U R MY SOOTHER-SANDHIR FF.Chapter 5A updated on pg 15 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
awesome ff dr..
read all parts in a go..
update nxt prt asap..
nd plz do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
AUTHOR'S NOTE :

HOLA PEEPSI
LUV U ALL LOADS
N THE RESPONSE ON MY SMALL IDEA OF THIS FF GOT AN OVERWHELMING RESPONSE ...
THANKS TO ALL...I OWE U ALL THE WHOLE THINGY
LOVELY READERS , I M OUT OF STATION TILL 12TH OCT ...
SO ITS REALLY DIFFICULT FOR ME TO POST TILL THEN...
PARDON FOR THAT..
OBRIGADO
MUCH LOVE
MANSI
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

U R MY SOOTHER

CHAPTER 5A

SHE IS HURT ... SO IS HE!!!


SHAKES PASSED ... SECONDS GONE...MINUTES FLEW...HOURS GOT DOWN...BUT STILL TWO CHASTE N INNOCENT SOULS WERE INUNDATED N DROWNED IN THEIR SOULFUL,INTENSE ANS MERRY-AS-A-CUCKOO DROWSE...SANYUKTA'S SOFT TEMPLE WAS RESTING IN THE CROOK OF RD'S NECK ...WHILE RANDHIR'S TEMPLE WAS LAYING ON SANYU'S HEAD...N THE RAIN WAS STILL PELTING...BUT HARDER THAN BEFORE...AGAIN THERE WAS ROARING THUNDER WHICH WOKE UP R CUTE DAMSEL SANYU FRM HER PASSIONATE SLUMBER...SHE WAS JERKD OFF BY THE WILD THUNDER N WAS SHIVERING WITH FEAR...THEN SHE NOTICED HER POSITION...INFACT THEIR POSITION...ON THE OTHER HAND...R RANDHIR WAS BUSY CARESSING SANYU'S TRESSES WHILE SNORING SOFTLY...SHE NOTICED THEIR POSTURE...,,THEY WERE ALMOST EMBRACING EACH OTHER...SHE FELT A BIT SHY...SHE WAS TRYING TO GET OUT OF RANDHIR'S HOLD WITHOUT DISTURBING HIS SLUMBER...YET AGAIN THE CLOUDS ROARED...N THIS TIME SHE STARTED PANICKING...SHE WAS BADLY QUAKING...,,DUE TO WHICH RANDHIR WOKE UP N WAS SHOCKED TO C SANYUKTA IN THE PRESENT STATE...
TEARS BLOOMED UP IN HER BFUL EYES...
SANYU FELT BAD THAT BCUZ OF HER RD WAS DISTURBED
SANYU:(SHIVERING)M SORRY THAT I WOKE U UP
RD:(CONCERNED) ARE U OKEY???
SANYU:VO ACTUALLY M A BIT SCARED OF THUNDERING
RD TOOK HER HAND N SQUEEZED IT ASSURINGLY...TELLING HER THAT HE IS THERE FOR HER...
NOW SANYU WAS ALRIGHT...
RD:I THINK V SHUD RETURN BACK OR SHUD FIND A SHELTER...CUZ THIS RAIN IS NOT GONNA STOP...
SANYU:YAA!! (SEEING OUTSIDE THROUGH THE WINDOW)RAIN IS SPRINTING HARDER...V WONT B ABLE TO RETURN BACK ALSO...SITTING IN THE CAR IS SO UNCOMFORTABLE...
RD:(TRYING TO TEASE HER)OH PLS...THIS IS MY CAR...N ITS V COMFORTABLE...U GIRLS R LIKE THIS ONLY...SO CHOOSY...SO NAKHREVAALI...HUH!! KHUD SE U CANT DO ANYTHING ..,BUT U NEVER LEAVE A CHANCE TO VLAME OTHERS
SANYU:SHUT UP OK...ABHI TOH U WERE SITTING QUITELY ...I THINK TUMHE FITS PADTE HAI...OR TO B CLEAR TUMHE MOOD SWINGS HOTE REHTE HAI...,ACHANAK SE U STARTED BLAMING GIRLS...U R A PURE MCP...SAARE GALAT KA ROOT CAUSE TOH GIRLS HAI...FOR U ???
RD:BEHAVE URSELF...DONT RAISE UR PITCH HERE...FARZI KAHINKI...U DONT KNW ANYTHING ...CHALLI PUREY EARTH KO GUIDE KARNE...
SANYU:OH...AS IF...U ONLY SUGGESTED ME THAT V SHUD SEARCH FOR A MOTEL OR A PLACE TO STAY N AB TUMHI TAUNT MAR RAHE HO...TYPICAL SANKI
RD:(ANGRY)I M UR SIR...DONT FORGET THAT...STAY WITHIN UR LIMITS...AAYI BADI...
SANYU:SIR HO TO KYA SAR PAR CHADOGE...,LEAVE IT ...Y M I TALKIN TO U...AGAR SEARCH KARNA HAI KOI SHELTER...(SARCASTICALLY) THEN MY LORD ...CUD U PLEASE START DRIVING N SEARCHING...GO AT THE FRNT SEAT ...
RD:I M NOT UR BLOODY SERVANT HERE...THAT I LL DRIVE CAR N U WILL LAY HERE LIKE A PRINCESS...COME AT THE FRONT SEAT WITH ME...OR ELSE FORGET OT
SANYU:(OML!!PL GIVE GRAY MATTER TO THIS STUPID...MINUTES BFORE HE WAS BEHAVIN LIKE A GENTLEMAN N NOW HE IS REVEALING HIS TRUE COLOURS--IN MIND)OKEY!!! (SARCASTICALLY)SHALL V PROCEED MY LORD...
THEY BOTH SETTLE THEMSELVES ON THEIR RESPECTIVE FRONT SEATS...N RD STEERED THE CAR ...N STARTED RUNNING THE SAME IN SOME UNKNOWN DIRECTION SO AS TO FIND A PLACE TO STAY...
SANYU:(YELLING FIERCELY)WAITTT!!!!!!!!!
RD:(SHOCKED)AREY WAT HAPPENED...Y R U SCREAMING LIKE A VAMP...R U INSANE...DID U SEE A GHOST...
SANYU:(SUPER ANNOYED)(CLUTCHED HIS COLLAR)HOW DARE U CALL ME A VAMP...U SADU,STUPID,IDIOT...BLA BLA...I SCREAMED CUZ I SAW A STRUCTURE THERE...V CAN GO THERE N ASK FOR AN ACCOMODATION FOR THE NIGHT...BUT U EVIL MONSTER ...U ONLY KNOW HOW TO CRITICIZE(SHE WAS CROSSING HER BOUNDS UNAWARE OF THE FACT THAT HER MATE WAS BOILING WID ANGER)
RD:(HELL PISSED)(CLUTCHED HER SHOULDERS TIGHTLY)SHUT UP U GAL...HOW DARE U TALK LIKE THAT...U KNOW WAT UR PARENTS HAVENT TAUGHT U EVEN A BIT OF DECENCY...NO1 HAS DARED TO TALK TO ME LIKE THAT...,
RD WAS SQUEEZING HER SHOULDERS BADLY N HIS NAILS WERE BEING DUGGED IN HER MILKY SUPPLE WHITE EPIDERMIS...SANYU WINCED IN PAIN N HER EYES WENT GLOSSY...RD WHO WAS QUAKING IN ANGER BEFORE...WHO WAS OBLIVIOUS TO HIS ACTIONS...SAW HER WINCING N FELT GUILTY...,HE FELT BAD...HIS ANGER WAS REPLACED BY GUILT N CONCERN...HE DIDNT NOTICED BEFORE THAT HE WAS HURTING HER...SANYU STARTED CRYING LIKE A KID...RUBBING HER EYES CHILDISHLY N SNIFFING ALSO...WHILE RD WAS WATCHING HER WITH GREAT CONCERN.,,..HE WAS SO ASHAMED OF HIMSELF...HE CURSED HIMSELF FOR HURTING HER...WHILE R SANYU WAS BUSY WEEPING...
((((((U guys must b thinking that sanyu is a brave girl...,she is , Infact...nut since her childhood she has never been treated like this...,she has never been scolded even...though she is not that girlish ..., rishab n Riya have given her the whole love in this world)))))))

