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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Brilliant update. Thoughts which might go through adopted child is very well written. Not on just this occasion but on many other we society just like to gossip and pass judgement without understanding how will it effect to the concerned person. There is seriously a difference between a person who says 'I can understand your pain' and who is actually going through pain. Thanks for such a emotional update. Waiting for next. :-)

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

hahahhahahhaha Smitajiii I lobed the we hare going for HM announcement...

and i really lobed the way Khushi and Arnavji had that heart to heart talk... waiting for the HM updatewa...😉

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
loved d update.
Loved ASR little confrontation wid his family.
Akash is supportive unlike other family members who r manipulative.
waitn 4 arnav to clear khushi's misconception.

Lovely chapter. This holiday will help them talk about their relationship and misunderstanding.

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

I can understand why Arnav is so angry and I don't like the concept of someone being forced to marry by blackmail. I mean it's their life and after marriage they are the ones who have to spend the rest of their lives together and what if whoever Arnav married wasn't as understanding as Khushi? Arnav's family needs to learn that. I love that Arnav stood up for his wife and stopped his family for dumping all the work on her like some maid and I love the fact that Khushi is the only one to cool Atnav's temper.i can't wait to read the next chapter, update soon please.

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Jyothi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Smita ... naaa jaane kyun ... yeh dil maangta hai more !! ❤️

the mystery of the secret lady is out and I was quite close .. werent I 😉 I felt it was his mentor ... well she is his family much more than the Raizadas will ever be !

Khushi's breakdown was penned beautifully ! 👏 and yes finally the Raizadas got what they deserved ! all of them. they needed a hit from the vicious ASR rather than their chottey ! Akash am proud of him .. he is the only one who knows his brother !

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meera06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

I just loved the way Arnav roared at his family..everyone seems to think Khushi is someone who is available for their services at any point of time ,glad that Arnav cleared their misconception.Now waiting to see how Arnav is going to convince Khushi to stay back.

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

How exciting to visit this thread and find quite a few updates! Needless to say I loved every single section! The plot is just so gripping and we always end up feeling deeply for the characters. Up until section 19, one thing was quite apparent here assumption and lack of honest communication based on those assumptions can be quite harmful in any kind of relationship! Khushi not confronting her hubby in fear of losing her dignity because of her assumptions about his love life is a clear case of this. She was silently suffering and even her otherwise aloof husband has noticed the difference in her.

I was feeling terrible for Khushi right until I read sections 20 - 24 and boy did I love the ASR here or did I love him. While his little angelic wifey finally bared her heart and soul to him, he was there for her ready to stand up for her and protect her anyway he could. Loved the way he took charge of the situation and told the ladies in his family off asking them to use the services of a maid rather than his wife. Loved the way he already laid out the plans for his and Khushi's honeymoon. I just cannot wait for confrontation number two to see what would Khushi make out of everything that transpired. Looking forward to reading more already! Thank you for this brilliant piece of writing ladies! ❤️