This was more then a perfect update. Full of emotions and I am carried away.
Starting from the beginning it was obvious the way Khushi was restless and wanted tribe with arnav. Her thought of arnav and comfrey him never leave her mind. This shows how much she lives this man despite of his flows. But at the same time she has to be there for her friend on her big day.
Loved the way Ana tease both arnav and Khushi for not leaving each other for a minute and her warning to him to leave her friend for her big day. And Khushi's restlessness not to be able to meet him soon enough. You wrote their feeling so beautifully.
And then the confrontation between arnav and Khushi was mind blowing. I will say both of them were right at the same time wrong in their places. She was right what she was asking him to do. In a relationship you can't do what arnav was doing. What ever is the situation a real couple sit down and solve the problem together. And when one act single handedly then difference occurs between them.
Here according to me Khushi was little bit wrong. She just should have waited for things to settled down and the talked to him otherwise she was not wrong to ask him equal position in their relationship. After what ever happen so many years ago he should have learn his lesson. Her arnav is more wrong then Khushi. He did the same thing which he did long ago and pushed her away due to his stubbornness. It's high time that he stop making mistakes like this.
The wedding part and end of the wedding with arnav and his nani thanking guests for coming was brilliantly written. Not more not less just perfect.
Coming to the arnav and garima's part it's was the best part I liked most. Can't even express myself for what you write in that. I cried for a mother whose son was infront of her and she can't even touch him or hug him. I cried for a mother who was so unfortunate to become a mother to be snatched away from that position. The love she deserved from his son was given to someone else. And now when time comes she had to tell her son to call her aunty. I can feel her pain while doing so. How brave she has to be to do so. Arnav can't feel what she is going through at that time. May be he must be feeling bad for a women who give birth to him but his conscious was not allowing him to let him call her mother.
May be at some point he is right. It's the time which has to be blamed. Even if garima try to be strong in front of every one but as a mother I can bet that some where she wants him to call her Ma for once and hold her like his mother. This situation is too complicated to be understand by any one but them.
You did marvellous job in writing that part.👏👏
At last he got some sense and went after her even if he missed the plane. I would have been mad at him if he didn't go at that time. Loved the way Payal warn hi in her way,not let her go this time or he will have to face her this time and for good time. And loved when arnav said that everything will be alright he will make sure of it.
He started to change this time and this shows when he call NK and asked his help not be a hero.
In the end both learn their lesson for the best. I loved Khushi for coming back and fight for her right and not runaway. She finally understand in this relationship she has to work little harder. Because arnav could be arnav at some time. Loved him a lot.
It's says that all is well that ends well. I will love to see for once arnav call garima Ma,for my sake.
Love you a lot for writing such a brilliant update. Thanks for the pm.
Edited by archnahardik123 - 11 years ago
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