*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31) - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: senasenapati

firstly im so sorry i couldnt reply in the previous part...read the last two parts just now...needless to say ash is doing a great job and her update is just awesome..
im really shocked at his transformed behaviour at the canteen...
adult film...hahaha...vids amezed with her choice of words...
and randhir is providing a love guru to him...that made me giggle hard
and the classroom scene was just fabulous...
l so loved it...

Suprabhaaa.. 🤗

Yeah after every update of Ash and Shreya.. it takes me a whole week to post.. Even my net goes bonkers.. 😆.. Bloody talented duo.. 😆

coming to this one...
chandni...chandni...tumhare update ne to char chand laga dia...yaar!!!.

Aur tere comment ne 4 aur. Total aath chand... 🤣

hmm...so they are on date...good
spring rolls...superb
actually...yummy...water is forming in my mouth.

Heheeh next time may be I'll include gulaab jamuns.. We'll both attack the update.. 😆😆😆

ok now im getting distracted from the story..
Yeh...vids ...beautifully played him up...well done girl
and parth...bad manners...dusre k khane ko nhi dekhte...focus on yours roll
oh i forgot vids ne to saare kha liye...hehehehe

LOL.. Parthoo Parthooo.. Notices every thing about Vids.. Obsessed boy... 😆😆😆

chipku movement is getting intense day by day
kissing and all...ohhho
what should i say...he took the challenge with utmost serious or he is enjoying her pink lips...pink lips...pal pal tujhko karte miss...hahaha

Buahahaha.. Kahaan se laati ho ye rhymes.. 😆.. Awesome they are.. 👏👏

why dont they organise nobel prize for best kisser..im sure he can beat 100 emran hashmi in this matter
randhir has provoked him beyond limit...good job

Heheh.. I know.. I should have made Vids leave 2 spring rolls for him.. He would have kissed her less.. My bad.. LOL yeah.. Randhir always gives kadak advises.. 😆

haye vids kya dialogue mara..''i eat like noone watching...''...feeling like discovered some lost member of my family...even im too foody...aa vids gale lag jaa..
and a big hug to you too chandni...

Group hug.. DITTTO .. Grand fooodieee.. 😆

aww...so swt...parth said he will love her even if she get fat...although vids find it a lie but i knw he is serious...lots of muahhs to parth..

Yeah.. He is high on the kiss.. So keep him high either on alcohol or on kiss.. And truth comes out.. 😆😆😆

ok now im super excited for next part...
do update soon

love
suprabha

Yep will update ASAP... Love you 2 babes.. 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anuaskif

Hey gurlz... i read all the parts in one go... all three of you have done such a fab job...


Thank you Anu.. Finally you are here... The party is complete now with you making a grand entry... 🤗

Why is it that all of you seem to me Vidushi biased... hehe... Parth ko thoda aur lift do behen log.. {I guess the imperfections in Vids character give it innumerable opportunities to be explored}

I know.. Main thodi biased hoon towards Vids.. But guess you are right.. Saamne waali party ko bhi chamkaana padenga.. Waise Shreyaa ekdum high peak par le jaati hai Partho ko.. 😆😆.. Will try to chamkaaaofy Parth in the next update.. 😆😆😆

Neways I loved it... loving this FF... please jaldi jaldi update do...

I guess Chandni its going to be from you...plz plz do update soon... as in really soon...

Yep will update soon.. soon.. 😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
i guess i am late...😛

am i?😳

i don't think so...😆

ufff...now the title suits...

this was really an "indecent proposal"😈


so,hmm,did i forgot to tell u something?????

oh,yeah,i remembered!!!!!!!

amazing update👏😛😆.


Jiya...


Edited by dewcute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAHAHAHAHAHA... me... the queen of comments 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣

you're joking right? heheh well i'm glad you liked the comment then

ab jaldi se new chapter likho!!!

love you!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetbutbroken

HAHAHAHAHAHA... me... the queen of comments 🤣

you're joking right? heheh well i'm glad you liked the comment then

ab jaldi se new chapter likho!!!

love you!!


