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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#401

ahaaa.. Epilogue.. Truely a bless i m feeling.. Aftr reading i can say it is pne of d bst bt Shikayat is more close to me..hehehehehe.. Hope we wil get one more SS of AR.. Hey y don't u write AR in Bigboss.. Aftr watching Karan in bigboss i realy want to see him there.. OS hi likh lou dream sequence mai..hehehehe thanx 4 pm

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RahilaBhojani

@RahilaBhojani

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Best epilogue of the best ever SS dear...karan n riddhima bonding is so adorable the way karan address her as princess really lovely .. Ridhima surprise was v awesome the decorations n all ... Romance part was so passionate well done... Riddhima pregnancy part was so gud .. Hehehe she was sitting on counter n eating icecream from bucket n armaan admire her this scene was too cute .. No doubt armaan give her fabulous surprise combo of clr Is v nice choice after all he is armaan he will do anything unique...ek hi to antique piece h hamare pass ...

Omg he rushed directly in labor room to give her all support...

RUHI name is so nice ..

Love this whole epilogue ..

Outstanding dear..

Sad cox of ending this beautiful story...

Plxx start a new ff like AR arrange married life wid some new concept...

Thx for pm dear. .

Plxx pm me whenever u start a new ff...

Loads of love

Take care Allah Hafiz. ...

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karankajen

@karankajen

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

Very very nic part...
loved it...
awww ss end ho gai...
it was best ss i hav read so far...
thanku

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gauri

@gaurijw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#404

Oh god m is ss ko itna miss karungi

Awesome ending to this superb ff

It has all the things romance fun togetherness teasing everything

Love the bond karan and riddhima shares

And then the way armaan snd karan took care of riddhima during her pregnancy

And the name of baby girl was too good

Superb part

Ab or ss likhna

Tc luv u

Continue soon bhi ni keh sakti :(

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Beautiful ending,👏

Loved it!

and also liked Karan and Riddhima's bonding.

Riddhima is pregnant

and everyone taking care of her,

At the end, AR are blessed with a daughter

Nice FF, really liked all the parts.

Thanks for the PM.😊

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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megha bansal

@megbans

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

awsue epilogue Ri dear...

loved it...

finally main iskpo re-read again...

haayyeee

kitna maza aayega na...

phirse read karne mein :)

achha ab comment...

part bada mast tha..

mazza aa gaya padhke... 😛

AR kakaran's surprise b.day plan superb tha

usme AR romance ka tadka lag gaya...

toh aur mast ho gayaa... 😉 😉

aur phir AR ka full romance

haaye..

main toh sharam ke maare laal laal ho gayi.. 😳 😳

aur phir new yeear party...

superb...

AR kid awsume...

ab samajh aaya ke aap WA pe girl name kyun maang rahe the... :P

achhha ab yeh SS toh over...

gud...

very gud...

hahahhahahhahahaha

bye

love u loads

muahhh :* <3

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divya

@kajenlife

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

it is amazing,awesome,superb

mind blowing ss one of my favourite

really liked Riddhima and karan bonding

and AR and their angel

really looking farward for your other ffs

update soon

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shreya03

@shreya03

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

as always awesome part love to read all i can say that i will be miss tm really enjoy to read tm ... please update dmg3 :-)

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

starting se hi main soch rhi thi occasion kya hai...
I mean ek dam se itni tayariyaan
u know i love purple & riddhima also wear purple...
Then karan sad kyun tha woh to apne batai hi nhi...
Chalo batao kya baat hai...????????
& then gang comes...sahi kaha muskaan ne...pyar ka rang chad gayi use...
waise armaan ne msg kia ya nhi aur riddhima ko kaise pata they are near
I mean apne yeh toi btai nhi armaan ne msg kab kia...
Oh...toh yeh sab karan k bd k liye hai...to aise bolo na
khamakha k tension me daal dia
& armaan ko humesha ek hi cheez sochti hai...
Then riddhima cheking him out ...
then all dinner part was quite well
specially that patni ki care wali bate alomost end up on girl vs boys
But karan & riiddhima ne sambhal liya
then cake.,...thats cool
i mean mujhe lag hi rhi thi y they didn't cut cake when its a bd
But apne to end me katne ki sochi...that's nice
Then jab sab chale haye...unke passions dekh k pata hai mujhe kya yaad ayi...
Chalo guess karo...
Chalo main hi bata deti hoon...

