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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: AikaSheikh
O My GAWD!!! Angela, I love it!!!! Both updates was awesomes!!! 👏👏👏activate javascript
The twists, the detail was indeed Awesome!
Sorry for late reply, Dear! But still, I'm waiting for the updates. Feel bad for Panchi, I wish she will get better soon.
And that monster... OMG! Vasusen!!! 😒

Thanks a lot Aika.

I hope you a liking the thrill in the current updates. And will enjoy the further updates too as the story proceeds.😃

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#782

CHAPTER 36HISTORY REPEATS ITSELF

Banner credits - Angela_Grokes

Panchi's eyes open. She found herself on her bed, in her room. Shocked even more to find herself surrounded by teddy bears. Her room, seemed to be a toy store filled with endless rows of teddies. And a beautiful card beside her opening it she found,"You can run away from me, but not from yourself. How long will this game of running continue?Your heart is not ready to accept me and mine will not disown you!Why then run away from truth?Love will at the end pull to close to me. Enough, For every cell of our bodies to meet.-Someone who loves you"Tears of helplessness tumbled down her eyes. Though, years of separation stood between them but that one moment when their eyes met was enough to bring them together, close enough to become one. But unfortunately their love had always become the way to their separation whether it was the Swayamwar, the years they spent before Arjun's exile or the years after that. She wanted to go to him and ask him that why did he not love her and pulled her close to caress her hair smoothly cherising the sweetness of her lips. But she knew his answer. She knew that he did not want her but he wanted her to want him. Their love was actually their want of wanting each other.

Ulupi made necessary arrangement and got ready to leave. "Going again to that home of destitutes?" Iravan asked. "That is called orphanage!" She answered back. "What happiness do you get by going there every year, spending time with those unfortunates?" He asked her. "The ones you call unfortunates are the most beautiful creations of God! My heart still has some space for humanity to rest in there!" Ulupi answered back.
"Yes obviously! You first destroy the life of your own kid and then help others who are nothing by unfortunate and abandoned by happiness." Iravan answered with contempt. "Yes Iravan! I have destroyed your life. But you know what those little souls have shouls not pay for my mistake. I don't want to destroy someone else's life." She said.
Ulupi turned to leave. Tears four d their way out of her eyes. "I wish you could understand, Iravan!" She always regretted that one decision she took which changed the course of her son's life. Why? She thought. Her son never understood her feelings. This fate she had not accepted by choice but destiny had paved the way to it.

"Oh no! It is nothing special. Just some Christmas preparations lying around. Sure come in!" Radha welcome Pancho into her home. "Oh! That is a whole lot of things to prepare!" Panchi said on having a look at the living room full of wreaths and candles. "Oh yes! I haven't set the tree yet so...!" Radha said with a bit of embarrassment. "Like we have!" Panchi said with a laugh.
"So you asked for some help!" Radha reminded Panchi. "Aahaan... Yes. Actually I am gonna organise a New Year's party so you know I need some nice place. Some good hotel would do. Wanted advice for that." Pancho replied. "Oh... Well I would suggest you the Central. It is affordable and lavish enough to cater to your plans of that day!" Radha told her.
"Thanks a lot. And it would be great if this remains between the two of us. It is kind of a surprise to everyone in my family." Panchi requested. "Oh... Don't worry it won't be known to the pegion either!" Radha told her with a laugh.

"So New Year's around!" Vrushali said with a excitement. "Yeah...! But Vrushali I don't think that after all the stress of the quest we will be able to make to happily. I mean Panchi and other have recently returned from Japan, successfully and then we have to work ahead too." Vasusen replied to her. "Well, New Year is not a little job but I guess a little celebration would be enough of all of us!" Vrushali told him.
Pulling Vrushali closer by her wrist, Vasusen said, "All of us OR the two of us!". "Vasusen!" Vrushali tried to get free of his catch. "It is not the time of romance." She exclaimed. "Well I have heard that winters are a time for a lot of things!" He winked at her. Unable to control her blush on his words she answered, "What things?". "I should better explain it practically!" Vasusen asked.
"Explain what practically , bahi?" Said the other five from behind. Shocking the couple, Paarth continued, "Well we had a thought of celebration it together but maybe our newly-wed couple is in a mood of private celebrations". "What! I mean wha... NO! We will celebrate it together! Like a big happy family! Right Vrushali?" Vasusen asked. "Yea... Yeah! We will celebrate it together." Vrushali told quickly.