Nope... Main kabhi mazaak karti hoon kya?.. I never JOKE.. 😆😆😆

Yep racking my brains again..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

i guess i am late...😛


am i?😳

i don't think so...😆

ufff...now the title suits...

this was really an "indecent proposal"😈


so,hmm,did i forgot to tell u something?????

oh,yeah,i remembered!!!!!!!

amazing update👏😛😆.


Jiya...



Jiyaaa.. Late aayee lekin aa gayeee.. Bas wahi kaafi hai.. 😆😆
Heheh glad that you like it.. 😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg girls!!!!!!!
This Fic is amazing yaar...Y didn't I noe abt this b4...I guess its always d same drill...huh!!!!! Mujhe koi bhi awesome FF k baare mein bahut late pata chalta hai :(
BT better late than never ^_^.
Firstly...love d idea of collab...My 2 most fav Vidarth Writers writing together I.e Chandini n Ash n Abt Shreya...I haven't read any of ur previous work BT girl u were amazing...Just couldn't ask 4 more,cn I???...Nope BT yeah update it girls...n Chandu yaar...Update this Fic too...I m telling u...Is week toh tumhe saare FF's update karva k hi rahugi...Ash girl...Love d way u portray Vidushi...Her inner turmoil n fears with sooo much precision... Hats off!!!!
Chandu...yaar...Teri toh main Fan hi ban gayi hu...U make me laugh like a maniac n yet u don't miss to show Vid's undying concern n love 4 Parth!!!!!!...Love you loads : *
Shreya...Loved d way u have turned Parth's character...I honestly never expected it Parth-7 n Vidushi-6...Bichari Chandu ka purra scoring ulat palat kar diya ;)...BT enjoyed it a lottt...looking forward to ur work :)
U all have diff ways of portraying emotions n projecting characters yet this fic is interesting n gripping n doesn't make u feel that 3 diff writers r involved...all thanks to amazing talent u guys have :)
Love you all n keep rocking ^_^

Love
-Pihu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

Alright! I'm super excited about writing this!
I get to collaborate with two amazing writers! What more could a girl ask for?
Dedicated to my co-writers and My sisters from different Misters (Ayesha, Kri and Annie)
A special dedication to Rae. Happy belated Birthday!!
Enjoy!



Chapter 1: It began with a bargain.


