme
I just luved it

Update soon wtng


N pm me when u update next


Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Nyc one.
Rd n sanyu.
Uff these two ppl na?
Ha ha sanyu is glutton.
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Awesome update dear...
Really loved it...
Thanks for the pm...
Eagerly waiting for next part...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
So goood.
Trees se hume milta hai bahut saara wood.
Trees se hume milta hai bahut saara wood.
Yeh update tha very very good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
BACK WID ANOTHER SUB PART
DO GIVE A GLANCE...


U R MY SOOTHER

CHAPTER 4C

CLASH OF TITANS(LAST PART)

{{{KINDLY NOTE THAT THIS PART 4C IS THE LAST SUBPART OF CHAPTER 4 ...NOT OF THIS FF}}}

AFTER HAVING THE LUNCH.THEY BOTH LEFT FOR SUGHT INSPECTION...THE SIGHT WHERE THEY WONT B ABLE TO REACH TODAY...CUZ THE FATHER OF US ALL IN THE HEAVEN HAD LAID OUT SOME OTHER PLANS FOR THE TWO SOULS WHICH WILL BECOME ONE IN THE FUTURE...N AGAIN LORD SIGHED,''IT'S COMPLICATED..!!"

THEY BOTH IN RD'S CAR...SITTIN ON THE FRONT SEAT N LOST IN THEIR OWN WORLD...THERE WAS AN EERIE HUSHNESS IN THE CAR...BT THEIR MINDS WERE SPEAKING VOLUMES

N UNANTICIPATEDLY IT STARTED SHOWERING...THAT TOO TORRENTIALLY!!! ALONG WITH THE ROARING OF CLOUDS

THE CLOUDS ROARED N SMILED AGAIN ON THEM...THIS TIME UNTAMELY N WILDLY WHICH MADE SANYU SHIVER IN TERROR N AGITATION N SHE SPRANG UPON RD N TIGHTLY EMBRACED HIM...SCARING THE HELL OUT OF HIM DUE TO HER SUDDEN REACTION !!!BT R SANYU WAS BUSY QUAKING N CHANTING HER INAUDIBLE PRAYERS

SANYU(WITH HER EYES CLOSED ):OH LORD...PL SAVE ...SAVE ME...PL PLESE LORD(QUIVERING)

RD UNDERSTOOD HER CONDITION N DIDN'T JERK HER AWAY...INSTEAD HE TOO HUGGED HER BACK...

RD:MISS AGGARWAL ...SEE EVERYTHING'S FINE HERE...NOTHING HAS HAPPENED...CALM DOWN(RUBBING HER BACK N SOOTHING HER LOVINGLY)

SANYU OPENED HER EYES N SAW THEIR HUGGING POSITION N PULLED BACK IMMEDIATELY N MUTTERED A SOFT SORRY WHILE RD CCHIPPED HER IT'S OK

RDLCONCERNED)ARE U OKAY?

SANYULEMBARASSED)HMM!! THANKU N SRY

RD REMAINED SILENT...

THE TORRENTS WERE OUTPOURING N THE SKY WAS GROWING GREYER AND GREYER...STRONG WINDS STARTED ACCOMPANYING THE HARSH WEATHER...THE SURROUNDINGS,WHICH WERE EARLIER CHIRPY N SUNNY TURNNED INTO GLOOMY N DARK ONE...

IT APPEARED AS IF SMTHIN BAD IS GOONA HAPPEN...BT EVENTUALLY GOOD FOR THESE TWO SAPIENS,RD N SANYU...

SANYU:MR SHEKHAWAT !!

RD:CALL ME RANDHIR!!

SANYU:THEN U ALSO CALL ME SANYU..OK..THEN I'LL CALL U RANDHIR..

RD:HMM!! SANYU ...WAT HAPPENED NOW?

SANYU:RD THE WEATHER IS WORSENING ... ROADS R FLOODED WITH WATER...I THINK V SHUD LOOK FOR A SHELTER NEARBY...CUZ V WONT B ABLE TO REACH THE SITE AT THIS PACE...

RD:I THINK U R RIGHT...CUZ THIS WEATHER IS BCMING WORSE...IF V DIDN'T STOP THEN R CAR IS GONNA HALT!!

THEY TRIED SEARCHING FOR A HOTEL BT FATEFULLY THEY DIDN'T CAME ACROSS EVN ONE!! THEN RD SAW A SHELTER...SMALL ONE...ON THE ELEVATED ROAD ON THE LEFT LANE...HE DROVE THE CAR THERE N HALTED IT UNDER THE SHELTER...THEY REMAINED IN THE CAR...SANYU WAS SHIVERING WITH COLD...RD TURNED ON THE BLOWER...

