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snoopy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Poor Khushi and Arnav I wish Khushi would have spoke to him. Wonder who the lady is

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

awesome updates.. loved them...

but a cliff hanger

want to know who the lady is...

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Oh no, not a cliffhanger pleeeaase! 😒

I was so engrossed in the story waiting to know who that lady was, and you ended it there! Not fair Smita! 😔

Loved all the parts! Poor Khushi ! She listened to Arnav's shouting at the wrong time, and unfortunately what he said was just like a missing piece in a puzzle which was finally found. Arnav had said it himself, that he was forced to marry her. And yet she didn't get the context under which he said it ! I feel so bad for both of them! :(

On top of it, the Guptas! They annoyed me.

But anyway, I'm glad Arnav is slowly amending things. They really do need privacy to sort out their inner turmoils.

Loved it! Looking forward to the next parts! :)

Please update real sooon! I think it's the first time I'm saying this 😛 it's because I simply can't wait! 😳

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Oh why oh why did you stop here? Why this kolavery di?

These were some awesome chapters. They were so gripping. The Guptas treat Khushi so badly. They don't even know how much they are hurting her. I loved Arnav in all the chapters. He did everything possible to make his Khushi happy. But to his bad luck Khushi again misunderstood him. I am so glad that he told his family off. They so much needed it. Someone should do this to the Guptas too. At least Payal should understand and stop this bias treatment by the Guptas. Babuji was the only person who seemed genuinely concerned about Khushi. I hope after meeting the lady Khushi will get some respite. But the question is will Khushi be able to meet her? As always the chapters were brilliant.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

i hate cliffhangers , reee

what an emotional update.. amazing storyline..I love the way u come up with so many new stories Smita..and thanks Rashmi for posting them..

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Thank you for bringing out the subtle difference in the treatment given by the Guptas. That was never fully explored in the show. And kudos to Arnav for noticing it..

Thank God there will hopefully be an end to the disturbances. Maybe Anjali will not be able to climb all those stairs 😆

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: AMAL722
Cliff Hanger:(
LOVE This Story:)

I'm glad Arnav scolded the females for their interference. But he's trying to get Khushi back to her cheerful self again. Who is this woman?

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

w8ng 4 more
update soon

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: segad
Thank you for bringing out the subtle difference in the treatment given by the Guptas. That was never fully explored in the show. And kudos to Arnav for noticing it..
Thank God there will hopefully be an end to the disturbances. Maybe Anjali will not be able to climb all those stairs 😆

We hope that Anjali will finally give up..ha..ha.. Otherwise ASR will build a castle in the clouds for his Khushi😉 He has to make sure of the next generation.😉

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Just amazing dear. This happens mostly in real life where we sometimes unknowingly ignore someones peals and try to make judgement based on our experience. Waiting for next part. Thanks.