It hurt.
His head felt like someone had decided it would be fun to take a hammer to it and bash it repeatedly till it pounded like a drum.
To add to his misery, the harsh sunlight was playing havoc on his closed eyes.
His eyelids fluttered in a daze.
Blink.
Blink.
Blink.
He opened his eyes gingerly, and looked around himself in confusion.
He was on a bed.
But the last thing he remembered was being in the auditorium, yelling his lungs out.
There was a dull pounding in his head again.
His hands made their way to his forehead and he clutched his head in his hands.
His hands.
He gave them a frustrated look.
And then, flashes of half remembered memory assulted his brain.
Pleading eyes.
Whimpered requests.
And his angry, frustrated growls.
Parth was off the bed in an instant.
He had to find her.
He had to know why she did it.
She wanted something.
A selfish girl like her never...
He made his way to the college like a mad man, not even bothering to change his clothes or tame his disheveled hair.
His eyes searched frantically for their target.
That girl.
He grimaced as a he bumped against a junior carrying a metal part.
His arm was hurting in addition to his head.
He gave the junior a glare and stomped on, anger intensified, looking for the witch.
She was going to tell him. Or she was going to burn.
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"Vidushi"
She fought the desire to flinch as he made his way to her, his usual swagger made more intimidating by the scowl on his face.
His disheveled hair, his messy clothes, his burning eyes.
It spelt danger.
But she stood her ground, determined.
Determined to not let him know how hard her heart was pounding.
He capitalized on her fear.
Not this time.
"I want answers and you know what I mean"
"What?" her tone was mocking. She had summoned up all her attitude against him like a sharp weapon.
He did not appreciate the tone. His face contorted into an infuriated scornful look.
" I know you had your own reasons. What do you want? "
She rolled her eyes. Ofcourse. She was a bitch in his eyes wasn't she?
Well, it was time to prove him right.
" What's the problem! I'm not askin..."
He chuckled, taunting her.
"That's the problem. A girl like you never does anything without a reason. "
Her eyes narrowed.
'So I'll say what he wants to hear'
" Oh yes. You are right. Just consider that I have a big, selfish motive for this! "
She put on one of her 'I win' smirks and turned to live.
Vidushi- 1 Parth-0
But, he could never let her have the last word.
She found her arm caught in a vice like grip and Parth harshly pulled her back to face him.
His nostrils flared with anger and he glared at her intensely. " Complete your sentences. Tell me what you want! " the bitter demand in his tone was like a slap to the face.
It would have reduced her to tears.
Not today.
"What do you want huh? You want to return my ehsaan huh? Fine!" she huffed, glaring at him.
His curt nod prompted her.
"Fine. But you have to take the medicines regularly."
He turned away. This encouraged her even more and she found the courage to let words she'd never thought she'd say again leave her lips.
"You have to be my boyfriend for a month. And you have to act exactly like a boyfriend acts"
The confounded look on his face was a small blessing.
'Maybe he will leave me alone and not ask anymore questions' she prayed.
The look on his face was half contempt and half triumph. He had been anticipating some cheap trick. Alright. He'd play her game. And beat her at it.
He moved closer.
"You know what? You don't want a boyfriend. You just want me to pretend. Fine. I'll pretend. And then you'll know what it feels like when the person in front of you pretends"
She rolled her eyes.
"No problem. Pretend. 30 days." she taunted.
He walked away.
Vidushi - 1 Parth- 1
30 DAYS.
30 days that she'd stupidly given to him.
30 days and if he pretended to fall for her...
30 days and he could break her.
A wistful look on her face.
But, those 30 days were a guarantee.
He'd take the medicines.
She'd see to it that he did.
She promised herself those 30 days would be the best 30 days of their lives.
Even if he wanted nothing to do with her after those days, she'd have the memories to keep her love alive.
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The smoke blinded her.
But she could bear it.
What she coundn't bear was the heartwrenching sound of him. Coughing. Suffering.
Worry clouded all other coherent thoughts. Forgot the filter.
Forgot the other people in the miserable room.
She forgot everything except him.
She needed to get him out of here.
She hardened her heart and walked to him.
Adamant, stubborn person!
She begged and pleaded.
He didn't listen.
He never did.
There was only one solution.
Clang!
The metal against metal .
He angrily looked up.
"Why? I was done..."
He stopped in his tracks.
His hands.
Fear for his condition defeated her fear of him.
Somehow. She diddn't know how she managed to drag him out of the lab.
His weight was too much for her shoulder and she winced.
Too heavy.
She had to do this. For him.
Even if it killed her.
She dragged him to an empty classroom and made him sit on the bench.
She heard him breathe.
Loud, deep breaths.
Breaths that turned into regular normal ones.
She sighed in relief.
He was okay for now but she wasn't taking any risks.
Not with him.
She had to convince him to go to the doctor.
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"Miss Kumar, Mr. Kashyup. Anything wrong?" the doctor asked, taking his eyes away from the stack of papers from his desk.
"His hands" Vidushi could not disguise the worry in her voice this time.
"Let me take a look." The doctor declared.

10 minutes.
Ten minutes of pure torture.
Patience had never been a strong point for either of them.

"Just take your medicines on time, Parth." The doctor shook his head.
"Yes" Parth hung his head down.
Looking into her worry filled, lying eyes was unsettling.
Especially when he could not tell if she was genuine or not.
And that was not what bothered him the most.
What bothered him the most was the coming 30 days.
30 days of pretenses.
Of faking love where none existed.
Of showing her the pain of having fakers around you.
Of showing her how it felt to be in his shoes.
'I can't stand her presence as a person for more than 10 minutes. 30 days of being her boyfriend will definitely kill me.' Parth frowned.

