Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Another story, beautifully told. Thank you! Can we look forward to another?

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pree2605

@pree2605

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

awesome...
loved it. ...
thnxx fr email

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Simply simply awesome , beautiful. thank you.🤗

Edited by vks11 - 11 years ago

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pree2605

@pree2605

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

superrbbb ending...
loved it...
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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Hayee that was so beautiful!

Everything, from your description of the beauty of Coorg, to the utterly scrumptious food, to the joy Arnav felt seeing the world through Khushi's eyes, to her unbridled excitement and happiness at just being there, made me feel so mushy and warm.

Loved how you wrote of her calling him Arnav while making love, as equals.

The subtlety and sheer poetry of your prose is delightful Smita. 👏

Rashmi, as always, laakhon shukriyan. 🤗

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aamshula87

@aamshula87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Wooow

Such a beautiful ending

Loved it.

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shimerrr

@shimerrr

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

smita can u pls post an epilogue or a conclusion of sorts for the unwanted wife. i really want to read an insight of their future life and obviously d family reactions
You are one fabulous writer. i read all your works one after d another and u have rendered me speechless with your brilliant writing...keep writing
...sonia