TBCNOTE : THIS CHAPTER HAS SIX PARTS AND IS ONE THE WAY TO THW CLIMAX SO KEEP GOOD WATCH ON THE PARTS

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#783

Wohoo! So I am first!!

Okay, so I will start by saying that the banner is beautiful as I said earlier!

And you girl, are increasing my excitement with every succeeding update!

I was 'happified' after reading this!😆

So, the first part was amazing! The way you described their love story throughout times in just a paragraph was wonderful Angiee!

Also, what is this Uloopi and Iravan story? I am eagerly waiting Angela and I am sure I'll love it as read the pm.

Poor Vasusen and Vrushali! #caughtredhanded!😉

P.S. - Thanks for the special mention!😃

And my curiosity is increasing, also I want updates to come in fast and I must say this six part idea is really intriguing! I love your story and the adventures it takes us on!

Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#784

Nice Update Angie 😊

Panchi found herself surrounded by teddy bears & a card...that was cute 😳

Panchi is planning a surprise New Year Party... interesting

God... u r still keeping the mystery of Uloopi & Iravan's story

Vasusen has good ideas for celebrating the new year with Vrushali 😉 but got back fired by the other 5's entry 😆 😆

Continue Soon & Please please dont take so long to update ur next chappy 😊

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#785

I love the Christmas banners!
Can just picture Panchi in the middle of all those teddy bears...very cuddly scene😊
And Panchi is planning a surprise new year party, will expect some fireworks there😉
And the mystery of our mother-son duo continues...

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xxserenaxx

@xxserenaxx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#786

awesome update .. thanks for pm

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#787

Aww, The Teddy Bears Were Too Cute ! And Vasusen-Vrushali, I Mean, Vasusen Wants Something More That A Little Celebration ! Good ! But The Mystery's Deepening Further !! Please Solve That Soon Na ! Waiting For The Next Part !! This One Was Very Well-written !

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Wohoo! So I am first!!
Okay, so I will start by saying that the banner is beautiful as I said earlier!
And you girl, are increasing my excitement with every succeeding update!
I was 'happified' after reading this!😆
So, the first part was amazing! The way you described their love story throughout times in just a paragraph was wonderful Angiee!
Also, what is this Uloopi and Iravan story? I am eagerly waiting Angela and I am sure I'll love it as read the pm.
Poor Vasusen and Vrushali! #caughtredhanded!😉
P.S. - Thanks for the special mention!😃
And my curiosity is increasing, also I want updates to come in fast and I must say this six part idea is really intriguing! I love your story and the adventures it takes us on!

Thanks Navi...

Well I repeat it, I always am trying for regular updates.😃

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Nice Update Angie 😊

Panchi found herself surrounded by teddy bears & a card...that was cute 😳

Panchi is planning a surprise New Year Party... interesting

God... u r still keeping the mystery of Uloopi & Iravan's story

Vasusen has good ideas for celebrating the new year with Vrushali 😉 but got back fired by the other 5's entry 😆 😆

Continue Soon & Please please dont take so long to update ur next chappy 😊

Thank you Hemangi😊

Hope you will like the upcoming chapter.

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
I love the Christmas banners!
Can just picture Panchi in the middle of all those teddy bears...very cuddly scene😊
And Panchi is planning a surprise new year party, will expect some fireworks there😉
And the mystery of our mother-son duo continues...

Thanks a lot Mamta!😳

The mother-son duo is one part which is gonna be the most intriguing and irritating as well.😆