"Alright Doctor, I'll personally make sure he takes his medicines" Vidushi's determined tone shook him out of the thoughts in his mind.
"Keep me updated. Especially if there are anymore problems." the Doctor gave Parth and Vidushi a stern glare.
"Yes we will." Vidushi spoke for both of them.
"You may leave."
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It was Vidushi who walked out first.
Parth followed, his anger taking over him again.
Taking hold of her upper arms he showed her into a wall.
"What are you doing?"
Her eyes held fear in them.
The fear however, was quickly masked by astonishment and anger.
He pressed her into the wall.
He was not being gentle and it took her all of her will power to not whimper in pain.
Instead, she focused on something else.
"What the hell, are you sure you took your meds and not drugs?"
Vidushi successfully freed one arm from his grip.
The grip on her other arm increased in retaliation.
"Let me go!" she hissed, struggling to break free.
His hands were strong enough to pin her back into the wall easily.
All her struggles were just pissing him off.
"Struggling is not going to help. Talk. Why are you doing this? I agreed to the boyfriend condition. Now give me my answer"
The whispered demand sent chills down her back.
Composing herself, putting on the bitch mask, she sneered at him.
"Wow, you yourself can't uphold the conditions and you expect me to comply? "
Her impudence made him grip her struggling hands tighter.
She winced in pain.
"Speak." he growled.
"When the 30 days are over. And if you can act like a proper boyfriend.." the taunting words made his blood boil.
She wanted a boyfriend?
She would get one.
And she would regret it.
*Be careful what you wish for. You might just get it*

She took in a strangled breath as his face twisted into a smirk.
"Oh really? Fine. 30 days."
The grip on her right arm vanished.
"30 days and these lips" he put his right thumb over her lips.
"These lips will tell me what I want to hear." he gently stroked her lower lip.
"Or else, I'll make them talk." he pressed his thumb with a little force and she gasped in pain.
"So, I suggest you keep your little speech ready" he tapped her lips with his index finger "Because lies will get you in trouble."
He stepped closer,watching her intently.
A shiver went down her spine.
She was already in trouble.
Deep.
Deep in trouble.

Hey Ash I loved the beginning of the story.Parth seems to lose his cool only in front of Vidushi.😉She brings out an another side of his otherwise perfect personality.You are a really talented writer.👏I will definitely read your other works soon.😃😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Moony87 - 11 years ago
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Indecent Proposal

I know it was Moony's turn to update but I will be updating this chapter and the next one and Moony will update after mine so her readers don't feel bad you will get to read her so bear with me for this one. Thank you😃😃Basically this one is dedicated to Moony who is suffering from a phenomenon called sucky life and job so hope this lift up your mood and inspire you to write. A special thanks to my fellow gutter minded buddy Ash, Ayesha, Antu, Annie, Manu, Rashi, Riya, Aimy, Pari , Jiya , Jas and everyone else who reads, likes or comments on my ff so thank you all and I love you all. I love to hear from you guys whether it's appreciation or criticism so please do write to me and as usual don't forget to hit like and comment😊

Chapter: 7

You SUCK BIGTIME at being a boyfriend

That line uttered by Vidushi went in and out of Parth's head when he pondered deep and somewhat planned how to correct Vidushi's perception and opinion of him. Not that it matter to him personally, justified Parth but he was genuinely a likeable guy and everyone admired him one way or other. This girl calling him "Not Boyfriend" material irked him to no end and bruised his ego.

"Try Try Till you SUCCEED" she had challenged him didn't she? He thought he will show her how good of a boyfriend he can be though a fake one.

He didn't see for the rest of the weekend as she was out of college and it angered him when she didn't even inform him. He knew he was her fake boyfriend but still didn't he deserve a call or a simple text saying she was out. Then he recalled about his task and took out his phone dialling her. She didn't pick on first try so he called again and this time she took to which Parth first shouted "What the hell Vidushi? Agar bahar jaa rahi thi to atleast inform to karna chaiye." Then realizing his error he changed his tune and talked sweetly and caringly with honey dripping in his voice "Mera matlab mein kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha. Atleast bata ke to jaana tha. Okay. Abhi kahan ho tum?" To this Vidushi replied from the other line "What is your problem Parth? You are not my real boyfriend okay? And even if I would have called to inform you, you would have thought I am being clingy and all. Anyways mein abhi busy hu to tum se ake baat karti hu." Saying this she disconnected the phone making Parth fume with anger at the audacity of the girl and how she acted.