SANYU:RD... I THINK I SHUD GO AT THE BACK SEAT...M NOT COMFY HERE...

RD:GO!

SANYU OPENED THE DOOR N STEPPED OUT OF THE CAR...TO REACH THE BACK SEAT

RD:U MAD GIRL!! Y U OPENED THE DOOR?? R U OUT OF UR MIND

SANYU:AB WATHAVE I DONE...U ONLY PERMITTED ME TO GO N REST ON THE BACK SEAT

RD:U FOOL...U CAN GO FRM HERE ALSO(INDICATTING TOWARDS THE SPACE IN BETWIXT THE 2 FRONT SEATS)

SANYU:THE SPACE IS SO LESS THERE...HOW CUD I

RD:SHUT UP N COME INSIDE...N CLOSE THE DOOR EVN M GETTING DRENCHD

SANYU WAS HALF DRENCHD CUZ SHE WS STANDING OUTSIDE...THE SHELTER WAS ENDING BFORE HER DOOR ,THAT'S Y!!

SANYU:AAACCHHEEE!!(SHE SNEEZED)AACCHEE!!(TWICE,THRICE)

RD:OML!! KAHA FAS GYA PAGAL K SAATH..WHO TOLD U TO STAND OUTSIDE,,,,C U URSELF GOT SOAKED TO THE SKIN...FOOLISH

SANYU:SHUT UP! AAACCHHEE!! DON'T YELL AACHEE!

RD:FIRST SNEEZE THEN SPEAK...

SANYU WAS SHIVERING BADLY,HERE HAIR WERE WET,HER DRESS HALF WET,CHEEKS WERE ROSY PINK , NOSE AS RED AS BEETROOT,N PINK LIPS SHIVERIN CONTINUOUSLY...SHE WAS LKING SO KIDDISH N BREATHTAKINGLY BFUL...HER WET CLOTHES N HAIR WERE STICKIN TO HER BODY N FACE..RD WAS NOTICING HER EACH N EVERY FEAUTURE IN DETAIL...N WAS LOST IN HER INNOCENCE...HOW ADORABLE SHE WAS!!

SANYU'S CONTINUOUS SNEEZES EVOKED HIM FRM HIS THOUGHTS...

RD(CONCERNED):U OHKEY?

SANYULSARCASTICALLY)YES!! M WELL!! ...AACHEE!! CANT U C SADU,THAT M SNEEZIN AACHEE

RD:AB AISE KAAM KROGI TOH THIS WILL ONLY HAPPEN!!

[[HEY GUYS I WANT TO TELL U THAT BOTH ARE CARRYING ALL THEIR NECESSITIES WID THEM,...CUZ THEY WERE GOING TO STAY IN THE NORTH OF THE CITY...FOR A DAY OR TWO...CUZ THEY'D TO DO SIGHT INSPECTION OF MANY PLACES PLUS THEY HAVE TO FINALISE THE LOCATION PLUS THE COST ETC]]

RD OFFERS HER A MEDICINE TO RELIEVE HER ...SHE CONSUMES IT...

SANYU:XCUSE RD!!(STAMMERING)VOO...RD... I WANTTT... TOO C..C.CCHANGE MY CLOTHH.HES ...CAN I GOO.OO AT THE BACK SEAAAT N CHANGE THEM..(HIGHLY EMBARASSED N LOOKS DOWN)M FEEELIN REALLY CHILLED..PL

RD: (CHOKED N EMBARASSED N NERVOUS) HMM !! U GO BACK N CHANGE

SANYU: (SOFTLY LIKE A KID)PLEASE DON'T LOO..OOK BA..A.AA.CKK!!(STAMMERING)

RD: (FEELS BAD THAT SHE DOESN'T TRUST HIM) M NOT LIKE OTHERS...N DON'T U TRUST ME?(HURT)

SANYU:NO RD! I TRUST U...I M SOORR.RRYY!

SANYU GOES TO THE BACK SEAT N CHANGE FROM FORMALS INTO A WARM FULL SLEEVS GOWN...SHE WS LKIN V CHARMING...HER WET HAIRS N SHIVERIN FEATURES WERE MAKING HER GLOW MORE...

