*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31) - Page 17

Originally posted by: pari1995

wow dear,i soo loved it

thanx a lot for the pm

update soon na yaar

lots of love

pari

Originally posted by: dewcute

shreya..🤗

the update was gripping..

awesome work dear👏

so,parth is waiting for next day..me tooo

now continue soon😛

Jiya😳

Originally posted by: Moony87

Res

Originally posted by: Moony87

UNRES .. *chatkaaoing my fingers* .. 😆😆wo kya hota hai???

Sabse pehle to .. Yaaar.. Thanks for taking over and writing such a wonderful update that too on such a short notice.. Uspe dedicated to me.. 😭😭...Love you.. Honestly I had a different scenario in my mind with the update and TRUST ME.. This is WAY BETTER than what I had in my mind.. 👏👏👏 .. tu pagal hai jo itna formal hoke thank u bol rahi hai...n i m sure ke tera track bhi zordaar hoga...agar connect ho to mere baad waali update pe kar dena

Kameena parth.. Faking sweetness on the fone 👍🏼 (Consider this as MIDDLE FINGER) .. Rocking Vidushi.. Udaaying Parth on the fone.. 👏👏👏

This Fone tension .. MAzaa aa gaya.. YE to matlab .. I was grinning that Vidushi SWITCHED off the fone.. Kaash show mein aisa hota.. Khair.. 😃

Are Parth ko middle finger...hoo moony Jas tujhe maar dalegi...lol shh mein nahi batanungi!! aur haa aisi stalking tendency hai na bande ki...show mein bhi divorce wali baat to tabhi pata chali when he followed vidu

Wohhoo Stalker parth.. I like the sound of it.. Saale bet waale.. Batti bhuja doongi main teri..😡

Heheh tune kar bhi diya.. Idhar Parth ki BATTI gul udhar RED THUNDER bike par New bandaa in. .. Wohooo.. 😆😆😆Lol mein bhi iss nayi entry ke liye bahut excited hu... aur aisa twist ayega ki expect bhi na kiya ho...trust mein next time tujhe rough draft bejti hu...time ho to padh lena

Hehe.. Khooni Parth.. Ladki aur Banda dono ko maarna chaahing.. Koi Tai-chi session do use.. 😆😆😆... Man that whole convo was intense.. Heights hai.. Accussing of cheating.. FUse udd chuka hai Partho ka... 😡😡.. Vidushi replying back.. Its like Mogambo khush hua moment for me.. 😆😆

Bas ye samjh nahi aaya mujhe..

Tears spilled from her eyes. She swung her had toward his cheek and slapped his hands away as he tried to put his arms round her.

Thappad pada ke nahi.. 😆😆.. Tijhe lagta hain ki aisi namuraad harkat ke baad vo use chodti...de laga di ek kaan ke niche😆😆😆

Originally posted by: anuaskif

Hey Shreya !!!

Beautiful update. I mean yaar yeh Parth toh Randhir se bhi jyadaa intense ho gaya hai... His restlessness and impatience is enough to give Randhir a tough competition... Just that the target is different... I mean Vidushi is no Sanyukta (who will be considerate and moral police herself etc, etc.) So Parth is sure to be in for real trouble if he tries to dominate over Vids.

Just one suggestion, a critical one though... in SHQ.. Parth is really genuinely trying to transform into a gentle nice guy and shed of his past... Please don't call his gentleness fake.

But I know its your story and you have the copyright to everything in it and trust me I love it n-e which wayz !!!!

Update soon... can't wait for the new entry...

Originally posted by: skm27395

hey dear sorry i couldn't quite catch ur name...i know yeh banda bahut intense hai..i would surely note ur suggestion but may i say something to this: he was angry first at vidushi for not informing him that she is going away and he was very much worried for her but he was thinking to himself n not admiiting he cares for her just like in show n secondly during the phone call he first yelled at her but then realized she won't answer or confide to him if he yelled at her coz as u urself said vidushi can't be dominated😊😊😊i was not calling his gentleness or concern for her fake it was very much real but i described it according to my way😊😊😊n in future don't hesistate to criticize my work😊sure will be updating soon n this new twist will rock us all😆😆😆

Originally posted by: --aimy--

Nice update Shreya.
Parth getting restles..hmm..thats interesting. Missing his girl,haan.😛
And Vidu..she answered him back in a tough tone.
Precap sounds interesting.I'm waiting for the next update.😃