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...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes
Thank you Hemangi.
I am reading you MB Time Travel FF. It is nice. But dear, I am a professor in a subject closely related to physics so watch out.😉😆

Oh Thank U for reading my FF Angie.
Oh God! than I have to do my homework more seriously now 😉 😆

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Oh Thank U for reading my FF Angie.
Oh God! than I have to do my homework more seriously now 😉 😆

You are doing wonderful job Hemangi! Up you go!!!!👏

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Congratulations For Crossing Hundred Di !!

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Congratulations For Crossing Hundred Di !!

Thanks dear... But I guess it isn't about crossing 100 or making multiple thread . I feel it is the satisfaction an author extracts by sharing her works with the readers.😊

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#765

CHAPTER 35FIRE : TAMED

Panchi, now was almost at the end of the maze. She was tried and exhausted. Her heart which yearned for love was now immersed into the ocean of loneliness. She was on the very verge of breaking when she reached the end of thew maze. Finding Govind and others waiting there, she asked "Govind? You all crossed the whole maze too fast!". "We were too fast or you were too slow?" Govind replied back. "We have been waiting here since the quarter of an hour!" Shubhi exclaimed.

"Isn't it a maze? I mean it is not easy to get out!" Pancho tried to divert the subject.

"People! We have to get into this room!" Shubhi pointed at the huge iron door in front of them. "Wait a second. This room! What's that sign in the center of the door?" Paarth asked, perplexed. "It looks like some emblem!" Shubhi went closer to the door to take a better look. "The symbol for fire in Japanese! That's 'Kasai'!" Panchi said with a the sparkle of excitement in her eyes. "Kasai?" Shubhi was confused on the meaning the emblem intended to tell.

The inner soul which stored the power of fire, coaxed to Panchi to use her supreme ability to control the element. Within a matter of second the door burst out to release a tornado of fire aucking everyting which came into it way. While the other three ran away from it, Panchi stood there. Waiting for utter destruction of her soul, she was now going to tame the king of elements. Her soul now was not that of Panchi, but the the Daughter of Lord Agni. She was no more Panchi but, Yagyaseni Draupadi.

The other three watched in amazement when the huge tornado slowly decreased to the size of a candle flame. The purpose of Draupadi's rebirth in this Kalyug was now heading towards it completion. She had now tamed the ,majestic element. But the power of the element was huge to be handled by her alone, she collapsed of ground. Her eyes slowly closed, only to see Paarth running towards her.

"The ray is ready! The Sun is on the correct inclination with the Earth. Get the crystal balls. It is time to unleash the first terror. " Iravan ordered. Ulupi walked in to him and handed him one of the crystal balls. She was afraid and not willing to take the step but she was had to submit herself to the trials of her son. She could only sense sheer destruction waiting ahead for them.

With a firm hand Iravan placed the crystal ball below the only ray of the sun, entering into the room from the minute opening on the ceiling. His eyes showed a sign of rainbow colours as the ball shone to absorb to the sunlight falling on it. Ulupi, unable to accept the strong light had to cover her eyes. Both of them feared in some place in their heart. While Iravan feared of the plan he played to fail, Ulupi was frightened of the step Iravan has taken to make the plan a success.

While Iravan watched in amazement, Ulupi was glued to her spot on the appearance of a demon-like creature from the crystal-ball. "Life!" the creature roared with happiness. "Because of me!" Iravan told him.

Bowing to respect him, the creature asked "What can I do for you master?" . "Nice that you have impressed me with the tactics you use to confused people in hell. I want you to confuse anyone who arrives here to investigate. Then pushing them down the valley behind the mansion, uniting them with their death." Iravan told him.

"Why me?" The monster asked. "Some things must be kept hidden at this point of time. You have a lot to relay to me. Better is to keep working than question you master of his deeds!" Iravan answered back, looking straight into the monster's eyes, much to his fright. "What now, Iravan?" Ulupi asked. "We have to bring the person, we want to kill, here!" Iravan replied back. "And who is that?" Iravan asked. "Vasusen!".

"What happened Vrushali?" Vasusen asked worriedly. "Any signs of the chips?" He added to his words. "No! None! I cannot trace any of them. Surely, now, they are in danger." She replied, enough to worry him even more. "Wait! So you mean they have lost their bags!" Nakul asked. "Well, yes! But that means they are not having any safety equipments." She replied back.

" But that doesn't mean that they are in danger!" Dhrishtrayumna told. "We cannot be sure of that. For me, that is surely a sign of danger.!" Vrushali told with concern. "I just what you say is true, Dhrishtradyumna!" She said, with a ray of hope in her eyes.

TBCNOTE : THIS MARKS THE END OF BUSY DAY AND THE START OF HOLIDAY DAYS FOR ME. HENCE, REGULAR UPDATES. AND THIS TIME, YOU CAN BELIEVE ME.

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes
Thanks dear... But I guess it isn't about crossing 100 or making multiple thread . I feel it is the satisfaction an author extracts by sharing her works with the readers.😊

So Very True ! Waiting For Chap. 35 !

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#767

Awesome Angie 👏
So Panchi is now the soul of Yajnaseni Draupadi who finally tamed the element of fire.
When Iravan used the crystal ball in the ray of sun & the monster came out of it. U reminded me of Alladin ka Chirag & the genie 😆 but with devious plan in his mind
But why Iravan wants to kil Vasusen 😲 😲 & what will happen to Vrushali & his rest of the family 😭

So this time u will give regular updates na... Pakka promise?? 😛

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8520NK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#768

Angela, this is really intriguing! The mystery is still on and it is increasing with each and every update! I am really looking forward to your 'regular' updates! I loved that part where Pancho tamed the fire! It was amazing and powerful! Loved it!

Please make that mother son duo die! They are becoming irritating!🤢

Parth running towards Panchali! We need some Parth-Panchalu moments also na!😳

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Awesome Angie 👏
So Panchi is now the soul of Yajnaseni Draupadi who finally tamed the element of fire.
When Iravan used the crystal ball in the ray of sun & the monster came out of it. U reminded me of Alladin ka Chirag & the genie 😆 but with devious plan in his mind
But why Iravan wants to kil Vasusen 😲 😲 & what will happen to Vrushali & his rest of the family 😭

So this time u will give regular updates na... Pakka promise?? 😛

Thanks Hemangi.

Aladdin ka Chirag and genie...😆

Regular updates... Pakka!!!!!

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Angela, this is really intriguing! The mystery is still on and it is increasing with each and every update! I am really looking forward to your 'regular' updates! I loved that part where Pancho tamed the fire! It was amazing and powerful! Loved it!
Please make that mother son duo die! They are becoming irritating!🤢
Parth running towards Panchali! We need some Parth-Panchalu moments also na!😳

Ahmm.. Why is the word regular quoted in inverted commas😆

Mother-son duo. Well they'll he around for sometime. 😛

And you will hget Paarth-Pancho moments. Wait and watch...😳