Maine raat mein aankh se baat private bol di
Tune pyaar ki di hawaa zulfe maine khol di
Kar le mujhko tu touch zara
Slowly slowly feel me
Aise ab mujhe na sataa
I can't take it no more
I just wanna feel your body
(saanu kare ishaare) touch my body
Don't be shy my honey
(saanu kare ishaare) feel my body
Feel my body..
Tere hothon pe hothon se
Lab ka nishan chhod doon
Kal subah tak baahon se
Main bahein teri jod lun
Tujhko josh mein dekh kar
Crazy crazy ho gayi
Mujhko khud mein tu de jagah
I can't take it no more
I just wanna feel your body
(saanu kare ishaare) touch my body
Don't be shy my honey
(saanu kare ishaare) feel my body
Hai nasha jo tujhme itna
Saara pee loon aa aa
Kuch bhi kar le main hoon teri
Mujhe nahi aitraaz
Maine raat mein aankh se baat private bol di
Aise ab mujhe na sataa
I can't take it no more
I just wanna feel your body
(saanu kare ishaare) touch my body
Don't be shy my honey
(saanu kare ishaare) feel my body

See...Alone fever...!!!!!!!!!!
then armaan ki thanks...then armaan jab boli na that she makes their life perfect to mujhe yaad ayi...

Paaya maine paaya tumhe,
Sab se chhupaaya tumhe Sapana banaaya tumhe,
Nindon mein bulaaya tumhe
Tum jo aaye jindagi mein baat ban gayi
then jab he say na that she do evry thing just like nandini by coming their life...
To mujhe yad ayi...

Aye ho meri zindagi me tum bahar banke
Mere dil me yuhi rahena hai
Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke

then when he said that she complete his family to mujhe yaad ayi...

Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera
gule gulzaar kya kehna

then riddhima ki wade ki baat sunke yaad ayi...

Tum agar sath dene kaa vada karo
Mai yu hee mast nagme lutata rahu

then armaan k wade se yaad aya...

Janam janam kaa sath hain tumhara hamara
Agar naa milate iss jivan me lete janam dubara

then jab he says he will never leave her side...
To yaad aya...

Chhodenge na ham teraa sath, o sathee marte dam tak
Marte dam tak nahee agale janam tak
Agale janam nahee saat janam tak
Saat janam nahee janam janam tak

Then riddhima is pregnent but yeh news kab ayi??
Love the way armaan & karan care for riddhima
Waise pata hai ice cream se yaad ayi...
Maine na kal raat kp ice-cream khayi thi...
Woh uni se laut te waqt pata hai when i got out buying da ice-cream as pass k log mujhe aise ghur rahe the
As if pata nhi kaha se a gayi...
pata hai kyun...
Kyun ki na bahar boht thand thi aur as usual boht jayada cold wind & sab is like garam kapre pehenke phir bhi kam rahe the...
Aur wohi main koi garam kapre k bina...
I mean ek cotton ki dress k upar bas simple thin borkha pehenke kan me head phone daalke ice-crem kha rhi thi
To log to ghuregi hi na
waise ghar ake dant bhi padi coz of it...
but u know na i love ice-cream
now back to story
Jab armaan soch rhi thi na she can empty an bucket of ice-cream
To maiun bol rhi thi i can empaty an whole godown...😆
then when armaab sidly kiss na tab yaad aya...

kiss me, close your eyes,
miss me, close your eyes,
kiss me,
i can read your lips,
on your fingertips,
i can feel your smile,
come on my lips,
and happiness in your eyes.
kiss me close your eyes...

lv the way armaan make riddhima surprise
then riddhima in pain to the desperate armaan...loved it
then its a girll...yohooo
then comes namkaran...
Armaan ki hak ki baat sunke mujhe yaad ayi...

Mujhe hak hai
tujhko jee bhr k main dekhu
mujhe hak hai
Bas yuhi dekhta jau
mujhe hak hai

then the way armaan ask for the kiss na...to mujhe yaad aya...

Aaja aaja give me a kiss

then nikki pull armaan's cheek
u know i also hate it when anyone pull my cheeks
Its hurt yaar...
I can feel armaan's pain here
Coz its too much frustating when anyone pull cheeks
Then they live hapiily...

Apne mujhe bhi thanks bole...??????
Katti thanks kyun bola...
Btw lv u
Tc

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
ahaaa.. Epilogue.. Truely a bless i m feeling.. Aftr reading i can say it is pne of d bst bt Shikayat is more close to me..hehehehehe.. Hope we wil get one more SS of AR.. Hey y don't u write AR in Bigboss.. Aftr watching Karan in bigboss i realy want to see him there.. OS hi likh lou dream sequence mai..hehehehe thanx 4 pm

Thanks dear...

Glad u enjoy the epilogue and like it...

Happy to know how much u love the whole SS...

Awww, thank u so much... Even for me, Shikayat is the closest SS to my heart so far...

Insha Allah I will come whenever I think of new concept...

Hmm, I will think of it...

I don't know, I will just give a try if I get time...

pleasure is mine... take care...