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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update. I would have been quite uoset it you broke them up for years again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Im so happy sandhya that i didnt read your half part of the update when you had updated before. I would have gone absolutely crazy n scared n teary eyed.
It was scary to read first part as i knew something bad was to happen cos i had read comments of others. But really it was scary. For once i support khushi wholly..not understanding arnav's stance. It is hard to loose control over emotions when staying in control is how you work. But for once in your life you listen to your heart, give chance to the feelings you have felt many years ago, giving someone else to relay upon you n all of a sudden you give all that up just because it goes against how you work?? I would've understood his stance in any other case but when your life is on stake you can afford to make mistakes.
Second half was heart warming. Reading about anya n aman n their wedding was beautiful. Something which every girl would dream of.
God my heart almost stopped when he realised what he was about to loose. God can a guy be this dumb especially when expected to be a charmer? I had this feeling in heart that she will stay n she did. What a relief seeing them making amends, taking chance n wanting to make it work.
I love your sandhya..story is at almost end n i dont know how I will work once it ends. I hope you have next story lined up for us.
Thank you for such a heart stopping update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was just beautiful. Especially the last chapter. Dunno why but it gave me tears in my eyes as I read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
I understand now as to why you removed part 1 yesterday ,both parts had to be together.
Mind blowing chapter.I will stick on to what I said about part 1.The second part was so beautifully written.The part where Khushi tries to put on the best smile in front of everyone just for Ana was truly touching.Ana and Aman ..they are so happy and you have created so beautiful characters that you cant help be happy for them in spite of knowing that the main protagonists are going through a bad time.
I had tears in my eyes while reading Garima and Arnav's convo. It must have been so difficult for Garima to talk to her own son in such an awkward way.I will say I am proud of her for the way she held up.Very beautifully written.
Lastly you gave us a true filmistyle of Arnav going all the way to the airport to stop Khushi from going but then you twisted in a good way by keeping Khushi in the villa.I am so glad that she did not go and stayed back for Arnav.I liked her maturity here.They will have arguments and fights as a couple but I am sure from now on they will not give up on their relationship.

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Posted: 11 years ago
I woke up at 4.30 am to read the update.
Crazy!
This is what you make your poor readers do!
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏 👏 👏
TOTALLY AMAZING! Sandhya first thank you for posting the complete chapter, I and every other reader would have been yelling WHAT HAPPENED? Thank you for not kerping us in suspense.

HONESTLY Arnav needs a beating for putting Khushi through that all over again, knowing full well she was broken the first time he let her go. I glad he met Garima and that she herself didnt push the conversation. He needed time to resolve it in his head, her allowing him to say that Allaya was his mother not her, gave him the breathing space he needed. Thank god he sorted out his feelings and ran behind Khushi. Even more so thank heaven or should I say you 😉, that Khushi decided to stay back and fight with him for him, for them.

I loved the scene with Aman and Arnav, a little lighthearted banter that was much needed . The wedding was so sweet too. My only sadness in this is that the sun is about to settle in this brilliant story. I may have come to it late but I throughly enjoyed reading every chapter.

THANK YOU FOR YOUR STORY, YOUR TIME AND EFFORT TO POST AND THE UNENDING SUPPORT TO ALL YOUR READERS. A B7G MUUWH TO YOU
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for this superb and long update.

the truth ...its just awesome n one of the best update.
lots of emotional n mixed feeling but in positive way...u know happy tears.

Thank god Arnav realised it b/f its too late n didn't gave like he did years back and Khushi being a strong person in this relationship didn't gave either.
Arnav running after her to the airport in fear of loosing her...very sweet n emotional moment BUt like u named this update in true sense nothing end till ends.like Khushi was waiting for him in his cottage..
😊their convo, their confession everything is just superb..they have come a long way and not ready to give w/o a fight like they did last time.

the moments of Garima n Arnav...few words but lots of hidden understanding ...very heart felt moment.

this is one of my fav para...few lines but only they both knows what n whom they meant

"I think it's a family trait. I always wondered where Khushi learnt to cry at the drop of a hat." He tried to lighten the situation.

Garima laughed. "And I know where you got your sense of humour. You mother always knew how to make me laugh.""


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Posted: 11 years ago
Roller coaster of emotions.. Is it dear?
Wounderfuly written..
Holding my breath whn i was reading n mutterd Oh sh*t all time:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
So just read the part 2 of the chapter.. Arnav and Garima's conversation was very heartwarming. Both were not sure how to start but somehow managed, in fact managed very well. Arnav has finally realized his mistake and he ran to rectify it...When he found Khushi in his room, I am as relieved as him. Khushi is just awesome thank God no thank Sandhya for that 😉 😊 ...Can't wait for next part. Fantastic update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh wow
Need to get back to pooja prep .. But will write back in details..
Almost choked with emotions...
Loved it
Thanks for writing

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