THATS IT FOR TODAY
M SO SO SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE...
PLUS THIS ONE IS BORING PLUS NOT UPTO THE MARK
PL PARDON...
DO GIVE A GLANCE...
LOVE
MANSI

Edited by heyogirlie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
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Hey! Mansi
just read all ur update dear😃
ut was really
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear😳😳😳
lovely, nicely n beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Beautifully you've described the scenario⭐️⭐️
You've pinned so well each n every point😳⭐️
Ur an amazing, fantastic, fabulous writer👏👏
Keep it up
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Do pm me plz

Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
U updted after a long tym
I was wtng for an update

N it was superb
Moi luved it to the core
N how dare u call it crap next tym aesa bola toh ak 47 nikalni pdegi

They both fight so much ek min pehle thik the fir ladane lage

Rd hurtled sanyu so much n now he's guilty

Wtng for next update soon

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: newmoon18

U updted after a long tym
I was wtng for an update

N it was superb
Moi luved it to the core
N how dare u call it crap next tym aesa bola toh ak 47 nikalni pdegi

They both fight so much ek min pehle thik the fir ladane lage

Rd hurtled sanyu so much n now he's guilty

Wtng for next update soon

Keep smiling 😊


Thanku so so much
These comments of u guys really motivate ppl like us
To write more...
N sorry to keep u waiting for long...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
did u say it is a crap...????thn let me tell u dear i wld luv to read sch craps evrydy.
update was ekdum dhaansu bechara rd pehle rulaya ab bhugto...;)
update soon n thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
dear if ths is wat crap luks like thn i wil readily read it evrydy ...:)
arrey update was ekdum mast maza aya ab nxt update jaldi dena n thnx 4 pm

luv vrinda,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome dear... eagerly waiting for next part...pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi..! I know I am hell late
Lovely update
Super se uparr...!!
Update ASAP
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi

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