Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1 - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smitar



<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="5" color="#ff0000">I too can't think of them falling for someone else.😆</font>


👍🏼 great!!! I was so feeling so down since I read that story but after reading ur update,
I'm feeling much better now, so thanx once again 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Phew! I feel so much better now... Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama



from the beautiful you...😉


Its fine...Very fine...Very fine indeed!!!!😆

Ishhh yeh lo Reshu.😳 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh this is such a beautiful story.. I love how khushi is trying to deal with the situation with her head held high and arnav though in an unwanted marriage and wife, treats her so well. He loves her so much. Khushi is soo in tune with arnav's character n does everything unconsciously to his liking. For you to bring out both their characteristics in such detail shows how good a writer you are...
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Posted: 11 years ago
read d story in one go nd i must say smita di u simply is writing another master piece nd i am loving dis story to bits ❤️

i loved it how arnav is trying his best silently to make his marriage work nd he has already grown a soft corner for khushi nd certainly he does not want her to leave..!

I love it how smita di is potraying arnav's character..! ❤️

lovely story wit perfct description of each nd every character nd specially d way smita di has showed d rltnship btwn arnav nd khushi is way too awsum nd beautiful ❤️

waiting for their honeymoon to coorg now,me sure thats gonna b hell romantic,want to see arnav feeling d love for his khushi 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing storyy ...da way u represent a nw charactr, i loved it very much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome dear
Love it
So finally mu cleared
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Posted: 11 years ago
Smitaji thanks for the update ...
ek update se jee nahi bharta par kya kare😳
such a beautiful turn in this story...
waiting eagerly for the next one..
May be tomorrow ...or day after tomorrow.

Take care dearies,
Have a happy weekend.🤗


Smitaji after Keeping Khushi, His Smiling Girl,
Knowing Khushi, Marrying Khushi..
This one is the best one.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khoda pahad nikla chuha!
I hope she tells him the whole story when they return. including the BS of the gossiping aunties of RM. kaam dhaam kuch nahi un teeno ko😡
I can excuse nani due to her age but anjali should get a hobby other than gossiping. mami has a hobby of makeupiya so she is ahead of anjali in that respect.

also i think that payal who has grown up with a sense of entitlement no doubt courtesy the guptas, needs to be taught to appreciate the woman who is her sister. There is a story idea for you.


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Posted: 11 years ago
wah and hats off to you both yu gave us an update it was too good now we will wait for arnav to take kushi on a honeymoon . i liked the idea of arnav building an inedpendent floor in his house so that kushi willbe with him and not be like a servant of payal.

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