Parth was pacing like a tornado and destructing everything in his wake as he waited for Vidushi to come back at the college entrance gate so he would just leap at her for her behaviour earlier in the evening. He didn't want to admit but he was pretty tense that it was late in the evening and he had been waiting the whole day for her to call back. He tried calling her phone the entire day but after few initial missed call she switched off her phone. He felt like a reluctant stalker by waiting on her all day and calling her but he rationalized it to himself thinking he was just proving a point and it was all ultimately for the bet and he was not really so concerned for her. The view he next saw made his mind spin as he saw Vidushi getting down from a red motor bike which had a black leather jacket clad person in the front. She waved at him murmuring something when that guy pulled her close and hugged her. That scene chilled Parth to bone and then fuelling his anger as he wanted to throttle Vidushi to let a guy touch her and thump that biker for laying down a finger at his girlfriend. Fake girlfriend he corrected himself. By the time Parth reached towards them running, the biker sped off in air and Vidushi was turning around. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw Parth standing so close to her red with anger and murder screaming in his eyes. She squeaked and cheerfully started off "Hi Parth. Didn't see you over there. So how was your day?" to which Parth just glared hard at her baring his teeth and snarled at her "Had a good time did you? Seeing you are in such a good mood as compared to your mood at our date. My entire day was spent calling you as you might have guessed from the number of my missed calls and texts and voice mails on your phone and sitting here like an idiot for hours waiting for you to make your gracious presence. But let's talk about your day which seems more interesting. To aaj pure din tum kahan thi?" Vidushi who was completely baffled with this unexpected reaction of Parth just stood there like a statue infuriating Parth even more who roughly shook her and angrily bit out words from his mouth "Bolo damnit. Kahan thi pure din and kiske saath? Aur woh ladka kaun tha jo tumhe yahan chod gaya?" Vidushi angrily hit him and freed herself only when Parth released her but not too gently and said "Is se tumhe kya? Akhir tum hote kaun ho mujhe se ye puch ne vale. Aaj tak kisiki himmat nahi hui mujhe se ye sawal karne ki. So what do you think of yourself? You think you can get off asking me these question then you have to think again because I am not the kind of girl who tolerates all this bullying. Aur tum to mere real boyfriend bhi nahi ho phir tumhe kya hai. Mujhe to lag raha tha ki aaj tum celebrate kar rahe hoge a Vidushi free day' par yahan dekha to tum mujhi pe badak rahe ho. Tum akhir cahte kya ho? Tum mujh se pyaar nahi karte, pyaar to kya pasand bhi nahin karte to phir tum itna meri life mein dakhal dene ka haq kyun cahiye? Mujhe kya lagta hai tum unn baccho ki tarah ho jise khud ko ek toy pasand anhi hai par woh dusro ko bhi use khalne nahi denge. Really I can never get you."

"I don't want you to understand me. Tum bas muhje itna batao ki kyat um mujhe par cheat kar rahi ho?" asked Parth in a cold voice barely audible to anyone else but to Vidushi it ringed her ears who just gave him a disbelieving look and stormed off. "You just can't walk away Vidushi without answering me. Jawab do mujhe" said Parth tugging Vidushi on her wrist and pulling her back and caging her in his arms as she failed to tug herself free from him. She said "I can't even look at you right now and don't even want to talk to you. Abhi mein bahot gusse mein ho to tum abhi muhje akela chod do. I will not answer this or justify my action to you or anyone else. So just let me go. And FYI even if I cheated on you on my FAKE BOYFRIEND in a FAKE RELATIONSHIP then it wouldn't have been cheating. So just back off from me. I want to end this fake relationship right now."

Parth spun her around and with a quick, harsh sound he bent his black head and Viushi fell back, trembling as she felt the warm moistness of his mouth taking possession. "No, please," she almost whimpered, but although she made the protest her eyes had closed and she was quivering as his head moved against her. The intensity of her own reaction took her entirely by surprise. "Now do you want this Fake Relationship to end? Now you want to answer me." "Get your hands off me!" Vidushi flared, frightened and angry, her eyes dilating. "My hands are going where I choose, not where you dictate." Parth muttered with a thick intonation increasing as his eyes kept moving on her. Tears spilled from her eyes. She swung her had toward his cheek and slapped his hands away as he tried to put his arms round her. She ran past him, sobbing and stumbled out of the door. Parth stood staring after her thinking THERE IS ALWAYS A NEXT DAY.

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TO BE CONTINUED by me...

Precap: A new entry😊😊😊

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