SANYU:I M D..DOO.DONE!(SHYLY)THANKU

RD TURNED BACK TO C HER...N HE WAS AWE-STRUCK...SANYU WAS LKIN LIKE A PRINCESS...SHE FELT RD EYEING HER...SO SHE COVERED HERSELF WITH A SHAWL...RD UNDERSTOOD HER DISCOMFORT N STOPPED STARING AT HER...BOTH WERE FEELING XTREMELY NERVOUS

SANYU(BREAKING THE SILENCE):RD IF U WANT U CAN ALSO COME ON THE BACK SEAT N JOIN ME..U MUST B FEELING UNCOMFY!! PLUS I M HAVING SOME SNACKS...V WILL CONSUME THEM TOGETHER

RD WITHOUT ARGUING CAME AT THE BACK SEAT...BOTH SETTLED N ADJUSTED THEMSELVES...SANYU BEING A BIG GLUTTON CARRIED MANY EATABLES LIKE CHIPS,JUICE,FRUITS ETC...SHE STARTED SERVING BOTH OF THEM...SHE CARRIED ALL THE BASIC THINGS LIKE TISSUE PAPER, WATER BOTTLE,HOT COFFEE...ACTUALLY SHE WAS V EXCITED CUZ FIRST TIME SHE WAS GOING FOR A SIGHT INSPECTION...SO SHE PACKED EVERYTHIN AS IF SHE WS GOING ON A PICNIC...IN SHEKHAWAT GOC SHE ONLY USED TO DO THE PAPERWORK...DEAL LIKE THIS WAS COMPLETELY A NEW EXPERIENCE

SANYU:TAKE NAA RD...SEE I VE BOUGHT SO MANY SANCKS..N HERE U TAKE THESE GRSSY FRUITS N JUICES...(SHE TEASED HIM)

RD: (SURPRISED BU SEEING SO MANY EATABLES)U THOUGHT THAT V R GOING ON A PICNIC...OH LORD...U PACKED SO MANY THINGS...(SARCASTICALLY)

SANYU:SHUT UP OTHERWISE JO HAI WO BHI NHI MILEGA...U SHUD THANK ME BUT TUM TOH PURE TYPICAL SADU HO!! THE FOOD JO ABHI HUM KHA RHE HAI...YE MERI WAJAH SE MILA HAI

RD: (ROLLING HIS EYES)WATEVER!!

SANYU WAS FEELING BORED SO SHE TOOK HER CELL N STARTED PLAYING BOLLYWOOD SONGS AT FULL VOLUME...SHE WS ENJOYING IT TO THE CORE WHEREAS RD WAS GLARING AT HER...SOON THE SONG CHANGED TO A PLAYFUL ONE N SHE STARTED DOING STEPS BY SITTING...SHE WAS TOTALLY LOST IN THE MUSIC WHILE RD WS LOST IN HER...

AFTR THAT SHE STARTED WATCHIN THE MOVIE 'THE FAULT IN OUR STARS ' ON HER IPAD..WHEREAS RD WAS BUSY SENDING N READING EMAILS ON HIS TABLET!!! BOTH WERE TOTALLY ENGROSSED IN THEIR SPORTS...AFTR SOMETIME RD HEARD SANYU SOBBING...HE TURNED TO HER BT R MELODRAMATIC QUEEN WAS CRYING WATCHING AUGUSTUS DIE!! HER EYES WERE BRIMMIMG WID TEARS..THOUGH SHE WASN'T GIRLISH TYPES BT SHE HATED SAD N TRAGIC STORIES

RD:SANYU...R U OHKEY

SANYU: (STILL CRYING N LKIN TOWARD HIM N SUDDENLY HUGGED HIM TIGHTLY)RD AUGUSTUS DIED..<SOBBING>HE DIED ...RD...HAZEL IS LEFT ALONE...Y DO PPL DIE

RD: (TOUCHED BY HER INNOCENCE):SHH ! DON'T CRY...HAZEL LOVES HIM N HE ALSO LOVES HER...THEIR SOULS R INSEPERABLE

BT R SANYU'S SOBS WERE UNSTOPPBLE...YET RD<LIKE A GENTLEMAN>TOOK AWAY ALL HER WORRIES...

SANYU DOZZED OFF IN HIS WARM ARMS...FEELING SOOTHED...FEELING STABLE

RD:R U OHKEY?...SHE WAS ASLEEP SO SHE DIDN'T REPLY...HE LOOKED TO HER N SAW AN ANGLE IN A DEEP SLUMBER...HE CARESSED HER TRESSES N EXCLAIMED:''SILLY GIRL''

N HE ALSO DOZZED OFF...THEY BITH WERE CUDDLING IN SLEEP...THE MOST PEACEFUL N TRANQUIL SLEEP OF THEIR LIVES...IN EACH OTHERS WARMTH...HEART RENDERING ONE...

THAT'S IT FOR TODAY!

DO GIVE A GLANCE TO THIS CRAP,,DEAREST READERS

THANKU FOR UR AWE-INSPIRING COMMENTS...

I OWE U A LOT!!

NO PRECAP...PARDON FOR THAT

LOVE

MANSI

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