Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1 - Page 60

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww wht sweeupdate Smitajii... Lekin yeh achanak se aapne end kyo kardiya story ko 😭

please continue ths one

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nihasan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww a bang on update again

Just loved it a lot more

Khushi is super cute here

Damn good

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hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was awesome Smita/Rashmi. I just loved this Arnav/ASR. So sweet and gentle with Khushi and wanting to live life with her.

I just wish you hadn't ended it so soon :( I could just go on and on reading your stories. They are just amazing.

You need to write a second part to this OS -- that is life post honeymoon, all of them living in their own chotti si duniya :)

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roopathomas

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sad that the lovely story ended... It was beautiful... Thank u.

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just4this

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved it . nice ending .felt bad that it ended. u write so well that i feel like i should keep on reading

thank u for ur wonderful stories

so what next dear

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BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 11 years ago

Post updated on page 97

U updated post too..with new pics Thank you

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 11 years ago

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docs

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Posted: 11 years ago

He he he beautiful...another story plZz..

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

Simply beautiful.filled the void left bu show.

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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

My fav OS, came to end. That was so cute. can't wait for you next OS.

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

And finally they get their happily ever after.

Thank you for writing this wonderful tale.

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